I think Vegeta beating Black in the first place was fine. It's good to see an enemy having to develop in a similar way the saiyans do for a change. What I didn't like was SS Black beating SSB after the boost, if he had done that with the rose, it would have been fixed.Baggie_Saiyan wrote:He fails to under the basic idea of tension and development. You do not have your villain beat down for an entire chapter like a chump, give him a boost and think that's job done and now a few chapters later the same villain is being beaten like a chump again. Not good storytelling at all. Again he "censored" Black compared the anime by having Bulma be killed off screen. Instead of building this villain up he opts to elongate a flashback and have the crew play video games. Trunks relationship are severely lacking any sort of development like he had in the anime. Anime had Goku and Zamasu have at least some sort of personal connection hence why that fight on the Kioshin planet kepy re-occuring in flashblack it was drove him. Back to tension he had Beerus just wipe Zamasu wheras as in the anime they build it up and showed his intent to kill Gowasu.Basako wrote:I don't agree with you. He has shown a very high quality chapter after chapter, with a superior storytelling comparing with the anime from the same origin plot lines. He is awesome.Overlord78 wrote: Toyotaro is absolutely not a great writer. He is mediocre at the very best and that's me being generous.
Now in this latest chapter Goku and Vegeta aren't even full power thus again getting rid of any tension and making the villains a former of their anime counterparts and then the icing on the cake is his obsession with SSG leading to some really downright awful writing. Not only that he's made the gag scenes a lot worse, Goku and kiss thing was completely blunt in the Manga and the seal thing made Goku look like a right knob compared to the anime where the kissing thing could be interpreted differently and Roshi didn't give him the seal.
Toyo seems to be lack the basic understanding of villains. And how to properly use and develop them. What somes it up for me is the first real fights, Black completely destroyed Vegeta thus showing he is not to be underestimated and feared, Manga he gets his ass beat by Vegeta showing he's us this guy is just a chump. Difference is uncanny.
At least Toyo's art is good. And more consistent then the anime.
Same now, remember Black and Zamasu need a reason to fuse, if they can defeat them separately, there is no point in doing that. I think this will be like the anime, Zamasu is the one more worried because he struggles with the Mafuba, so he is the one proposing the fusion. And Vegeta has trained in the RoSaT, so a power boost is justified too. Is it a lot? Maybe, but it's not gratuitous.
And there's been good tension, for example, two chapters ago we had Black about to kill Trunks. For those who say Trunks does nothing, he was crucial there. Also, Black stabbing Gowasu, after he thought he was convincing him and how he tells him then how he killed him two times before, that was a masterpiece.