Dragon Ball: Kaisaku Chapter 1: Bardock, the Father of Goku
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Hey guys, this is a fan fiction that I've been working on for a while. I have a lot of content and will be releasing a chapter every other Friday. The format is a mix of movie and comic book script (I'm not a professional writer). I want to bring this to life one day, but I lack the time as of now in life. So, I want to get my idea out to the community. Feel free to leave feedback. There is a difference between constructive criticism and being rude. So I ask to keep it friendly and direct. Thank you for reading.
Dragon Ball: Kaisaku (Retelling)
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