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Re: Toyble DBAF [June 9, 2012] Vol 4 HD release complete

Postby macho_man » Tue Jan 29, 2013 11:27 am

Ok, I've just scanned the AF special from the awesome "DB Magazine" volume. If you like DB doujinshiis, I reccomend you to buy it!
Now, let's try to explain. The recent preview I posted days ago aren't from Toyble's AF Prologue (I refer to it in this way), but they're from another doujinshii... pheeew!
So there are just two pages from Toyble's DBAF (like written in his blog), well illustrated, and I'm pretty sure they're drawn by himself too! The last five panels are my favourites, really. Now try judging with your eyes:
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Also, I add a direct download with covers front-back and spine included:
http://www.filedropper.com/dbaf0-prologue
Is anyone interested in a nice editing for the "black and white thing"? tomac66? :mrgreen:
I'm looking forward to know what they're saying, now I'm just sitting here waiting for a translation, ahahahah... :lol:
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Re: Toyble DBAF [June 9, 2012] Vol 4 HD release complete

Postby DNA » Tue Jan 29, 2013 11:48 am

Your posts are very confusing and unhelpful. I'm not even sure what are you talking about anymore. And you've been posting pages that aren't even by Toyble?

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Re: Toyble DBAF [June 9, 2012] Vol 4 HD release complete

Postby macho_man » Tue Jan 29, 2013 11:57 am

DNA wrote:Your posts are very confusing and unhelpful. I'm not even sure what are you talking about anymore. And you've been posting pages that aren't even by Toyble?

It's not my fault if you can't understand basic english. These pages are from Toyble. If you can't understand what I'm saying, just look at the previous posts.

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Re: Toyble DBAF [June 9, 2012] Vol 4 HD release complete

Postby DNA » Tue Jan 29, 2013 12:11 pm

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DNA wrote:Your posts are very confusing and unhelpful. I'm not even sure what are you talking about anymore. And you've been posting pages that aren't even by Toyble?

It's not my fault if you can't understand basic english. These pages are from Toyble. If you can't understand what I'm saying, just look at the previous posts.

Okay, my fault, I thought you were another member and was confused by the progress of the posts. I've reread yours and understood.

So let me get this straight, we got two new pages from Toyble (the ones in your post) which are a prologue to his AF story, right?
What are the other pages you're talking about? By Sonogono? Are they related to Toyble's AF or something else?

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Re: Toyble DBAF [June 9, 2012] Vol 4 HD release complete

Postby macho_man » Tue Jan 29, 2013 2:05 pm

DNA wrote:
macho_man wrote:
DNA wrote:Your posts are very confusing and unhelpful. I'm not even sure what are you talking about anymore. And you've been posting pages that aren't even by Toyble?

It's not my fault if you can't understand basic english. These pages are from Toyble. If you can't understand what I'm saying, just look at the previous posts.

Okay, my fault, I thought you were another member and was confused by the progress of the posts. I've reread yours and understood.

So let me get this straight, we got two new pages from Toyble (the ones in your post) which are a prologue to his AF story, right?
What are the other pages you're talking about? By Sonogono? Are they related to Toyble's AF or something else?

Well, the two pages are a prologue to DBAF drawn by Toyble, it's right. Instead, the other pages contained into the volume are from the following doujinshiis: "Dragon Ball CD", "Dragon Ball 809", "SonoGono DB", "DBAF", and "Super Dragon Ball".
All these doujinshiis come from the work of SonoGono and othere mangakas, and are not related each other regarding the plots.
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Re: Toyble DBAF [June 9, 2012] Vol 4 HD release complete

Postby Menkyon DBAF » Tue Jan 29, 2013 2:35 pm

macho_man wrote:Is anyone interested in a nice editing for the "black and white thing"?


If you want to ...
I can do this
editing for the "black and white thing". :mrgreen:
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Re: Toyble DBAF [June 9, 2012] Vol 4 HD release complete

Postby macho_man » Tue Jan 29, 2013 3:05 pm

Thanks Menkyon, I know you have good skills (your avatar is drawn by youself, damn! :lol: ). I particularly hate that blur on the sides of the pages, and I've tried the best I could do with my scanner, but the volume is a trade paperback one, it's so difficult to scan.

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Re: Toyble DBAF [June 9, 2012] Vol 4 HD release complete

Postby Menkyon DBAF » Tue Jan 29, 2013 3:33 pm

macho_man wrote: particularly hate that blur on the sides of the pages, and I've tried the best I could do with my scanner, but the volume is a trade paperback one, it's so difficult to scan.

I'm downloading,
I will check the page ... :thumbup:
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Re: Toyble DBAF [June 9, 2012] Vol 4 HD release complete

Postby Tzigi » Tue Jan 29, 2013 3:36 pm

macho_man wrote:The recent preview I posted days ago aren't from Toyble's AF Prologue (I refer to it in this way), but they're from another doujinshii... pheeew!

Thanks for the scans you posted! And would you be so nice as to scan also those pages you posted previously (from this other doujinshi)? They looked great and I'd love to have them in a better quality. Thanks in advance!
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Re: Toyble DBAF [June 9, 2012] Vol 4 HD release complete

Postby Vegeta AF » Tue Jan 29, 2013 4:34 pm

Thank you for the scans :D I would love to see more and in better quality

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Re: Toyble DBAF [June 9, 2012] Vol 4 HD release complete

Postby macho_man » Tue Jan 29, 2013 8:03 pm

Tzigi wrote:Thanks for the scans you posted! And would you be so nice as to scan also those pages you posted previously (from this other doujinshi)? They looked great and I'd love to have them in a better quality. Thanks in advance!

This doujinshii is called "Super Dragon Ball" and is another sequel to DBGT. It's decently drawn, I've to admit it. I don't know who the author is, maybe SonoGono, more surely someone else. I will not scan the rest of the volume because I would risk to damage it seriously. If you like it, just buy it.
Super Dragon Ball, link to the download: http://www.filedropper.com/superdragonball
New link for DBAF 0 - Prologue (and better page 1, Menkyon please grab this for the edit): http://www.filedropper.com/dbaf0-prologue

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Re: Toyble DBAF [June 9, 2012] Vol 4 HD release complete

Postby Menkyon DBAF » Wed Jan 30, 2013 2:02 pm

macho_man wrote:New link for DBAF 0 - Prologue (and better page 1, Menkyon please grab this for the edit): http://www.filedropper.com/dbaf0-prologue


link for DBAF 0 - Prologue Edited :
https://anonfiles.com/file/5abafba8539af1d877cebf03fba96bd4 :thumbup:
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Re: Toyble DBAF [June 9, 2012] Vol 4 HD release complete

Postby macho_man » Wed Jan 30, 2013 2:12 pm

Menkyon DBAF wrote:
macho_man wrote:New link for DBAF 0 - Prologue (and better page 1, Menkyon please grab this for the edit): http://www.filedropper.com/dbaf0-prologue


link for DBAF 0 - Prologue Edited :
https://anonfiles.com/file/5abafba8539af1d877cebf03fba96bd4 :thumbup:

Many thanks, I really appreciate your work. It's absolutely perfect! Now we have to wait that someone inside or outside this forum will translate these two pages.
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Re: Toyble DBAF [June 9, 2012] Vol 4 HD release complete

Postby Menkyon DBAF » Wed Jan 30, 2013 2:33 pm

macho_man wrote:
Menkyon DBAF wrote:
macho_man wrote:New link for DBAF 0 - Prologue (and better page 1, Menkyon please grab this for the edit): http://www.filedropper.com/dbaf0-prologue


link for DBAF 0 - Prologue Edited :
https://anonfiles.com/file/5abafba8539af1d877cebf03fba96bd4 :thumbup:

Many thanks, I really appreciate your work. It's absolutaly perfect! Now we have to wait that someone inside or outside this forum will translate these two pages.

you have pages
  scanned of toyble ?...
I also edit :thumbup:
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Re: Toyble DBAF [June 9, 2012] Vol 4 HD release complete

Postby Raykugen » Wed Jan 30, 2013 3:29 pm

macho_man wrote:
Tzigi wrote:Thanks for the scans you posted! And would you be so nice as to scan also those pages you posted previously (from this other doujinshi)? They looked great and I'd love to have them in a better quality. Thanks in advance!

This doujinshii is called "Super Dragon Ball" and is another sequel to DBGT. It's decently drawn, I've to admit it. I don't know who the author is, maybe SonoGono, more surely someone else. I will not scan the rest of the volume because I would risk to damage it seriously. If you like it, just buy it.
Super Dragon Ball, link to the download: http://www.filedropper.com/superdragonball
New link for DBAF 0 - Prologue (and better page 1, Menkyon please grab this for the edit): http://www.filedropper.com/dbaf0-prologue


I think, "Super Dragon Ball, is done by various artists, it has different styles, and most of them awful. I'm pretty sure the page 82 is done by Toyble. Thank you again, Machoman^^
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Postby macho_man » Wed Jan 30, 2013 3:45 pm

Raykugen wrote:I think, "Super Dragon Ball, is done by various artists, it has different styles, and most of them awful. I'm pretty sure the page 82 is done by Toyble. Thank you again, Machoman^^

I guess you're right, it would make sense just because "Super Dragon Ball" is also the name of the magazine, and this story is located in the latest pages of it. I'm pretty sure this is the only one doujinshi in this magazine that joins together many doujinshi mangakas... and those pit and rocks at page 82 are so very very detailed for being drawn by SonoGono! :lol:

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Re: Toyble DBAF [June 9, 2012] Vol 4 HD release complete

Postby macho_man » Wed Jan 30, 2013 4:50 pm

Oh, I've some sketches from SonoGono's blog regarding the "Super Dragon Ball" project, maybe someone could find them interesting.
Where do you think is the toyble involvement in these?
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Re: Toyble DBAF [June 9, 2012] Vol 4 HD release complete

Postby macho_man » Fri Feb 08, 2013 3:54 pm

Many thanks to Meian for the first rough translation and to kei17 for having revised it as well. :clap:
So if desirecampbell would like to resume his own role with using the following scans (just cleaned without speechs and restored), all is ready for the typesetting: http://www34.zippyshare.com/v/98129535/file.html
And this is the translation:

First issue special guest
Dragon Ball AF: Episode Zero
- The promise with Shen Long -
Manga: toyble
_________________________________

The final decisive battle
with the Evil Dragons...
_________________________________

RUMBLE...
_________________________________

Goku, who was hit by Omega Shenlong's
last attack, used up all his strength
and eventually lost his life.
_________________________________

Rise...
_________________________________

(Fuwa) = an onomatopoeia used when something floats.
_________________________________

It looks like I died again...
_________________________________

Son Goku...
_________________________________

Shenlong!?
_________________________________

What?
You can see me?
Does that mean you're dead too?
_________________________________

That's not the case.
My entity on the Earth has been
destroyed by Omega Shen Long,
and I am now in a spiritual form...
_________________________________

Son Goku...!
Would you listen to two wishes
I have?
_________________________________

Shenlong wishes something from me?
What a rare event!
_________________________________

For one I want you to defeat
Omega Shen Long and liberate
my soul.
_________________________________

What are you saying, Shenlong?
I'm dead so I can't fight any longer.
_________________________________

If I use up my remaining power,
it's possible for me to bring you
back to life for a few minutes.
_________________________________

Really!!?
_________________________________

But I need you to listen to my
second wish as well.
_________________________________

I want you to supply your body
for my entity.
_________________________________

Would you then come with me to
the *Ryuoshin's Sacred Realm?
* (or Sacred World of the Dragon King)
_________________________________

...!
What's that?
The "Ryuoshin's Sacred Realm"...?
_________________________________

It is my home.
It is a world which is completely
cut off from the external world.
_________________________________

Once you enters there, you cannot go out
unless you are summoned by the dragon balls.
_________________________________

... I don't quite understand it,
but anything's okay if I'll be
brought back to life!
_________________________________

I have to beat that Li Shenlong!
_________________________________

Is that really okay?
You won't be able to see your
friends again.
_________________________________

Yeah, no problem.
_________________________________

I have to listen to your wish too
for a change!
_________________________________

Thank you Shenlong for listening
to our wishes this whole time!
_________________________________

Thank you, Son Goku.
_________________________________

Flash
_________________________________

And so the resurrected Goku
defeated Omega Shen Long,
then vanished into The Sacred World
of the Dragon King according to
his promise...
_________________________________

To be continued... (to be continued
in DBAF)
_________________________________

Nice to meet you, I'm toyble.
Congratulations on the launch of Super DB.
Thanks to Omada-sama's courtesy he let me participate as a guest
and draw these two pages this time.
Since a simple cheering illustration wouldn't be any fun,
I wanted to stick close to some concept... that's what I thought,
but because I'm already drawing a sequel called DBAF myself I
eventually decided to draw some kind of prologue.
In other words, I'm advertising, lol. I'm sorry m(_ _)m
I'll keep praying from the bottom of my heart for a leap forward
of the general development of Dragonball doujinshi in the future.
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Re: Toyble DBAF [June 9, 2012] Vol 4 HD release complete

Postby Raykugen » Sat Feb 09, 2013 8:52 am

Very interesting, not too much different to my interpretation of the DBGT ending
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Re: Toyble DBAF [June 9, 2012] Vol 4 HD release complete

Postby Vegeta AF » Sat Feb 09, 2013 8:33 pm

What about the translation for Volume 4.5?


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