NeptuneKai wrote:Metalwario64 wrote:I am not going to lie and say your work is on a "Professional" level so-to-speak, but I am going to give you some constructive criticism: It really leaves much to be desired. There are no proportions, the hands look like he's holding cigars, and he looks really fat!(:P)
Now I am going to say this, and I mean no offense or insult by it, but you should really invest in some artist anatomy books. Learning proportions and figure drawing will really help you in a pinch! I started out about the same as you, and if I get around to it I will post some new drawings to show my latest developments in my skill. I am by no means a pro, but I am working on getting there. Good luck!
Listen to this man, don't end up like Kenshi and refuse criticism. That will end up screwing you over in the long run. Kenshi is sitting down right now drawing his mutated spaghetti monsters thinking he's the shit because he wouldn't listen to anyone’s honest opinions.
Anyway I think your drawings are decent and with a little work they will end up okay.
Yeah, I'll take criticisms. Wow, now that I look at that drawing, there are tons of problems with it. Like his left hand looks weird (as you, Metalwario64 said), his right arm doesn't proportionally meet with his left arm, and as you said he's fat. I'll try to re-make at some point and make try to make it look better. I think the reason he looks way fatter than I drew him was, my scanner did this weird thing with this drawing and zoomed in on it. But, the disproportionate arms and hands, my fault.
Haha, you're right. With the actual Toriyama SSJ4 all I did was Grayscale it and colored in the rest of the hair. No point in lying about it.
Yeah, I also know my drawings aren't the best, but they aren't the worst.
I love how he started bashing Dragon Ball Z after people were trying to help him out. Either that or after everyone found that "one picture" in his PB account...
. Well, I guess this post becomes a question, then.
