Fanmanga - another DBAF

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Re: Fanmanga - another DBAF

Post by Xevious » Fri Nov 08, 2013 5:48 am

I'm not really a translator, but I do have a Kanzenshuu account, and I do check this topic on a regular basis.
I'm just not quite a talkative person, so I hardly ever post on here.

But I will take this opportunity to thanks everyone involved in this project, especially: Star_rot, Herms, tomac66 and Sbjoern. Also, I'd like to thanks you guys and all the readers. It's nice to see that besides the flaws and all the criticism, some people are actually still interested in this doujinshi.
I know Young Jijii is going to release an updated version of the first 10 Volumes during the next Winter Comiket, and I'm planning on buying them all. However, I'm not sure it'd be worth scanning, editing and scanlating the whole 800 pages all over again, so I don't know if I'll update the previous scanlations once it's released. We'll see, I guess...

Last but not least, a friendly reminder: if you really like this doujin, you can support the author by buying his books from Mandarake, here. Do not buy from reseller. Some of them are even using the scans to print the books on their own and sell them at a higher price than Young Jijji.

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Re: Fanmanga - another DBAF

Post by goku1234 » Tue Nov 12, 2013 2:39 pm

new update on vol. 11 11/12/13
http://blog.livedoor.jp/youngjijii/arch ... 08945.html
@Xevious - so what your position if your not the "main" english translate?

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Re: Fanmanga - another DBAF

Post by sangofe » Tue Nov 12, 2013 4:33 pm

goku1234 wrote:new update on vol. 11 11/12/13
http://blog.livedoor.jp/youngjijii/arch ... 08945.html
@Xevious - so what your position if your not the "main" english translate?
Lol, he's just a fan... Isn't that obvious?

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Re: Fanmanga - another DBAF

Post by KentalSSJ6 » Wed Nov 13, 2013 1:44 pm

New preview images of the upcoming volume.

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Where to begin..SSJ3 Vegeta's fight with Super Boobs Shenron as some of us call her is more or less a dead ringer with his fight against Jeice.

Gohan's fight with the other Shenron seems promising, liking how it fools around with Gohan disguising itself as Pan.

New possible Janemeba looking villain seems interesting as well. New Hakaishin maybe?
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Re: Fanmanga - another DBAF

Post by Hellspawn28 » Wed Nov 13, 2013 2:01 pm

Man this Shadow Dragon saga is already blows the one in GT out of the water. I guess the dragon that Kibtoshin is fighting may be the final Dragon.
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Re: Fanmanga - another DBAF

Post by KentalSSJ6 » Wed Nov 13, 2013 2:20 pm

Hellspawn28 wrote:Man this Shadow Dragon saga is already blows the one in GT out of the water. I guess the dragon that Kibtoshin is fighting may be the final Dragon.
Thats likely due to YJ having everyone but Goku do the fighting. Goku hasent had a single battle in this doujin (outside of Uub's hallucination) and its great having the story focus on everyone. Gohan has gotten a major kill, Vegeta's first shadow dragon fight is something id never spoil, everyone has just had their own moments and its good and refreshing to see.

Some of the designs have been wonky (Ize's red swirls) and some plot issues such as Ize = 100% Freeza X10, though I'm not sure if thats in his first or final form so thats debatable. I'm abit disappointed he went with the same old SSJ5 design but to his credit, he draws incredibly well and I love the artstyle, his tracing aside.
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Re: Fanmanga - another DBAF

Post by Hellspawn28 » Wed Nov 13, 2013 3:32 pm

I don't like Ize since we already have a official son of Freeza. I know Ize exist in old fan fiction years before just like Xicor, but his power makes no sense. If he is 10X stronger then Freeza then won't he be at ASSj level instead?
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Re: Fanmanga - another DBAF

Post by KentalSSJ6 » Wed Nov 13, 2013 3:39 pm

Hellspawn28 wrote:I don't like Ize since we already have a official son of Freeza. I know Ize exist in old fan fiction years before just like Xicor, but his power makes no sense. If he is 10X stronger then Freeza then won't he be at ASSj level instead?
100% Freeza X10 = 1 Billion 200 Million.

Marble is apparently 7 times stronger than Dabra, dont know Dabra's power level.
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Re: Fanmanga - another DBAF

Post by goku the krump dancer » Wed Nov 13, 2013 6:27 pm

Vegeta is freaking merciless and I love every panel of it and Kaioshin is about to get thrashed.... I hope.

I dont know which Post GT story I wanna add to my personal canon. I like Malik's story (or at least this Aladdjin stuff, didn't really get a chance to read Rigor's arc) but I also like Toyble's and Young Jiji's AFs as well.

But I'm confused Gohan is SSJ2 in one panel then in the next he's SSJ4 'the hell happened?
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Re: Fanmanga - another DBAF

Post by KentalSSJ6 » Wed Nov 13, 2013 7:12 pm

goku the krump dancer wrote:Vegeta is freaking merciless and I love every panel of it and Kaioshin is about to get thrashed.... I hope.

I dont know which Post GT story I wanna add to my personal canon. I like Malik's story (or at least this Aladdjin stuff, didn't really get a chance to read Rigor's arc) but I also like Toyble's and Young Jiji's AFs as well.

But I'm confused Gohan is SSJ2 in one panel then in the next he's SSJ4 'the hell happened?
The pages arent in order. Some are at least ten pages apart.

Regarding Gohan, YJ seems to have the fights start with them in their lower forms and ramp up as the fight gets harder/enemy gets stronger. No point in wasting all your Ki only to see the enemy get right back up. They test their strengths first than adjust accordingly.
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Re: Fanmanga - another DBAF

Post by Vegeta AF » Wed Nov 13, 2013 9:41 pm

I would like to see Tien have his chance to shine

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Re: Fanmanga - another DBAF

Post by Saiga » Wed Nov 13, 2013 9:48 pm

Oh god, that mystic Tenshinhan crap again. Really hate that artist's Ten wank.

Tenshinhan couldn't shine without it just being cheap and completely bullshit.
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Re: Fanmanga - another DBAF

Post by Vegeta AF » Wed Nov 13, 2013 9:53 pm

That's your opinion and I respect it but I happen to like Tien.

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Re: Fanmanga - another DBAF

Post by Saiga » Wed Nov 13, 2013 10:51 pm

And I happen to like a bare minimum of integrity in a story. Just straight up dropping any form of cohesive logic for the sake of making one character look good is poor form, and probably my #1 pet peeve for fanfictions.

I don't see how people can enjoy their character being wanked if it doesn't remotely make sense. It's meaningless.
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Re: Fanmanga - another DBAF

Post by tomac66 » Sun Nov 17, 2013 7:06 pm

Hi, here you have the vol 8 and 9 in Spanish.

http://imgbox.com/g/uuJGkhMINM

http://imgbox.com/g/6yW64vpRcT

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Re: Fanmanga - another DBAF

Post by KentalSSJ6 » Sun Nov 17, 2013 7:12 pm

tomac66 wrote:Hi, here you have the vol 8 and 9 in Spanish.

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http://imgbox.com/g/6yW64vpRcT
Can always count on you to give us good quality scans. Cant wait to get them in english.
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Re: Fanmanga - another DBAF

Post by Hellspawn28 » Sun Nov 17, 2013 7:29 pm

I still wonder if Gohan and Vegeta can just fuse into Vegehan? I don't think the power gab between the two is that big and a SSj4 fusion could work.
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Post by DBZGTKOSDH » Sun Nov 17, 2013 8:19 pm

Hellspawn28 wrote:I still wonder if Gohan and Vegeta can just fuse into Vegehan? I don't think the power gab between the two is that big and a SSj4 fusion could work.
They should be able to use Fusion. However, knowing Vegeta, he would only accept if it's their last card (like against Super Janenba, Gohan Boo, and Super Yi Xing Long).
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Re: Fanmanga - another DBAF

Post by MajinVegetaSSj6 » Mon Nov 18, 2013 11:50 am

oH MAN, i just love DBAF by Young J! I would love to see these animated and accepted as an official sequel to GT.

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Re: Fanmanga - another DBAF

Post by goku1234 » Tue Nov 19, 2013 8:18 pm

new update Youngjijii blog: 11/19/13
http://blog.livedoor.jp/youngjijii/arch ... 09903.html

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