Toyble DBAF [June 9, 2012] Vol 4 HD release complete

Any general discussion regarding fan-created works of the Dragon Ball franchise, including AMVs, fan-art, fan-fiction, etc.

Moderators: Kanzenshuu Staff, General Help

User avatar
Vegeta AF
Not-So-Newbie
Posts: 57
Joined: Tue Jun 21, 2011 5:20 pm

Re: Toyble DBAF [June 9, 2012] Vol 4 HD release complete

Postby Vegeta AF » Fri Feb 07, 2014 9:35 pm


Download Volume 5 Draft Pages
http://www.mediafire.com/download/49ilm ... +Draft.rar


User avatar
macho_man
Beyond Newbie
Posts: 276
Joined: Mon Feb 15, 2010 3:46 pm
Contact:

Re: Toyble DBAF [June 9, 2012] Vol 4 HD release complete

Postby macho_man » Sat Feb 08, 2014 8:40 am

So, with the fifth volume almost finished with 54 pages (64 pages in total for every volume) I think the story will be concluded in the sixth volume... maybe. Yes, maybe because 7 would be a more snappy number! :lol:

User avatar
DBZGTKOSDH
Namekian Warrior
Posts: 12401
Joined: Sat Jul 02, 2011 7:45 pm
Location: Greece

Re: Toyble DBAF [June 9, 2012] Vol 4 HD release complete

Postby DBZGTKOSDH » Sat Feb 08, 2014 9:08 am

That was great. And Yamhan looks so ugly (both here & in DBZ2)... but that's the cool thing about him. :P
James Teal (Animerica 1996) wrote:When you think about it, there are a number of similarities between the Chinese-inspired Son Goku and that most American of superhero icons, Superman. Both are aliens sent to Earth shortly after birth to escape the destruction of their homeworlds; both possess super-strength, flight, super-speed, heightened senses and the ability to cast energy blasts. But the crucial difference between them lies not only in how they view the world, but in how the world views them.

Superman is, and always has been, a symbol for truth, justice, and upstanding moral fortitude–a role model and leader as much as a fighter. The more down-to-earth Goku has no illusions about being responsible for maintaining social order, or for setting some kind of moral example for the entire world. Goku is simply a martial artist who’s devoted his life toward perfecting his fighting skills and other abilities. Though never shy about risking his life to save either one person or the entire world, he just doesn’t believe that the balance of the world rests in any way on his shoulders, and he has no need to shape any part of it in his image. Goku is an idealist, and believes that there is some good in everyone, but he is unconcerned with the big picture of the world…unless it has to do with some kind of fight. Politics, society, law and order don’t have much bearing on his life, but he’s a man who knows right from wrong.

L·Lawliet
Not-So-Newbie
Posts: 60
Joined: Tue Apr 09, 2013 12:37 am

Re: Toyble DBAF [June 9, 2012] Vol 4 HD release complete

Postby L·Lawliet » Mon Feb 10, 2014 10:07 am

Image

User avatar
Xevious
Newbie
Posts: 47
Joined: Mon Apr 04, 2011 9:03 am

Re: Toyble DBAF [June 9, 2012] Vol 4 HD release complete

Postby Xevious » Fri Feb 21, 2014 11:41 am

macho_man wrote:I hope that someone will translate this and the 2nd past 2-pages-special from august, still untranslated.
Here it is: http://imgur.com/a/EGxzv (or uncompressed here)
I doubt anyone is going to translate Volume 5 until the final version is released though.

JacobYBM wrote:I wonder if Toyble is trying to get this finished with so he can end the series before Toyotarou takes off too much?
I just hope he's trying his best to finish Volume 5 before the next summer Comiket, but you might be right.

User avatar
VegettoEX
Kanzenshuu Co-Owner & Administrator
Posts: 15416
Joined: Sat Jan 10, 2004 3:10 pm
Location: New Jersey
Contact:

Re: Toyble DBAF [June 9, 2012] Vol 4 HD release complete

Postby VegettoEX » Fri Feb 21, 2014 11:51 am

L·Lawliet, why are you posting that image? What is it from? What do you want to say about it? What do you want to hear others say about it?
:: [| Michael "VegettoEX" LaBrie |] ::
:: [| Kanzenshuu |] - [| VegettoEX.com |] ::

User avatar
macho_man
Beyond Newbie
Posts: 276
Joined: Mon Feb 15, 2010 3:46 pm
Contact:

Re: Toyble DBAF [June 9, 2012] Vol 4 HD release complete

Postby macho_man » Fri Feb 21, 2014 6:24 pm

Xevious wrote:
macho_man wrote:I hope that someone will translate this and the 2nd past 2-pages-special from august, still untranslated.
Here it is: http://imgur.com/a/EGxzv (or uncompressed here)
I doubt anyone is going to translate Volume 5 until the final version is released though.

JacobYBM wrote:I wonder if Toyble is trying to get this finished with so he can end the series before Toyotarou takes off too much?
I just hope he's trying his best to finish Volume 5 before the next summer Comiket, but you might be right.

Wow! Many thanks, really! It's awesome!

User avatar
Tzigi
Regular
Posts: 557
Joined: Fri Jul 25, 2008 4:36 am
Location: Litzmannstadt
Contact:

Re: Toyble DBAF [June 9, 2012] Vol 4 HD release complete

Postby Tzigi » Sat Feb 22, 2014 4:43 am

Xevious wrote:
macho_man wrote:I hope that someone will translate this and the 2nd past 2-pages-special from august, still untranslated.
Here it is: http://imgur.com/a/EGxzv (or uncompressed here)

Wow, thanks a lot! BTW, those two pages about the end of GT are great in translation! Toyble has actually managed to make the last scene of GT work perfectly and provide a great closure to the story.

Why couldn't he help write GT when it aired..?

User avatar
Vegeta AF
Not-So-Newbie
Posts: 57
Joined: Tue Jun 21, 2011 5:20 pm

Re: Toyble DBAF [June 9, 2012] Vol 4 HD release complete

Postby Vegeta AF » Sat Feb 22, 2014 2:14 pm

Xevious wrote:Here it is: http://imgur.com/a/EGxzv (or uncompressed here)
I doubt anyone is going to translate Volume 5 until the final version is released though.

Thank you macho_man for the scans and thank you Xevious for the translations!

User avatar
macho_man
Beyond Newbie
Posts: 276
Joined: Mon Feb 15, 2010 3:46 pm
Contact:

Re: Toyble DBAF [June 9, 2012] Vol 4 HD release complete

Postby macho_man » Mon Feb 24, 2014 6:41 am

Many thanks to Maikeru for the partial translation.
Image

User avatar
BlazingBarrrager
I Live Here
Posts: 2029
Joined: Mon Feb 17, 2014 9:07 am
Location: Space USA
Contact:

Re: Toyble DBAF [June 9, 2012] Vol 4 HD release complete

Postby BlazingBarrrager » Mon Feb 24, 2014 7:07 am

Kind of hard to see tbh.

User avatar
goku the krump dancer
I Live Here
Posts: 2589
Joined: Sat Sep 12, 2009 10:34 pm

Re: Toyble DBAF [June 9, 2012] Vol 4 HD release complete

Postby goku the krump dancer » Mon Feb 24, 2014 12:07 pm

Vegeta toggling the Super Saiyan forms and keeping Xicor at bay like that despite technically not being as strong as him is pretty cool. Toyble may actually be on to something.
Last edited by goku the krump dancer on Tue Feb 25, 2014 11:26 am, edited 1 time in total.
It's not too late. One day, it will be.

User avatar
Tzigi
Regular
Posts: 557
Joined: Fri Jul 25, 2008 4:36 am
Location: Litzmannstadt
Contact:

Re: Toyble DBAF [June 9, 2012] Vol 4 HD release complete

Postby Tzigi » Mon Feb 24, 2014 2:39 pm

goku the krump dancer wrote:Vegeta toggling Super Saiyan forms like that and keepin Toyble at bay like that despite technically not being as strong as him is pretty cool. Toyble may actually be on to something.

You meant Zaiko/Xicor, didn't you? Or maybe you consider Zaiko a self-insert character for Toyble? :)

User avatar
hulkty
Banned
Posts: 766
Joined: Tue Sep 14, 2010 11:03 pm

Re: Toyble DBAF [June 9, 2012] Vol 4 HD release complete

Postby hulkty » Mon Feb 24, 2014 6:40 pm

macho_man wrote:Many thanks to Maikeru for the partial translation.
Image


Is "MAX" supposed to mean "mastered"? As in Mastered SSj or MSSj?

If so, that means by Toyble's writing that Broly's LSSj transformation is literally just a Ultra SSj/USSj transformation. (Same as Future Trunks used against Cell)

User avatar
macho_man
Beyond Newbie
Posts: 276
Joined: Mon Feb 15, 2010 3:46 pm
Contact:

Re: Toyble DBAF [June 9, 2012] Vol 4 HD release complete

Postby macho_man » Tue Feb 25, 2014 2:03 am

Yes, maybe it stands for the "full power super saiyan" form (http://dragonball.wikia.com/wiki/Full-P ... per_Saiyan), and I remember that Goku reached it in DBZ (Cell Saga, in ssj 1 state versus Cell and in other filler occasions) and DBGT (Baby Saga, ssj 4 state when Trunks, Goten, Gohan and Pan have been lending their energy to Goku, which emerged renewed and immediately after he defeated definitely Baby).
And yes, Broly's transformation could be an ultra super saiyan MAX form, but a more particular one, just because in ssj 1 form he can transform with cyan hair/golden hair. After all, his form mixed with pure rage could be definited "legendary"...? :?

User avatar
goku the krump dancer
I Live Here
Posts: 2589
Joined: Sat Sep 12, 2009 10:34 pm

Re: Toyble DBAF [June 9, 2012] Vol 4 HD release complete

Postby goku the krump dancer » Tue Feb 25, 2014 11:25 am

Tzigi wrote:
goku the krump dancer wrote:Vegeta toggling the Super Saiyan forms and keepin Xicor at bay like that despite technically not being as strong as him is pretty cool. Toyble may actually be on to something.

You meant Zaiko/Xicor, didn't you? Or maybe you consider Zaiko a self-insert character for Toyble? :)


Lol Whoops.. Fixed
It's not too late. One day, it will be.

User avatar
KentalSSJ6
Born 'n Bred Here
Posts: 6471
Joined: Sun Dec 02, 2012 8:03 am
Location: Chicago, Illinois.

Re: Toyble DBAF [June 9, 2012] Vol 4 HD release complete

Postby KentalSSJ6 » Wed Feb 26, 2014 2:44 pm

Basically Toyble took LSSJ, and just made it into another grade. Makes anyone capable of using it and removes the legendary aspect from the form.

Good.

User avatar
DBZGTKOSDH
Namekian Warrior
Posts: 12401
Joined: Sat Jul 02, 2011 7:45 pm
Location: Greece

Re: Toyble DBAF [June 9, 2012] Vol 4 HD release complete

Postby DBZGTKOSDH » Wed Feb 26, 2014 6:49 pm

KentalSSJ6 wrote:Basically Toyble took LSSJ, and just made it into another grade. Makes anyone capable of using it and removes the legendary aspect from the form.

Good.

The truth is, we were never told that the Legendary Super Saiyan form was exclusive to Broli, and no one else can achieve it. All we are told is that Broli evolved differently from the good Saiyans (who mastered SS and went from it to Grade 2, Grade 3, SS2, and SS3).

Personally, I view it as a form beyond Super Saiyan Grade 3 that only evil Super Saiyans can achieve.
James Teal (Animerica 1996) wrote:When you think about it, there are a number of similarities between the Chinese-inspired Son Goku and that most American of superhero icons, Superman. Both are aliens sent to Earth shortly after birth to escape the destruction of their homeworlds; both possess super-strength, flight, super-speed, heightened senses and the ability to cast energy blasts. But the crucial difference between them lies not only in how they view the world, but in how the world views them.

Superman is, and always has been, a symbol for truth, justice, and upstanding moral fortitude–a role model and leader as much as a fighter. The more down-to-earth Goku has no illusions about being responsible for maintaining social order, or for setting some kind of moral example for the entire world. Goku is simply a martial artist who’s devoted his life toward perfecting his fighting skills and other abilities. Though never shy about risking his life to save either one person or the entire world, he just doesn’t believe that the balance of the world rests in any way on his shoulders, and he has no need to shape any part of it in his image. Goku is an idealist, and believes that there is some good in everyone, but he is unconcerned with the big picture of the world…unless it has to do with some kind of fight. Politics, society, law and order don’t have much bearing on his life, but he’s a man who knows right from wrong.

User avatar
Raykugen
Regular
Posts: 661
Joined: Tue May 03, 2011 2:15 pm
Location: Spain
Contact:

Re: Toyble DBAF [June 9, 2012] Vol 4 HD release complete

Postby Raykugen » Thu Feb 27, 2014 4:32 pm

Hi, I'm selling my Toyble's 4 AF volumes + Zero if anyone is interested^^
viewtopic.php?f=7&t=26489&p=762985#p762985
Do you want NEW GENERATION DRAGON BALL (Z, GT..) IMAGES? In HQ? Of all characters? Click here: http://daizex.fanboyreview.net/viewtopic.php?t=17178
My Deviantart: http://raykugen.deviantart.com/
Dragon Ball Characters Project Deviantart: http://dbcproject.deviantart.com/


Return to “Fan-Created Works”

Who is online

Users browsing this forum: Darkblade1995, shadowmaria and 5 guests