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Re: Fanmanga- Who wants to be a superhero?

Post by Zephyr » Mon Jun 13, 2011 2:45 pm

This is fucking amazing.

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Post by Kaboom » Mon Jun 13, 2011 2:46 pm

The better question is, wouldn't Goku be able to tell Gohan's Ki from Piccolo or Vegeta's? That IS how he teleports, after all. :P
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Post by Michsi » Mon Jun 13, 2011 3:05 pm

Kaboom wrote:The better question is, wouldn't Goku be able to tell Gohan's Ki from Piccolo or Vegeta's? That IS how he teleports, after all. :P
Meh, details :D .....

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Post by Chuquita » Mon Jun 13, 2011 4:32 pm

Goku's "investigating" faces. XD

I really liked Vegeta and Piccolo's conversation about who exactly is responsible for all this.
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Post by Zionist » Mon Jun 13, 2011 6:14 pm

OMFG HAHAH Blame Piccolo...Blame Vegeta...Hell...Blame The Ginyu Force hahaha! This just gets better and better...lol Vegeta being embarrassed being seen by Goku in the Heart outfit....I fucking love this :lol:
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Post by mysteriousdbzgt » Mon Jun 13, 2011 6:15 pm

Best fan manga ever~

Keep up the great work. :D
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Post by Sun-Wukong » Mon Jun 13, 2011 8:31 pm

"The cape, the posing-"

Not to mention the headgear and the antennae, and the green color.
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Post by Saimaroimaru » Tue Jun 14, 2011 5:18 am

Poor Vegeta, trying to save what's left of his badassness.

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Post by Piccolo Daimao » Tue Jun 14, 2011 1:20 pm

Kaboom wrote:The better question is, wouldn't Goku be able to tell Gohan's Ki from Piccolo or Vegeta's? That IS how he teleports, after all. :P
Well, not exactly the same thing, but no-one knew where Tenshinhan was, even though they could search for his ki. And it couldn't be that hard, since Goku was able to concentrate on finding Bulma's much smaller ki when he was trying to stop them from using up their wishes on the Dragon Balls. I guess they just overlook stuff sometimes, and especially when it's Goku we're talking about.

But yet another great page. Loved Piccolo and Vegeta's argument about who was to blame for the Great Saiyaman, and the end was brilliant.
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Post by Michsi » Tue Jun 14, 2011 3:53 pm

I always found it intriguing how the DB warriors could distinguish different people by their ki just like, for example, animals could do by scent, meaning every individual had their own paricular ki signature. It was always hard for me to grasp since I consider ki to be something basic and neutral like energy, but I guess it makes it more interesting like this and also more helpful as a plot point. :D

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Post by Akumaito Beam » Thu Jun 16, 2011 9:30 pm

This is fabulous. This is precisely the kind of thing I'd want if Toriyama ever did continue the manga. An absolute joy to read, very well done.

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Post by Leviathus » Mon Jun 20, 2011 10:25 am

Great stuff Michsi! Keep up the good work.

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Re: Fanmanga- Who wants to be a superhero?

Post by batistabus » Tue Jun 21, 2011 11:32 pm

Michsi wrote:
Kaboom wrote:The better question is, wouldn't Goku be able to tell Gohan's Ki from Piccolo or Vegeta's? That IS how he teleports, after all. :P
Meh, details :D .....
Maybe Gohan and Piccolo have similar feeling ki since Gohan was developed using Piccolo's techniques? Goku probably didn't think much of it, knew the direction of the action, and went to the largest power level in the area. :lol:

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Post by Great Saiyaman I » Sat Sep 10, 2011 5:52 pm

I'll be very sad if this never gets updated again. :(
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Post by batistabus » Sat Sep 10, 2011 6:27 pm

I consider this canon. Please make more. :(

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Re: Fanmanga- Who wants to be a superhero?

Post by Michsi » Wed Sep 14, 2011 7:36 am

I have a few pages that are actually almost 95% done . It's not even that I don't have the time, I don't have the room/place to finish the remaining 5%. I'm not abandoning this, not a chance. I'll try to have the next 4 pages up this weekend.

Sorry, to those who got their hopes up with this post :(

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Post by Maphisto86 » Wed Sep 14, 2011 3:49 pm

Michsi wrote:I have a few pages that are actually almost 95% done . It's not even that I don't have the time, I don't have the room/place to finish the remaining 5%. I'm not abandoning this, not a chance. I'll try to have the next 4 pages up this weekend.

Sorry, to those who got their hopes up with this post :(
Is home life that busy or are you off at school? Whatever the case I figured you would come back to it in your own time or just end it there. :D :wink: Besides I hope to see some of that original work you mentioned on Deviantart. Not to say your fan stuff is boring, obviously not! You just seemed more enthusiastic about showing what original stuff you has in mind. ^^;

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Re: Fanmanga- Who wants to be a superhero?

Post by Michsi » Sun Sep 25, 2011 5:44 pm

Yeah... so it was the next weekend instead of "this" weekend.

Sorry, that it's just a lousy 4 page update, but I really couldn't manage to do more t now. Also, not my best work here, really rushed and in serious need of some corrections, but this was pretty much the last weekend I could afford to devote to this fan manga. I'll be busy until the end of October. Hopefully the next pages will look a little better.

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Is home life that busy or are you off at school? Whatever the case I figured you would come back to it in your own time or just end it there. :D :wink: Besides I hope to see some of that original work you mentioned on Deviantart. Not to say your fan stuff is boring, obviously not! You just seemed more enthusiastic about showing what original stuff you has in mind. ^^;/
I wasn't really that busy, it's just didn't have access to my computer to do the finishing touches.
About my original stuff, I'm actually hoping to get that published, so I don't know if I'll get to post that on the net :wink: . Once I finish this fan manga, I'll start working on my original story again. The only problem is, I'm having more fun coming up with ideas for this story, than for my own work :?
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Re: Fanmanga- Who wants to be a superhero?

Post by ShadowDude112 » Sun Sep 25, 2011 5:58 pm

I'm pretty sure you should replace Salagir as the writer and Gogeta Jr as the illustrator in DB Multiverse. Seriously though, good stuff. I laughed my head off.
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Re: Fanmanga- Who wants to be a superhero?

Post by Zionist » Sun Sep 25, 2011 8:38 pm

Goku is forever more God :lol:

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