YoungJijii's DBAfter Doujin
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Looks cool. I'm not a fan of evil Goku either, but I'd like to keep an open mind and see where this is going.
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I've always been intrigued by an Evil Goku storyline. Hell, I think that would've made for a great final arc of Dragon Ball Z with Goku's story kinda coming full circle. Obviously he'd snap out of it eventually but I think a "Kakarot Saga" would be cool.
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Has anyone translated it in English?
James Teal (Animerica 1996) wrote:When you think about it, there are a number of similarities between the Chinese-inspired Son Goku and that most American of superhero icons, Superman. Both are aliens sent to Earth shortly after birth to escape the destruction of their homeworlds; both possess super-strength, flight, super-speed, heightened senses and the ability to cast energy blasts. But the crucial difference between them lies not only in how they view the world, but in how the world views them.
Superman is, and always has been, a symbol for truth, justice, and upstanding moral fortitude–a role model and leader as much as a fighter. The more down-to-earth Goku has no illusions about being responsible for maintaining social order, or for setting some kind of moral example for the entire world. Goku is simply a martial artist who’s devoted his life toward perfecting his fighting skills and other abilities. Though never shy about risking his life to save either one person or the entire world, he just doesn’t believe that the balance of the world rests in any way on his shoulders, and he has no need to shape any part of it in his image. Goku is an idealist, and believes that there is some good in everyone, but he is unconcerned with the big picture of the world…unless it has to do with some kind of fight. Politics, society, law and order don’t have much bearing on his life, but he’s a man who knows right from wrong.
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Ajay said he did with a friend.DBZGTKOSDH wrote:Has anyone translated it in English?
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I have it all typed up in a document currently but the scans on his site are too low res to fit any text on at comfortable reading size.
I could just post the transcript here if nobody has any ideas regarding the scan size?
I could just post the transcript here if nobody has any ideas regarding the scan size?
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I say: post it here. Maybe one day we'll find a better resolution scan and then we can typeset the text. For the time being we can just read it separately.AjayLikesGaming wrote: I could just post the transcript here if nobody has any ideas regarding the scan size?
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Alright, so it's divided up into pages and panels. I've skipped over the pages that have no dialogue. I've not included all the SFX in the script either but it's not vital.
PAGE 3:
Panel 1:
Goku: "Doesn't it make you excited, Oob! Just think, we get to meet so many more powerful opponents!"
Oob: Yeah!
Panel 2:
Goku: "Right?!"
Panel 3:
Goku: "WE’RE GONNA GET EVEN STRONGER!"
Oob: "O…Okay---!!"
Goku: "No, no. Put your spirit into it. Say “Yeah!!”
PANEL 4:
Monologue: This was the story of how the Dragon Balls brought Goku and his friends on a great adventure!
This is the end of what I can show you all, but…
I’m sure that, despite what troubles may happen in the future, they will overcome them somehow.
Don’t worry, they still have the Dragon Balls!
PAGE 4:
PANEL 1:
MONOLOGUE: "That was the last scene from Dragon Ball Chapter 519 (Bye Bye, Dragon World). However, the end of one story marks the beginning of another. Let’s take a look back on the scene that kickstarts this adventure…"
PANEL 2:
Goku: "…It’s true, I have a scar. Maybe I did hit my head once…”
“…But I was too little to remember!”
PANEL 3:
Radditz: "Damnit! So that explains it!"
Goku: "Explain what?! What does it even matter?"
PANEL 4:
Roshi: “Goku! Your Grandpa Gohan once told me about the time he found a baby in the woods; a baby with a tail. He has a violent disposition and couldn’t seem to be tamed by anyone. That is, until that baby fell into a ravine, hitting his head. The boy nearly died but his inhuman life force kept him alive and he was saved.”
Panel 5:
OWN BOX: "When he awoke, his violent temper subsided and he grew into a kind-hearted boy.”
PANEL 6:
Ginyu: "…Then that can only mean you aren’t a Super Saiyan at all, are you?!”
Ginyu: “You haven’t fully become one, yet…!!”
PAGE 6:
PANEL 4:
Goku: "Th-That was quite the attack, Oob... You knocked the wind out of me a little..."
PAGE 7:
Goku: "Your attacks are too simple!”
Goku: HAAA!!!
PAGE 8:
Oob: "Th-That was a close one... I'd expect nothing less from Goku-san..."
PAGE 10:
PANEL 1:
Goku: "This is gonna be the last one... Give it your all!!!"
PANEL 2:
Oob: “…Right!”
PANEL 6:
Oob: “Aaahhhhhh…!”
PAGE 13:
Panel 1:
Oob: “It’s not over yet!”
PAGE 14:
Panel 1:
Bulma: “Something bothering you, Vegeta?”
Panel 2:
Vegeta: “It’s…nothing…”
Panel 3:
Bulma: “Oh yeah, when is Son-kun coming back…?”
Vegeta: “I don’t know.”
Panel 4:
“Really though, I can’t believe he’s the hero that protected earth.”
Small text: “Seriously though, I swear he’s just a fighting maniac. That applies to you too, Vegeta…”
PAGE 15:
Panel 1:
Oob: “Go…”
“Goku-san”
Panel 5:
Oob: “GOKU-SAN!
Panel 6:
Goku: SFX “Smirk”
PAGE 16:
Panel 1:
Oob: “A-are you okay?”
Panel 2:
Oob: “S-Something feels off! Goku-san!!”
Goku SFX “SAH!”
Panel 6:
Goku: “Hghh!”
Goku: “O-Oob!!”
PAGE 17:
Panel 1:
Oob: “Go-Goku-san…”
Panel 2:
Oob: “You scared me for a second there…”
Goku: “Haha! Sorry, Sorry!”
Panel 3: Goku: “Oob, that last attack you hit me with…that was incredible!”
Panel 4: Goku: “You almost knocked me out, that’s never happened before…”
Goku: “But I’m glad we were able to train together!”
Panel 5:
Oob: “Thank you very much…it was all thanks to you, Goku-san”
Goku: “Well...uh, I did it mostly for my sake..."
Panel 6: Oob: “Huh?”
Panel 7:
Goku: “Oh, uh…”
Goku: “Well, it turned out great anyways, right…”
Panel 8: Both: “hahahahahahhahah”
PAGE 18
Panel 1: Goku: “Oob! The training’s over now but I know you can do even better!”
“It’s now down to you to train on your own. You need to draw out the great potential you have within yourself…”
Panel 2:
Goku: “But first, you should go back to your family and let your mom know you’re safe…
Oob: “Okay…”
Oob: “Goku-san…thank you, truly.”
Panel 3:
Goku: “When you become even stronger”
Goku: “Fight me again”
SFX: *WINK*
Panel 4:
Goku: “I’ma head back home too, let’s leave it here.”
Oob: “Alright!”
PAGE 19:
Panel 1:
Oob: “See you again, Goku-san”
Goku: “Stay safe”
Panel 2:
Goku: "I bet Pan is all grown up now... I wonder if Gohan has done any training too. It really has been a good while..."
Panel 3:
Goku: “Huh…!”
“I bet Chi-chi is gonna be angry…”
Panel 4:
Goku: “Oh well! It was out of my control anyway!! I'm sure they'll forgive me for not calling for 2 years right...?”
PAGE 20:
“AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH” [Ahh Intensifies for many pages]
PAGE 22:
Piccolo: “So…Son Goku…..!”
Bottom Panel Piccolo: “DAMMIT ALL----!”
Vegeta Panels: “That damn idiot…”
“KAKARROTO!!!!”
PAGE 23:
Panel 2:
Videl: “I brought you your training gear.”
Gohan: “Thanks”
Panel 3:
Gohan: “Eeeek!”
“This is all we have?!”
Panel 4: Videl: “You said you were going to focus on your studies and that you didn't need the gi anymore!”
Panel 5: Gohan: “A-alright! It’s been a while but I’ll be going out in my Great Saiyaman getup…”
Panel 6: Pan: “Wow Dad, that’s kinda lame…”
Panel 7: Gohan: “I’m heading out for a bit!”
PAGE 24:
ALL KAIO:
Panel 3: “Go…Gokuu….”
Panel 5: “This time around…”
“We may be in real trouble…”
END.
EDIT: Found some marginally higher res scans and a much more scalable font. Working on the typesetting right now.
PAGE 3:
Panel 1:
Goku: "Doesn't it make you excited, Oob! Just think, we get to meet so many more powerful opponents!"
Oob: Yeah!
Panel 2:
Goku: "Right?!"
Panel 3:
Goku: "WE’RE GONNA GET EVEN STRONGER!"
Oob: "O…Okay---!!"
Goku: "No, no. Put your spirit into it. Say “Yeah!!”
PANEL 4:
Monologue: This was the story of how the Dragon Balls brought Goku and his friends on a great adventure!
This is the end of what I can show you all, but…
I’m sure that, despite what troubles may happen in the future, they will overcome them somehow.
Don’t worry, they still have the Dragon Balls!
PAGE 4:
PANEL 1:
MONOLOGUE: "That was the last scene from Dragon Ball Chapter 519 (Bye Bye, Dragon World). However, the end of one story marks the beginning of another. Let’s take a look back on the scene that kickstarts this adventure…"
PANEL 2:
Goku: "…It’s true, I have a scar. Maybe I did hit my head once…”
“…But I was too little to remember!”
PANEL 3:
Radditz: "Damnit! So that explains it!"
Goku: "Explain what?! What does it even matter?"
PANEL 4:
Roshi: “Goku! Your Grandpa Gohan once told me about the time he found a baby in the woods; a baby with a tail. He has a violent disposition and couldn’t seem to be tamed by anyone. That is, until that baby fell into a ravine, hitting his head. The boy nearly died but his inhuman life force kept him alive and he was saved.”
Panel 5:
OWN BOX: "When he awoke, his violent temper subsided and he grew into a kind-hearted boy.”
PANEL 6:
Ginyu: "…Then that can only mean you aren’t a Super Saiyan at all, are you?!”
Ginyu: “You haven’t fully become one, yet…!!”
PAGE 6:
PANEL 4:
Goku: "Th-That was quite the attack, Oob... You knocked the wind out of me a little..."
PAGE 7:
Goku: "Your attacks are too simple!”
Goku: HAAA!!!
PAGE 8:
Oob: "Th-That was a close one... I'd expect nothing less from Goku-san..."
PAGE 10:
PANEL 1:
Goku: "This is gonna be the last one... Give it your all!!!"
PANEL 2:
Oob: “…Right!”
PANEL 6:
Oob: “Aaahhhhhh…!”
PAGE 13:
Panel 1:
Oob: “It’s not over yet!”
PAGE 14:
Panel 1:
Bulma: “Something bothering you, Vegeta?”
Panel 2:
Vegeta: “It’s…nothing…”
Panel 3:
Bulma: “Oh yeah, when is Son-kun coming back…?”
Vegeta: “I don’t know.”
Panel 4:
“Really though, I can’t believe he’s the hero that protected earth.”
Small text: “Seriously though, I swear he’s just a fighting maniac. That applies to you too, Vegeta…”
PAGE 15:
Panel 1:
Oob: “Go…”
“Goku-san”
Panel 5:
Oob: “GOKU-SAN!
Panel 6:
Goku: SFX “Smirk”
PAGE 16:
Panel 1:
Oob: “A-are you okay?”
Panel 2:
Oob: “S-Something feels off! Goku-san!!”
Goku SFX “SAH!”
Panel 6:
Goku: “Hghh!”
Goku: “O-Oob!!”
PAGE 17:
Panel 1:
Oob: “Go-Goku-san…”
Panel 2:
Oob: “You scared me for a second there…”
Goku: “Haha! Sorry, Sorry!”
Panel 3: Goku: “Oob, that last attack you hit me with…that was incredible!”
Panel 4: Goku: “You almost knocked me out, that’s never happened before…”
Goku: “But I’m glad we were able to train together!”
Panel 5:
Oob: “Thank you very much…it was all thanks to you, Goku-san”
Goku: “Well...uh, I did it mostly for my sake..."
Panel 6: Oob: “Huh?”
Panel 7:
Goku: “Oh, uh…”
Goku: “Well, it turned out great anyways, right…”
Panel 8: Both: “hahahahahahhahah”
PAGE 18
Panel 1: Goku: “Oob! The training’s over now but I know you can do even better!”
“It’s now down to you to train on your own. You need to draw out the great potential you have within yourself…”
Panel 2:
Goku: “But first, you should go back to your family and let your mom know you’re safe…
Oob: “Okay…”
Oob: “Goku-san…thank you, truly.”
Panel 3:
Goku: “When you become even stronger”
Goku: “Fight me again”
SFX: *WINK*
Panel 4:
Goku: “I’ma head back home too, let’s leave it here.”
Oob: “Alright!”
PAGE 19:
Panel 1:
Oob: “See you again, Goku-san”
Goku: “Stay safe”
Panel 2:
Goku: "I bet Pan is all grown up now... I wonder if Gohan has done any training too. It really has been a good while..."
Panel 3:
Goku: “Huh…!”
“I bet Chi-chi is gonna be angry…”
Panel 4:
Goku: “Oh well! It was out of my control anyway!! I'm sure they'll forgive me for not calling for 2 years right...?”
PAGE 20:
“AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH” [Ahh Intensifies for many pages]
PAGE 22:
Piccolo: “So…Son Goku…..!”
Bottom Panel Piccolo: “DAMMIT ALL----!”
Vegeta Panels: “That damn idiot…”
“KAKARROTO!!!!”
PAGE 23:
Panel 2:
Videl: “I brought you your training gear.”
Gohan: “Thanks”
Panel 3:
Gohan: “Eeeek!”
“This is all we have?!”
Panel 4: Videl: “You said you were going to focus on your studies and that you didn't need the gi anymore!”
Panel 5: Gohan: “A-alright! It’s been a while but I’ll be going out in my Great Saiyaman getup…”
Panel 6: Pan: “Wow Dad, that’s kinda lame…”
Panel 7: Gohan: “I’m heading out for a bit!”
PAGE 24:
ALL KAIO:
Panel 3: “Go…Gokuu….”
Panel 5: “This time around…”
“We may be in real trouble…”
END.
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Page 17 seemed a little weird with Goku commenting on how almost being knocked out has never happened before. Vegeta clearly knocked him out cold during their brawl in the Buu saga.
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That wasn't during a fight, that was a cheap shot after they agreed to put the fight on hold to deal with Buu.KentalSSJ6 wrote:Page 17 seemed a little weird with Goku commenting on how almost being knocked out has never happened before. Vegeta clearly knocked him out cold during their brawl in the Buu saga.
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You could also use "passed out". I toyed between "knocked out" and "passed out" for a while and figured that what I went with made more sense contextually.
"Ora omowazu ishiki ga tonnjimatta annnano hajimetada..." is the line. "Ishiki ga tonnjimatta" specifically.
Literally it's something more like "Blew me unconscious" but that's uh...inappropriate.
"Ora omowazu ishiki ga tonnjimatta annnano hajimetada..." is the line. "Ishiki ga tonnjimatta" specifically.
Literally it's something more like "Blew me unconscious" but that's uh...inappropriate.
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http://ekizo.mandarake.co.jp/shop/ja/item-532022.html
Apparently it has 84 pages
Can someone scan the rest please
Apparently it has 84 pages
Can someone scan the rest please
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I like the scene where everything that makes Goku Goku is being erased. I wonder if this whole thing won't be solved by Vegeta force feeding Goku a senzu bean after beating him.
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I bought it a few days ago, but it's just some sort of pre-order, they won't ship anything before the 28th of December. Meaning I won't get it before 2015, most likely. Once I get it I will probably scan the whole book so we can have all the pages in high resolution. Unless tomac66 wants to do it, but he already scans After The Future so I would feel bad to let him do it as wellYoungMMC wrote:Can someone scan the rest please
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If you can get me the scans, I'll transfer my existing translation onto them and continue the rest. Quite enjoyed what I read so far.
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http://blog.livedoor.jp/youngjijii/arch ... 41209.htmlAjayLikesGaming wrote:If you can get me the scans, I'll transfer my existing translation onto them and continue the rest. Quite enjoyed what I read so far.
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very great thanks tomac66 !
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Wait, why do you spell Uub and Boo with different letters?Doctor. wrote:My initial reaction was that somehow Uub transferred Boo's spirit into Goku, lol.KentalSSJ6 wrote:He's still doing AF as far as I know, something about 30 volumes planned or something.Scarz wrote:Ooooooookay. I'm confused. I thought YounJiji had an AF doujinshi that's still ongoing. Is this entirely different? Is he starting over?
Also, fuck everything about evil Goku.
EDIT - Ok after closer inspection it revolves around Goku's blow to the head that removed his Saiyan nature. During a sparring session with Uub he lands a rather hard blow to Goku's head/neck. The blow causes Goku's Saiyan nature to reappear.
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