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The Dragon Temple

Post by HECTOR4 » Sun Mar 13, 2011 7:01 am

This is a doujinshi entitled El Templo del Dragón (The Dragon Temple) created by my friend Diego Martínez Murugarren, a Spanish artist. Is drawn in the style of Cowa! and is set many years into the future of Dragon Ball. The story is simple and a bit humorous, but is in spanish. The story is ongoing and if you like I will be placing the pages. This is the original link: http://murugarren.blogspot.com/search/l ... rag%C3%B3n

The comic:

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Original page: http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_ayetdX555nA/S ... 1gina1.jpg

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Original page: http://1.bp.blogspot.com/_ayetdX555nA/S ... 1gina2.jpg

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Original page: http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_ayetdX555nA/S ... agina3.jpg

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Original page: http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_ayetdX555nA/S ... na%2B4.jpg

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Original page: http://3.bp.blogspot.com/_ayetdX555nA/S ... na%2B5.jpg

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Original page: http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_ayetdX555nA/S ... na%2B6.jpg

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Original page: http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_ayetdX555nA/S ... na%2B7.jpg

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Original page: http://4.bp.blogspot.com/_ayetdX555nA/S ... na%2B8.jpg

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Original page: http://4.bp.blogspot.com/_ayetdX555nA/S ... na%2B9.jpg

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Original page: http://3.bp.blogspot.com/_ayetdX555nA/S ... a%2B10.jpg

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Original page: http://1.bp.blogspot.com/_ayetdX555nA/S ... a%2B11.jpg

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Original page: http://3.bp.blogspot.com/_ayetdX555nA/S ... gina12.jpg

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Original page: http://3.bp.blogspot.com/_ayetdX555nA/S ... gina13.jpg

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Original page: http://3.bp.blogspot.com/_ayetdX555nA/S ... a%2B14.jpg

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Original page: http://1.bp.blogspot.com/_ayetdX555nA/S ... a%2B15.jpg

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Original page: http://1.bp.blogspot.com/_ayetdX555nA/T ... gina16.jpg

Original page: http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_ayetdX555nA/T ... +copia.jpg

Original page: https://lh3.googleusercontent.com/-bkVA ... ina+18.jpg

Original page: https://lh3.googleusercontent.com/-E88f ... ina+19.jpg

Original page: https://lh3.googleusercontent.com/-Auxq ... ina+20.jpg

Original page: https://lh6.googleusercontent.com/--EJG ... ina+21.jpg

Original page: https://lh6.googleusercontent.com/-EGHs ... ina+22.jpg

Original page: https://lh4.googleusercontent.com/-D36F ... ina+23.jpg

Original page: https://lh4.googleusercontent.com/-C9QW ... ina+24.jpg

Original page: https://lh5.googleusercontent.com/-9c9Q ... ina+25.jpg

Original page: https://lh3.googleusercontent.com/-oVbZ ... ina+26.jpg
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Re: The Dragon Temple

Post by HECTOR4 » Mon Mar 14, 2011 5:02 pm

Other illustrations of Diego:

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Re: The Dragon Temple

Post by Kingdom Heartless » Mon Mar 14, 2011 10:29 pm

Whoa... he really seems to do Toriyama style artwork fantastically.
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Re: The Dragon Temple

Post by The Time Traveller » Mon Mar 14, 2011 11:28 pm

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Why is this not translated already?!

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This one looks wacky and colourful enough to be actually drawn by Toriyama.

It's kinda easy to translate it actually, just typing the script into Google Translate gives a very basic translation, with some simple rewriting into proper English, even I, someone who can't speak Spanish, can translate it.

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Re: The Dragon Temple

Post by Kingdom Heartless » Tue Mar 15, 2011 2:52 am

The Time Traveller wrote: Image
This one looks wacky and colourful enough to be actually drawn by Toriyama.

It's kinda easy to translate it actually, just typing the script into Google Translate gives a very basic translation, with some simple rewriting into proper English, even I, someone who can't speak Spanish, can translate it.
Hah, didn't notice before that Freeza is down there for some reason.
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Re: The Dragon Temple

Post by HECTOR4 » Tue Mar 15, 2011 6:05 am

HAHAHAHAAAA...I see the illustrations have triumphed much more than the comic, when the comic is the most original doujinshi exists based on Dragon Ball XDDD
The Time Traveller wrote: Why is this not translated already?!
Exactly, why? :D

I am not English and I can not translate it correctly, if not do it.

Please, someone translate?

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Re: The Dragon Temple

Post by dbgtFO » Tue Mar 15, 2011 6:31 am

Kingdom Heartless wrote:
The Time Traveller wrote: http://4.bp.blogspot.com/_ayetdX555nA/S ... cionDB.png
This one looks wacky and colourful enough to be actually drawn by Toriyama.

It's kinda easy to translate it actually, just typing the script into Google Translate gives a very basic translation, with some simple rewriting into proper English, even I, someone who can't speak Spanish, can translate it.
Hah, didn't notice before that Freeza is down there for some reason.
So is Piccolo, Dr. Brief's cat, Captain Ginyu, First Form Cell, Mr. Buu/Fat Buu, Krillin, Chaozu, Mario, perhaps Olibu and Bart Simpson? and Tenshinhan next to Piccolo or at least it looks like him.

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Re: The Dragon Temple

Post by HECTOR4 » Tue Mar 15, 2011 8:54 am

dbgtFO wrote:
Kingdom Heartless wrote:Hah, didn't notice before that Freeza is down there for some reason.
So is Piccolo, Dr. Brief's cat, Captain Ginyu, First Form Cell, Mr. Buu/Fat Buu, Krillin, Chaozu, Mario, perhaps Olibu and Bart Simpson? and Tenshinhan next to Piccolo or at least it looks like him.
And Bulma too.

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Re: The Dragon Temple

Post by SonGokuGT » Wed Mar 16, 2011 5:44 am

This is great! I suppose I could help with a translation.

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Re: The Dragon Temple

Post by HECTOR4 » Wed Mar 16, 2011 7:41 am

SonGokuGT wrote:This is great! I suppose I could help with a translation.

Muy bueno el Goku con el uniforme del New Team y Chicho Terremoto con Bulma! XD
Yes, you could count on me to do anything if someone decides to translate it.

Aunque veo que sabes español...¿Eres español?

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Re: The Dragon Temple

Post by SonGokuGT » Thu Mar 17, 2011 10:25 pm

What font does he use and where can I get it?

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Re: The Dragon Temple

Post by HECTOR4 » Thu Mar 24, 2011 2:26 pm

The first twelve pages translated into english by SonGokuGT:

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Re: The Dragon Temple

Post by HECTOR4 » Sun Mar 27, 2011 3:00 pm

New pages:

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Re: The Dragon Temple

Post by Maphisto86 » Thu Apr 07, 2011 3:15 am

Love the artwork, especially the Tenkaichi Budokai peice. The Oozaru vs Giant Robot one also made me smile. The Doujinshi storyline is great so far Hector. Although I won't lie that shapeshifter guy creeped me out a bit. :? :wink:

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Re: The Dragon Temple

Post by HECTOR4 » Sun Apr 10, 2011 12:05 pm

Thanks for your comment Maphisto86.

Another page translated:

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Re: The Dragon Temple

Post by Budogenkai » Sun Apr 10, 2011 6:02 pm

Wow I really love the way he draws, it's amazing.
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Post by HECTOR4 » Tue Apr 12, 2011 2:16 pm

Budogenkai wrote:Wow I really love the way he draws, it's amazing.
Yeah, but Diego is best storyteller that cartoonist. For me the comic The Dragon Temple is the best Fan-Manga based on Dragon Ball appeared. Much better and more original than Dragon Ball Multiverse and Dragon Ball AF. FOR ME.

Drawing from the author:

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Colored by Diragon (Dragon Ball Reborn):

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Post by Scarz » Tue Apr 12, 2011 3:02 pm

HECTOR4 wrote:For me the comic The Dragon Temple is the best Fan-Manga based on Dragon Ball appeared. Much better and more original than Dragon Ball Multiverse and Dragon Ball AF. FOR ME.
I agree, the story is far more original than any other DB fan manga I've read. I love the art and the characters and I'm curious to see where this story will go. That said, it's still not better than DB Reborn. Where's the tits!?

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Re: The Dragon Temple

Post by HECTOR4 » Wed Apr 27, 2011 5:23 am

Scarz wrote:
HECTOR4 wrote:For me the comic The Dragon Temple is the best Fan-Manga based on Dragon Ball appeared. Much better and more original than Dragon Ball Multiverse and Dragon Ball AF. FOR ME.
I agree, the story is far more original than any other DB fan manga I've read. I love the art and the characters and I'm curious to see where this story will go. That said, it's still not better than DB Reborn. Where's the tits!?
Yes, I like Marron tits!!! :lol: :lol: :lol:

No, seriously, Dragon Ball Reborn is also very good ... But The Dragon Temple is still far more original and interesting...For the moment.

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Re: The Dragon Temple

Post by hleV » Fri Apr 29, 2011 10:43 pm

Use the Wild Words font for translating/any manga work.

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