Kanzenshuu

Reading fanfiction in present tense always looks strange to me, but I like this so far. I like it, but: Caway's from Universe 4. Dr Rota's from Universe 6. Jimeze is from Universe 2. Thanks for reading, guys! Ugh, universe mix-ups! I don't know why, but I keep getting U3 and U4 confused in typing! ...

Well, even Krillin's saving of Android 18 is pretty dumb and shouldn't have worked. He used a ki blast to prevent himself and Android 18 from falling. If that's not a "skill to prevent falling," then I don't know what is, and obviously Krillin is not on Jiren's level, or above Goku's eith...

Well, even Krillin's saving of Android 18 is pretty dumb and shouldn't have worked. He used a ki blast to prevent himself and Android 18 from falling. If that's not a "skill to prevent falling," then I don't know what is, and obviously Krillin is not on Jiren's level, or above Goku's either.

Give me one example of the characters flying that wasn't caused by the force of a ki blast, as in the case of the spirit bomb pushing Goku back in the air. Every single time someone says they broke the flying rule they fail to see that characters are either jumping or floating downwards. I believe ...

I see a lot of people talking about how pretty much every character is beyond Super Buuhan level by this point, but I can't for the life of me see how or why. Let me start from the beginning. At the start of Super, we've got Goku back on top, he's probably about the same strength as he was in the Bu...

In hope the Namekians blows Gohan away somewhere so Piccolo can 2 vs 1 them. Even though he won't go away. Base Gohan is stronger than Piccolo, so if the U6 Namekians blow Gohan away, Piccolo is beyond fucked if he has to fight them by himself. That is completely wrong Base Goku tangles with Final ...

https://cdn.shopify.com/s/files/1/0410/1053/files/dragonballsuper-universe7_large.jpg?v=1501029916 Tournament of Power Remix Chapter 2: Lights Out! Tournament Standings [spoiler] 76 /80 fighters remaining! Universe 2 members: Brianne de Chateau • Hermila • Dr. Rota (Eliminated) • Prum • Rabanra • S...

So this is really about 'deserved' so much as want or like. In Goku's case, while I feel no character 'deserved' anything, I would say Goku earned UI since it was something he has been working for since Resurrection 'F'. Granted, the way he got it was a freak accident that should have killed him, b...

It would be nice, in my opinion, for Vegeta to have a bone thrown him, like I'd like to think he's got a mastered SSB state that puts him level with Goku SSBKKx10, but he's nowhere near Jiren's league and if they tried to give him anything remotely close to Ultra Instinct it would be crazy. Persona...

The first chapter of my fanfic ToP re-write is complete if anyone wants to read it in full and give feedback. I'll be working on getting the second episode up within the next couple of days! Cheers! EDIT: Now the question becomes... do I want to move forward with a big universe erasure so quickly af...

It would be nice, in my opinion, for Vegeta to have a bone thrown him, like I'd like to think he's got a mastered SSB state that puts him level with Goku SSBKKx10, but he's nowhere near Jiren's league and if they tried to give him anything remotely close to Ultra Instinct it would be crazy. Personal...

I don't think so. If Vegeta's not even strong enough to take on Toppo, then I'll be sorely disappointed. Even so, Freeza and Vegeta working together should be plenty for Toppo and Dyspo. Either of them would trash Dyspo almost immediately, and then the two of them would be free to overwhelm Toppo, I...

What if it involves Gohan, considering its the Ultimate Saiyan showdown, Gohan should take part of it, it would be good if he finally is separated from Piccolo. In hope the Namekians blows Gohan away somewhere so Piccolo can 2 vs 1 them. Even though he won't go away. Base Gohan is stronger than Pic...

Oh yeah, the U6 Namekseijins have popped up. Perhaps some cool stuff with Piccolo is on the way. It's concerning though, because after this encounter... Piccolo may not be in-play much longer (Noooooo). Whatever happens, I just need to see the Gekiretsu Kodan!! Please, Super . If Piccolo and Gohan ...

Zamasu55 wrote:Bergamo's from U9.

Yep, definitely a mix-up. Thanks!

Narratively, in the build up to the tournament it seemed incredibly obvious to me that they were showing us Gohan had reached a level equivalent to Super Saiyan Blue Goku. He sparred with Goku and Gohan decided regular old Blue wasn't challenging enough for him, he wanted his dad to use more power, ...

Levitation =/= flying. So let me get this straight, it's okay to leveitate? I don't think the rules are this fine set.. Daishinkan never said levitation was disabled, only flying. Seeing how those are two completely different things, I don't see why Jiren being able to levitate is an issue. In fact...

Anyone here have any interest in reading or even giving me feedback for the re-write I'm working on of the Tournament of Power? The general gist is I plan to make the fighting a bit more serious, savage, and sensible. If a fighter has the chance to knock an opponent out, they're going to take it. No...

https://cdn.shopify.com/s/files/1/0410/1053/files/dragonballsuper-universe7_large.jpg?v=1501029916 Tournament of Power Remix Chapter 1: Survive! Writer's Note: [spoiler]So, in the interest of, well, making the tournament a bit more interesting, I've decided to start a rewrite from the ground up. I ...

What? The subject is Jirens power and Vados says that it's far beyond comprehension. Therefore Vados is talking about Jirens power. Yet you're claiming that somehow Vados can be talking about anything else but power. No, just no. I'm not saying that Vados is talking about anything other than power....