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Re: General Fan Fiction Thread

Post by FoolsGil » Fri Jun 22, 2018 6:18 pm

After 6 months, Dragonball Exiles Chapter 2 is in the 90% completion range. It needs one more scene, and then to undergo a beta read, but sometime in the next week it'll be posted. I know the first chapter didn't start the series well, but chapter 2 is an entirely different beast, I hope everyone here will check it out when its ready.

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Post by Jackalope89 » Sun Jun 24, 2018 11:14 am

Being as I read mainly cross-over fanfictions, how would people feel if I recommended some on here?

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Post by FoolsGil » Sun Jun 24, 2018 1:23 pm

Jackalope89 wrote:Being as I read mainly cross-over fanfictions, how would people feel if I recommended some on here?
I say go for it. Please post.

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Post by Jackalope89 » Sun Jun 24, 2018 2:06 pm

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Jackalope89 wrote:Being as I read mainly cross-over fanfictions, how would people feel if I recommended some on here?
I say go for it. Please post.
My pleasure.

This ongoing is a crossover between RWBY and Future Trunks' timeline Gohan. Updated fairly frequently (just last night for the latest chapter), and the crossover does alter both series' main plot.

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12310177/1 ... ar-of-Mine

This next one, while the updating is a little wonky, is a crossover between DBZ post-Buu Saga and Ranma 1/2. Rather than the main DBZ cast, it instead focuses on Videl and Akane meeting, and becoming friends. And learning about the other's crazy life.

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12723480/1 ... Than-Yours

The third one has probably the best written Freeza I've ever read. It takes place during the final part of the Namek Saga for DBZ, and Season 4 of RWBY, when Dende wishes for everyone to be wished off of Planet Namek. Forgot to specify Earth. So, they end up on Remnant, and the ensuing chaos is horrible, charming, and tense.

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12812036/1/Transposition-F

This is one of the few non-crossovers I follow (the author has a bunch of side stories and a sequel for it). It takes Bardock from Episode of Bardock, gives him a foul mouth, and a personality similar to Dragon Ball Minus, and drops him into the middle of the Great Saiyaman Arc. Later down the line, it heavily reinforces canon ships (and the author is a big time GoChi shipper), but it works. It has action, humor, and tense battle scenes. Along with Bardiccolo (read to find out).

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11161935/1 ... the-Sunset

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Post by TheGodfather93 » Mon Jun 25, 2018 2:07 am

Jackalope89 wrote:
FoolsGil wrote:
Jackalope89 wrote:Being as I read mainly cross-over fanfictions, how would people feel if I recommended some on here?
I say go for it. Please post.
My pleasure.

This ongoing is a crossover between RWBY and Future Trunks' timeline Gohan. Updated fairly frequently (just last night for the latest chapter), and the crossover does alter both series' main plot.

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12310177/1 ... ar-of-Mine

This next one, while the updating is a little wonky, is a crossover between DBZ post-Buu Saga and Ranma 1/2. Rather than the main DBZ cast, it instead focuses on Videl and Akane meeting, and becoming friends. And learning about the other's crazy life.

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12723480/1 ... Than-Yours

The third one has probably the best written Freeza I've ever read. It takes place during the final part of the Namek Saga for DBZ, and Season 4 of RWBY, when Dende wishes for everyone to be wished off of Planet Namek. Forgot to specify Earth. So, they end up on Remnant, and the ensuing chaos is horrible, charming, and tense.

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12812036/1/Transposition-F

This is one of the few non-crossovers I follow (the author has a bunch of side stories and a sequel for it). It takes Bardock from Episode of Bardock, gives him a foul mouth, and a personality similar to Dragon Ball Minus, and drops him into the middle of the Great Saiyaman Arc. Later down the line, it heavily reinforces canon ships (and the author is a big time GoChi shipper), but it works. It has action, humor, and tense battle scenes. Along with Bardiccolo (read to find out).

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11161935/1 ... the-Sunset
Is RWBY a good series?

I've considered getting into it because I saw it's quite popular among DBZ crossovers, but I found the art style a bit off-putting.
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Re: General Fan Fiction Thread

Post by Jackalope89 » Mon Jun 25, 2018 10:51 am

TheGodfather93 wrote:
Jackalope89 wrote:
FoolsGil wrote:
I say go for it. Please post.
My pleasure.

This ongoing is a crossover between RWBY and Future Trunks' timeline Gohan. Updated fairly frequently (just last night for the latest chapter), and the crossover does alter both series' main plot.

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12310177/1 ... ar-of-Mine

This next one, while the updating is a little wonky, is a crossover between DBZ post-Buu Saga and Ranma 1/2. Rather than the main DBZ cast, it instead focuses on Videl and Akane meeting, and becoming friends. And learning about the other's crazy life.

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12723480/1 ... Than-Yours

The third one has probably the best written Freeza I've ever read. It takes place during the final part of the Namek Saga for DBZ, and Season 4 of RWBY, when Dende wishes for everyone to be wished off of Planet Namek. Forgot to specify Earth. So, they end up on Remnant, and the ensuing chaos is horrible, charming, and tense.

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12812036/1/Transposition-F

This is one of the few non-crossovers I follow (the author has a bunch of side stories and a sequel for it). It takes Bardock from Episode of Bardock, gives him a foul mouth, and a personality similar to Dragon Ball Minus, and drops him into the middle of the Great Saiyaman Arc. Later down the line, it heavily reinforces canon ships (and the author is a big time GoChi shipper), but it works. It has action, humor, and tense battle scenes. Along with Bardiccolo (read to find out).

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11161935/1 ... the-Sunset
Is RWBY a good series?

I've considered getting into it because I saw it's quite popular among DBZ crossovers, but I found the art style a bit off-putting.
The animation for season 1 is a little stilted (it was Rooster Teeth's first time doing such a series), but it has improved leaps and bounds since then. The first two seasons are packed with action with comedy and a bit of slice of life stuff. Season 3 is when things get serious.

Its a good series. A lot of action, good character interaction, with an interesting story. The world building doesn't really get touched on until season 4 though, as most of it takes place in and around one place. But there's a reason why it's the 4th most used crossover anime, and in the top 20 of the non-crossovers.

I will say, it has a fair amount of slash fans that like to focus on one scene or episode to try and justify their ship.

And in the off season, Rooster Teeth even has a Chibi version that's straight comedy with its own continuity.

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Post by Kanassa » Mon Jun 25, 2018 5:25 pm

TheGodfather93 wrote:Is RWBY a good series?
It... Uh... It has nice visuals? Some of the VA's are good? The fights in the first two seasons get creative, if a little awkward at times. The world and the concepts are interesting for the most part. That's it really. Depends on what you prioritize and what you can stomach.
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Re: General Fan Fiction Thread

Post by Jackalope89 » Tue Jun 26, 2018 7:16 pm

TheGodfather93 wrote:
Jackalope89 wrote:
FoolsGil wrote:
I say go for it. Please post.
My pleasure.

This ongoing is a crossover between RWBY and Future Trunks' timeline Gohan. Updated fairly frequently (just last night for the latest chapter), and the crossover does alter both series' main plot.

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12310177/1 ... ar-of-Mine

This next one, while the updating is a little wonky, is a crossover between DBZ post-Buu Saga and Ranma 1/2. Rather than the main DBZ cast, it instead focuses on Videl and Akane meeting, and becoming friends. And learning about the other's crazy life.

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12723480/1 ... Than-Yours

The third one has probably the best written Freeza I've ever read. It takes place during the final part of the Namek Saga for DBZ, and Season 4 of RWBY, when Dende wishes for everyone to be wished off of Planet Namek. Forgot to specify Earth. So, they end up on Remnant, and the ensuing chaos is horrible, charming, and tense.

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12812036/1/Transposition-F

This is one of the few non-crossovers I follow (the author has a bunch of side stories and a sequel for it). It takes Bardock from Episode of Bardock, gives him a foul mouth, and a personality similar to Dragon Ball Minus, and drops him into the middle of the Great Saiyaman Arc. Later down the line, it heavily reinforces canon ships (and the author is a big time GoChi shipper), but it works. It has action, humor, and tense battle scenes. Along with Bardiccolo (read to find out).

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11161935/1 ... the-Sunset
Is RWBY a good series?

I've considered getting into it because I saw it's quite popular among DBZ crossovers, but I found the art style a bit off-putting.
Look, if you're wondering whether you'd like it or not, just check it out on youtube. RoosterTeeth has all the current seasons on it for free. And the episodes for the first couple of seasons rarely get over 10 minutes, so its easy to marathon through those.

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Post by ekrolo2 » Thu Jun 28, 2018 3:26 pm

What's the absolute worst idea for a fic you've ever had?
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ekrolo2 wrote:What's the absolute worst idea for a fic you've ever had?
I wrote a fanfic when I was 13 and had finished the series for the first time about Kid Boo coming back from the dead (think he escaped Hell or something), getting somehow ridiculously stronger (modern DB before its time) and being a match for SS3 Gogeta.

It's lost to time now.

Recently I had an idea about there being a tournament in Hell that would grant the winner an opportunity to return to the living; it would serve as a catalyst for Cell to come back. Obviously it's a stupid idea, because why the fuck would anyone give a villain a free chance to come back to life.

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Post by ekrolo2 » Thu Jun 28, 2018 3:35 pm

Doctor. wrote:Recently I had an idea about there being a tournament in Hell that would grant the winner an opportunity to return to the living; it would serve as a catalyst for Cell to come back. Obviously it's a stupid idea, because why the fuck would anyone give a villain a free chance to come back to life.
The only way I could possibly see this work is if the tournament was a trial of character to see who could get redeemed with a second chance.
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ekrolo2 wrote:
Doctor. wrote:Recently I had an idea about there being a tournament in Hell that would grant the winner an opportunity to return to the living; it would serve as a catalyst for Cell to come back. Obviously it's a stupid idea, because why the fuck would anyone give a villain a free chance to come back to life.
The only way I could possibly see this work is if the tournament was a trial of character to see who could get redeemed with a second chance.
I was thinking that some villain sponsors the tournament just to further cement the point that the Gods are incompetent retards that don't realize the value of the things they're supposed to govern over, but I'm not really sure about where else I'd take the idea and it would be unnecessarily antagonizing Enma who always has been one of the more competent deities.

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Post by Kanassa » Thu Jun 28, 2018 6:54 pm

ekrolo2 wrote:What's the absolute worst idea for a fic you've ever had?
Movie Villain Suicide Squad.
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Post by Polyphase Avatron » Thu Jun 28, 2018 10:27 pm

ekrolo2 wrote:What's the absolute worst idea for a fic you've ever had?
Krillin becomes evil and steals a mysterious powerful crystal and kills Chichi and tries to kill Goku and everyone on Earth.
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Post by TheGodfather93 » Fri Jun 29, 2018 3:31 am

Thanks for answering, guys. My curiosity has been piqued, so I'll check out RWBY when I have the time.
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Post by Alruneia » Fri Jun 29, 2018 4:29 pm

Jackalope89 wrote:Being as I read mainly cross-over fanfictions, how would people feel if I recommended some on here?
Crossover works are fine as long as Dragon Ball's presence in them is non-negligible. There should be more than just a tiny cameo with one or two lines.
ekrolo2 wrote:What's the absolute worst idea for a fic you've ever had?
I don't have a "good" answer for this, since it's just a minor (and now deleted) part of DBZR, but I initially wrote a whole segment about people getting freed from Hell purely for the character interaction. It didn't even fit with the villain's powers, it was pure fanservice. It was bad.
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Post by Jackalope89 » Fri Jun 29, 2018 6:33 pm

Alruneia wrote:
Jackalope89 wrote:Being as I read mainly cross-over fanfictions, how would people feel if I recommended some on here?
Crossover works are fine as long as Dragon Ball's presence in them is non-negligible. There should be more than just a tiny cameo with one or two lines.
Certainly! The crossovers I read usually have not only one of the primary characters (if not more), but some of Dragon Ball's lore as well. And some are even combined worlds. Or in the case of "This War of Mine", a combined universe.

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Post by ekrolo2 » Sun Jul 01, 2018 4:22 pm

So, who's already making plans to fix fic the Prison Planet Arc :P
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Post by Alruneia » Sun Jul 01, 2018 5:08 pm

ekrolo2 wrote:So, who's already making plans to fix fic the Prison Planet Arc :P
...I'll admit the thought did cross my mind. :shifty:
I'll leave that for someone else to take care of, though. I'd probably end up accidentally changing the plot a lot as I went along.
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