MistareFusion's Dragon Ball Dissection! (Updated 4/1/24!)

Any general discussion regarding fan-created works of the Dragon Ball franchise, including AMVs, fan-art, fan-fiction, etc.

Moderators: General Help, Kanzenshuu Staff

User avatar
Mewzard
I Live Here
Posts: 2009
Joined: Wed Apr 02, 2008 9:02 pm
Location: Oklahoma
Contact:

Re: MistareFusion's Dragon Ball Dissection! (Updated 6/12/17!)

Post by Mewzard » Mon Jun 12, 2017 12:04 pm

Part 10, because even when breaking down the story, this arc is still eternal.

It's a fun ride, but damn, does it drag in places. The original anime is definitely the worst at that aspect, but even the manga and Kai could have used a bit more streamlining for the sake of a healthy pace.

I can't wait until you get to Freeza's "Five Minutes"...Five Freeza minutes are not a short period of time.

Let's hope the Tournament of Power isn't 48 Freeza minutes. >_>
RIDER KIIIIIIICK!

User avatar
coola
I Live Here
Posts: 3360
Joined: Tue May 15, 2007 7:33 am
Location: Poland

Re: MistareFusion's Dragon Ball Dissection! (Updated 6/12/17!)

Post by coola » Mon Jun 12, 2017 12:12 pm

Reading Freeza saga and watching F arc/movie, i really hope Freeza wlil "redeem" himself as character in current Super arc, in movie, he didn't learn anything since Namek, get much stronger in very short time, rush out to Earth right after getting new form without mastering it, with of course lead to his demise. As for "Freeza become less interesting and stupid when he fought" similar thing happened to Cell, he went from cunning bastard to boring Vegeta clone when he become Perfect.
My Twitter: @kamil198811
Bulma fan
Thanks to Discotek:
Magic Knight Rayearth get DVD release in 2015 and Blu-Ray release on 2016
Saint Seiya: The Lost Canvas get DVD release in 2015

User avatar
The gr
I Live Here
Posts: 2856
Joined: Sat Dec 10, 2016 9:58 pm

Re: MistareFusion's Dragon Ball Dissection! (Updated 6/12/17!)

Post by The gr » Mon Jun 12, 2017 12:26 pm

coola wrote:Reading Freeza saga and watching F arc/movie, i really hope Freeza wlil "redeem" himself as character in current Super arc, in movie, he didn't learn anything since Namek, get much stronger in very short time, rush out to Earth right after getting new form without mastering it, with of course lead to his demise. As for "Freeza become less interesting and stupid when he fought" similar thing happened to Cell, he went from cunning bastard to boring Vegeta clone when he become Perfect.
Why frieza needs to redeem himself, he's fine as the bad guy and under the circumstances is unlikely he will be revived
Mewzard wrote:Part 10, because even when breaking down the story, this arc is still eternal.

It's a fun ride, but damn, does it drag in places. The original anime is definitely the worst at that aspect, but even the manga and Kai could have used a bit more streamlining for the sake of a healthy pace.

I can't wait until you get to Freeza's "Five Minutes"...Five Freeza minutes are not a short period of time.

Let's hope the Tournament of Power isn't 48 Freeza minutes. >_>
Is gonna be the longest 48 minute in history,I don't mind it as long is entertaining,I predict it will only be 5 or 6 episode at Best,it would be slap in the face if it was only 2 episode long
Mostly active on discord.

User avatar
Rubens
Beyond-the-Beyond Newbie
Posts: 499
Joined: Fri Nov 13, 2015 6:33 pm
Location: Portugal

Re: MistareFusion's Dragon Ball Dissection! (Updated 6/12/17!)

Post by Rubens » Mon Jun 12, 2017 2:18 pm

In retrospective, I think Freeza's second and third forms shouldn't have been there altogether. Toriyama could have still make a Nappa out of Freeza's first form and dominate Vegeta, Gohan and Krillin - and Dende's healing could keep powering up the characters and increase Freeza's difficulty to keep control until Piccolo's arrival which could, then, trigger the final form. Alghouth I'm not sure if it would've been more interesting. It's possibly just like you said, the author needed to drag the story and just came up the "transformations/power-ups tennis" as it went on.
I'm back!

Lurking around here since 2014. Just an old fan who regained his passion for Dragon Ball since then.

User avatar
coola
I Live Here
Posts: 3360
Joined: Tue May 15, 2007 7:33 am
Location: Poland

Re: MistareFusion's Dragon Ball Dissection! (Updated 6/12/17!)

Post by coola » Mon Jun 12, 2017 3:08 pm

The gr wrote:
coola wrote:Reading Freeza saga and watching F arc/movie, i really hope Freeza wlil "redeem" himself as character in current Super arc, in movie, he didn't learn anything since Namek, get much stronger in very short time, rush out to Earth right after getting new form without mastering it, with of course lead to his demise. As for "Freeza become less interesting and stupid when he fought" similar thing happened to Cell, he went from cunning bastard to boring Vegeta clone when he become Perfect.
Why frieza needs to redeem himself, he's fine as the bad guy and under the circumstances is unlikely he will be revived
Mewzard wrote:Part 10, because even when breaking down the story, this arc is still eternal.

It's a fun ride, but damn, does it drag in places. The original anime is definitely the worst at that aspect, but even the manga and Kai could have used a bit more streamlining for the sake of a healthy pace.

I can't wait until you get to Freeza's "Five Minutes"...Five Freeza minutes are not a short period of time.

Let's hope the Tournament of Power isn't 48 Freeza minutes. >_>
Is gonna be the longest 48 minute in history,I don't mind it as long is entertaining,I predict it will only be 5 or 6 episode at Best,it would be slap in the face if it was only 2 episode long
By "redeem" i didnt mean to become good guy, but become more smart, not use 100% if his body cant handle it, or toy with his opponent, if he will be revived, i also want him to stay bad guy/rival to our heroes.
My Twitter: @kamil198811
Bulma fan
Thanks to Discotek:
Magic Knight Rayearth get DVD release in 2015 and Blu-Ray release on 2016
Saint Seiya: The Lost Canvas get DVD release in 2015

matt0044
Advanced Regular
Posts: 1155
Joined: Sat Feb 04, 2012 12:54 pm

Re: MistareFusion's Dragon Ball Dissection! (Updated 6/12/17!)

Post by matt0044 » Mon Jun 12, 2017 4:46 pm

Eh, at best the third form is a bit more superfluous.

User avatar
RandomGuy96
Kicks it Old-School
Posts: 8862
Joined: Sun Mar 03, 2013 3:57 pm
Location: San Diego, California, USA

Re: MistareFusion's Dragon Ball Dissection! (Updated 6/12/17!)

Post by RandomGuy96 » Mon Jun 12, 2017 6:05 pm

If you're going to do the transformation gimmick at all, I think you need the third form. That way the fourth form is a subversion of expectations, as the second form was more monstrous than the first and the third form was more monstrous than the second. If had just went small ---> big ---> small, there'd be no subversion as it hadn't been established concretely that we're expecting him to get more intimidating, unlike small ---> big ---> bigger ---> small.
The Monkey King wrote:
RandomGuy96 wrote:
dbgtFO wrote: Please elaborate as I do not know what you mean by "pushing Vegeta's destruction"
He's probably referring to the Bardock special. Zarbon was the one who first recommended destroying Planet Vegeta because the saiyans were rapidly growing in strength.
It was actually Beerus disguised as Zarbon #StayWoke
Herms wrote:The fact that the ridiculous power inflation is presented so earnestly makes me just roll my eyes and snicker. Like with Freeza, where he starts off over 10 times stronger than all his henchmen except Ginyu (because...well, just because), then we find out he can transform and get even more powerful, and then he reveals he can transform two more times, before finally coming out with the fact that he hasn't even been using anywhere near 50% of his power. Oh, and he can survive in the vacuum of space. All this stuff is just presented as the way Freeza is, without even an attempt at rationalizing it, yet the tone dictates we're supposed to take all this silly grasping at straws as thrilling danger. So I guess I don't really take the power inflation in the Boo arc seriously, but I don't take the power inflation in earlier arcs seriously either, so there's no net loss of seriousness. I think a silly story presented as serious is harder to accept than a silly story presented as silly.

Cipher
Born 'n Bred Here
Posts: 6333
Joined: Wed Oct 21, 2009 11:54 pm
Location: Nagano
Contact:

Re: MistareFusion's Dragon Ball Dissection! (Updated 6/12/17!)

Post by Cipher » Mon Jun 12, 2017 7:40 pm

I know this portion of the arc doesn't exactly hold up outside of serialization, and this is the first of two Piccolo character "arcs" to never receive pay-off, but fuck me if I don't enjoy the whole thing and find satisfaction in Piccolo's limply justified connection to his home world regardless.

Under any kind of scrutiny, the structure of the last third or so of the Namek arc leaves lots to be desired, and I think it takes the prize over the more often-cited Cell and Boo arcs as the portion of the series in which Toriyama's by-the-seat-of-his-pants process most shows its seams. That said, someway or another it manages to sell its tone of constant climax, and I'm completely along for the ride.

Shoutouts to the backgrounds in this portion of the arc, clouds and islands though they may be. They're extra-dynamically drawn.

Looking forward to your commentary on the whole Goku vs. Freeza fight and whether it successfully sells a sense of visual isolation. (For my money, it does, and it's the last fight in the series to do so.)

User avatar
RedRibbonSoldier#42
Regular
Posts: 713
Joined: Thu Feb 13, 2014 12:37 am

Re: MistareFusion's Dragon Ball Dissection! (Updated 6/12/17!)

Post by RedRibbonSoldier#42 » Mon Jun 12, 2017 8:40 pm

After Hunter x Hunter, I've been convinced that fights against overwhelmingly powerful opponents can be just as interesting as even bouts. And I felt the "I can transform again at any time" thing is necessary to fulfill the hype; to show he's a bigger threat than Vegeta and Nappa were; they could only probably kill them at any time. You can't do it with pure "feats" anymore, all the explosions look the same. And since this is the last time power level ballooning can have an impact on the reader, you might as well go all out, right?

And actually, each individual character only get one-up'd by Freeza one or two times. Vegeta when Freeza goes 2nd and 4th, Gokuu when Freeza goes full power and survives the spirit bomb, and Piccolo when Freeza goes 3rd. They're only beat down continuously as a collective, which I feel gives it at least as much tension and felling of hopelessness as the saiyan arc.

matt0044
Advanced Regular
Posts: 1155
Joined: Sat Feb 04, 2012 12:54 pm

Re: MistareFusion's Dragon Ball Dissection! (Updated 6/12/17!)

Post by matt0044 » Mon Jun 12, 2017 11:03 pm

I'm will the last two above. Also I think watching the arc on DBZ Kai, which kept the Saiyan and Freeza arcs to 54 episodes, helped make it enjoyable even when I know of its shortcomings. I guess seeing the action in motion rather than as sequential art appeals to me more.

Cipher
Born 'n Bred Here
Posts: 6333
Joined: Wed Oct 21, 2009 11:54 pm
Location: Nagano
Contact:

Re: MistareFusion's Dragon Ball Dissection! (Updated 6/12/17!)

Post by Cipher » Tue Jun 13, 2017 12:19 am

I'm past the editing window, but I stupidly wrote "visual isolation" at the end of my last post when I meant "visual escalation." Was under-coffee'd.

I also can't really stand by either anime version of this arc, though Kai's is a little more bearable (while sacrificing Z's few high highs). It's one of my favorite portions of the manga.

User avatar
RandomGuy96
Kicks it Old-School
Posts: 8862
Joined: Sun Mar 03, 2013 3:57 pm
Location: San Diego, California, USA

Re: MistareFusion's Dragon Ball Dissection! (Updated 6/12/17!)

Post by RandomGuy96 » Tue Jun 13, 2017 3:08 am

By the way, I pretty much 100% agree with you Gaffer that this fight really drags on. There's just zero point to any of it, as we're outright told that Freeza is only using a fraction of his power at the very beginning. You can't even use the "but they had to distract Freeza!", in or out of universe; because how strong they are is pretty much totally irrelevant since the fight was always going to end when Freeza wanted it to end.
The Monkey King wrote:
RandomGuy96 wrote:
dbgtFO wrote: Please elaborate as I do not know what you mean by "pushing Vegeta's destruction"
He's probably referring to the Bardock special. Zarbon was the one who first recommended destroying Planet Vegeta because the saiyans were rapidly growing in strength.
It was actually Beerus disguised as Zarbon #StayWoke
Herms wrote:The fact that the ridiculous power inflation is presented so earnestly makes me just roll my eyes and snicker. Like with Freeza, where he starts off over 10 times stronger than all his henchmen except Ginyu (because...well, just because), then we find out he can transform and get even more powerful, and then he reveals he can transform two more times, before finally coming out with the fact that he hasn't even been using anywhere near 50% of his power. Oh, and he can survive in the vacuum of space. All this stuff is just presented as the way Freeza is, without even an attempt at rationalizing it, yet the tone dictates we're supposed to take all this silly grasping at straws as thrilling danger. So I guess I don't really take the power inflation in the Boo arc seriously, but I don't take the power inflation in earlier arcs seriously either, so there's no net loss of seriousness. I think a silly story presented as serious is harder to accept than a silly story presented as silly.

User avatar
Fizzer
Advanced Regular
Posts: 1410
Joined: Thu Apr 26, 2012 5:01 pm
Location: United Kingdom

Re: MistareFusion's Dragon Ball Dissection! (Updated 6/12/17!)

Post by Fizzer » Tue Jun 13, 2017 7:38 am

Story-wise, there was no need for Freeza's middle two forms, because he never does anything with his first or third in the fight. The story could have been exactly the same if he'd stomped Krillin, Gohan and Vegeta, and fought Piccolo, in his first form, then transformed into his final form.

jcogginsa
Advanced Regular
Posts: 1204
Joined: Sat Mar 07, 2015 11:12 pm

Re: MistareFusion's Dragon Ball Dissection! (Updated 6/12/17!)

Post by jcogginsa » Tue Jun 13, 2017 11:04 am

I think a good way to play it would be to have Frieza bulk up to his 2nd form, Dominate the fight a la Nappa, then after defeating Piccolo, he reveals that he never actually transformed, he just bulked up. Then he transforms into his final form, and that's the one with the 1 Million Power Level

User avatar
ekrolo2
Kicks it Old-School
Posts: 7865
Joined: Thu Nov 20, 2014 8:27 am
Location: Split, Croatia

Re: MistareFusion's Dragon Ball Dissection! (Updated 6/12/17!)

Post by ekrolo2 » Wed Jun 14, 2017 8:10 am

This is the fight where a LOT of the series problems are firmly cemented and never go. The Fuck. Away!
When someone tells you, "Don't present your opinion as fact," what they're actually saying is, "Don't present your opinion with any conviction. Because I don't like your opinion, and I want to be able to dismiss it as easily as possible." Don't fall for it.

How the Black Arc Should End (by Lightbing!):

User avatar
Gaffer Tape
Born 'n Bred Here
Posts: 6054
Joined: Tue Dec 08, 2009 5:25 pm
Contact:

Re: MistareFusion's Dragon Ball Dissection! (Updated 7/10/17!)

Post by Gaffer Tape » Mon Jul 10, 2017 1:46 am

Goku Doesn't Belong Here - Dragon Ball Dissection: The Freeza Arc Part 11!

Now that I've made it back to a steady release schedule, it gave me more time to polish up the editing a bit and add a little more pizzazz than I usually get a chance to. Hopefully you enjoy it, and hopefully it doesn't distract from the content. Definitely some big stuff in this part: the death of Vegeta and Goku entering the fray.
Do you follow the most comprehensive and entertaining Dragon Ball analysis series on YouTube? If you do, you're smart and awesome and fairly attractive. If not, see what all the fuss is about without even having to leave Kanzenshuu:

MistareFusion's Dragon Ball Dissection Series Discussion Thread! (Updated 4/1/24!)
Current Episode: A Match Made in Hell - Dragon Ball Dissection: The Super #17 Arc Part 2

User avatar
Kid Buu
I Live Here
Posts: 4127
Joined: Fri Nov 12, 2004 4:02 am
Location: United Kingdom

Re: MistareFusion's Dragon Ball Dissection! (Updated 7/10/17!)

Post by Kid Buu » Mon Jul 10, 2017 5:45 am

Gaffer Tape wrote:Goku Doesn't Belong Here - Dragon Ball Dissection: The Freeza Arc Part 11!

Now that I've made it back to a steady release schedule, it gave me more time to polish up the editing a bit and add a little more pizzazz than I usually get a chance to. Hopefully you enjoy it, and hopefully it doesn't distract from the content. Definitely some big stuff in this part: the death of Vegeta and Goku entering the fray.
Would you prefer if Vegeta defeated Freeza and the arc ended with a Saiyan Saga rematch?

(Although I guess in this scenario the character would have to stay dead after Namek).
Last edited by Kid Buu on Mon Jul 10, 2017 6:10 am, edited 1 time in total.
Rocketman wrote:"Shonen" basically means "stupid sentimental shit" anyway, so it's ok to be anti-shonen.

User avatar
DanielSSJ
I'm, pretty, cozy, here...
Posts: 1710
Joined: Fri Feb 13, 2015 12:13 am
Location: Florida
Contact:

Re: MistareFusion's Dragon Ball Dissection! (Updated 7/10/17!)

Post by DanielSSJ » Mon Jul 10, 2017 6:03 am

Kid Buu wrote:Would you prefer if Vegeta defeated Freeza and the arc ended with a Saiyan Saga rematch?

(Although I guess in this scenario the character would have to stay dead after Namek).
I think it would've been preferable if Goku arrived earlier, interacted with people, and actually had a stake in the plot. That or Vegeta dies, and Gohan ends up beating Freeza.
My Official Unofficial Battle Power list (in-progress: updated 11/8/2022—FREEZA ARC COMPLETED)

User avatar
Kid Buu
I Live Here
Posts: 4127
Joined: Fri Nov 12, 2004 4:02 am
Location: United Kingdom

Re: MistareFusion's Dragon Ball Dissection! (Updated 7/10/17!)

Post by Kid Buu » Mon Jul 10, 2017 6:12 am

But Gohan doesn't have much of a connection to Freeza either, so for me that would just feel out of place too.
Rocketman wrote:"Shonen" basically means "stupid sentimental shit" anyway, so it's ok to be anti-shonen.

Gray Riders
Not-So-Newbie
Posts: 63
Joined: Tue May 30, 2017 8:46 pm

Re: MistareFusion's Dragon Ball Dissection! (Updated 7/10/17!)

Post by Gray Riders » Mon Jul 10, 2017 9:45 am

Great video! :thumbup:

The issue with the last half of Namek with Goku taking center stage after having zero real connection is an interesting issue.
I can't help but wonder how it would have went over if Goku took the role Bulma and the others took in the Saiyan arc--he shows up after Freeza is defeated and just takes everyone home.

Hmm...that could be fun as a thought experiment; a version of the Namek arc where Goku arrives too late to fight anyone.

Post Reply