Dragon Ball F: Abridged Manga (Chapter 16 is up!)

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Dragon Ball F: Abridged Manga (Chapter 16 is up!)

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Post by Ringworm128 » Wed Oct 19, 2011 1:23 am

Great work, I really liked Chapter 3.

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Post by Perfect » Thu Oct 20, 2011 1:01 am

This is amazing. I can't believe I never thought of doing this, but keep up the good work. Can't wait for the fourth chapter. :D
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Post by Gonstead » Thu Oct 20, 2011 8:14 pm

Hilarious!
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Post by OneDragonZwill » Thu Oct 20, 2011 10:31 pm

I hope you use more tullece joke in the future. Even characters who havent even seen tullece.

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OneDragonZwill wrote:I hope you use more tullece joke in the future. Even characters who havent even seen tullece.
For Frieza, it's either that or Bardock.
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Re: Dragon Ball F (Abridged Manga)

Post by funrush » Sat Oct 22, 2011 7:30 am

Wow, that was pretty funny. What was the name of the font you used?

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funrush wrote:Wow, that was pretty funny. What was the name of the font you used?
Wild Words.

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Post by Godo » Sat Oct 22, 2011 9:22 am

That was amazing. I hope to read more of your Abridged Manga!

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Post by Saimaroimaru » Sun Oct 23, 2011 2:17 am

This is a master piece.

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Post by Gonstead » Sun Oct 23, 2011 8:52 am

Hah! Super Cyan!

Hey, you wouldn't mind if my fan dub crew did a voice acting project on this? I'll be sure to credit you if we did.
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Post by hleV » Sun Oct 23, 2011 9:24 am

Gonstead wrote:Hey, you wouldn't mind if my fan dub crew did a voice acting project on this?
I'd totally want that.

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Post by OneDragonZwill » Sun Oct 30, 2011 3:51 am

HAHAHA that first tullece joke made me fall out of my chair.

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Post by OneDragonZwill » Sun Oct 30, 2011 3:52 am

Gonstead wrote:Hah! Super Cyan!

Hey, you wouldn't mind if my fan dub crew did a voice acting project on this? I'll be sure to credit you if we did.
Be sure to use the tullece joke. I love those soooooo much!

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Post by funrush » Mon Oct 31, 2011 3:35 pm

I love the "Bulma can please any man" line!

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Re: Dragon Ball F (Abridged Manga)

Post by Saiga » Sat Nov 05, 2011 9:26 am

I've always wanted someone to try an abridged manga, this is very well done. I hope more chapter are coming. :)
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