Kanzenshuu

Ch. 12 & 13: Chapter 12: Life or Death Battles on M2, Part III [/u][/b] ​ All of the metal enveloping the planet M2 began to convulse and wriggle in synchronization with the infant-possessed Rild. “D-Dammit! Rild’s power has gone higher than ever before, with that infant machine mutant at the he...

Ch. 10 & 11: Chapter 10: Life or Death Battles on M2, Part I [/u][/b] ​ About a month after the Dragon Trio’s stop at the desert planet of Rudeze, OctoPUS 9000 was in pursuit from a series of alien militia forces. “Geez! I keep shooting them and shooting them, but they just won’t give an inch! B...

Ch. 8 and 9 (the end of the UDB arc): Chapter 8: The Lord Lood War, Part II ​ The transformed Mutchi started flailing his whip-like arm appendages at Trunks and Piccolo with rapidly increasing speed. “He’s starting slow, but his whip-arms are speeding up fast! Is he just toying with us until we run ...

My age is in my profile. I will turn the double of the square of 4 in less than 2 months.

The narrative would be absolutely bonkers if Cell were still only relative to roughly half of Gohan's full power. Cell openly states that he powered up to a level like Son Gohan, which no doubt refers to his newly attained SSJ2 form, and he even has an identical aura to match - lightning and all. To...

The arc was a mess with the ridiculously convoluted and paradoxical time travel even prior to the ending, but the ending itself was also bogus. I at least give the anime a very small brownie point for trying to justify Zeno erasing the entire timeline by having Zamasu become one with said timeline i...

Here are ch.6 and 7: Chapter 6: Zunama the Terrible... Or Is He? [/b]​ “Gill! Gill! Energy insufficient,” said the newest recruit on the intergalactic journey, “recharge required, recharge required!” “Jeez, what’s up with this guy?” complained Pan, “we gave him a good chunk of our spaceship’s power ...

Hellspawn28 wrote: ↑Sat Jan 13, 2024 2:42 pm You're off to a good start. I like this way more than the first episode of GT.

Can you comment on the other chapters I've posted?

Chapter 4: Planet Imegga, Part II​ [/b][/u] “What was that?” said Trunks, startled, “I just felt an intense Ki!” "Yes, I felt it as well," replied Piccolo, "and then it vanished... as quickly as it came. I couldn't even pinpoint its location. Whoever is giving off this Ki, he's good....

Thanks. Here are the next batch of chapters. I've written a whopping 4 dozen so far, so it'll be posted gradually as I gain more readership (Plus, this forum prohibits multi-posting without sizable intervals between posts) :crazy: Chapter 2: In Which We Meet Mr. Kaiba ​ A few hours after the events ...

GT sucks and there are a million things I'd sooner recommend, but it does have some good ideas and concepts. To try and make the most of them I wrote a fanfiction improving upon GT and making it a more concrete story that focuses on the new generation. Constructive criticism is welcome. Chapter 1: P...

That's... almost the opposite of what's being discussed here. The creators wanted an Asian and an Indian from the getgo, and the studio wanted to force them to make it a white and black guy: that's an example of the studio trying to make the movie LESS diverse and not more diverse. Kind of wish you...

Tbf Blue wasn't a pedophile in the original work, just a generic bad guy. The anime adaptation was what added the pedophilic aspects to his character.

Mostly for GT characters as that was an anime-only work. I'm more used to saying Don Kee, Mutchy Mutchy etc. than the Japanese incarnations.

That's something I can't say for most of the current generation's attempts at female inclusivity because almost all the diversity-conscious movies suck and make the concept of female and POC representation look worse than it has to. Just look at Terminator: Dark Fate. Shitty movie, and it failed to...

Calling out the entirety of my argument in strawman terms to call me white supremacist for disagreeing with you is exactly what I mean by the oversimplification - and ad hominem as well - from the left. Projection is another thing the right loves to do. In this case- Claiming that I oversimplified ...

She got cast because she had the best singing voice of the actress who auditioned. https://www.huffpost.com/entry/the-little-mermaid-halle-bailey-director-sing_n_64492f86e4b039ec4e824a0d ....to play a mythical half human half fish lady, something that doesn't actually exist and isn't race specific....

To be fair everyone should ignore reddit posts and screenshots, it should probably never be the crux of an argument. In this case I saw it as relevant considering we have stuff like black actresses playing Cleopatra and other historically inaccurate nonsense these days. I don't even think diversity...

https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/1027096865918963764/1194443202829226064/Screenshot_2024-01-09-16-50-39-19_b72a20be883aec8a014bd2b7c7038e87.jpg?ex=65b05eeb&is=659de9eb&hm=95f520906eed6f3db46e0d9adf0f05e1b0d9a502fb4719e28f0838af771e4432& Forced diversity exists and has plagued nume...

https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/1027096865918963764/1194443202829226064/Screenshot_2024-01-09-16-50-39-19_b72a20be883aec8a014bd2b7c7038e87.jpg?ex=65b05eeb&is=659de9eb&hm=95f520906eed6f3db46e0d9adf0f05e1b0d9a502fb4719e28f0838af771e4432& Forced diversity exists and has plagued nume...