Fic Idea: Trial of Vegeta

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Fic Idea: Trial of Vegeta

Post by Hades » Sat Apr 12, 2014 8:01 am

When Vegeta dies post-Z, Enma is unsure of where to put him, so a trial is convened, with the fate of the last Saiyan's soul at stake.
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Re: Fic Idea: Trial of Vegeta

Post by Polyphase Avatron » Sat Apr 12, 2014 11:12 am

Sounds promising actually, go for it
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Re: Fic Idea: Trial of Vegeta

Post by Gyt Kaliba » Sat Apr 12, 2014 3:00 pm

Sounds interesting enough and definitely a lot different than most other fics I've run across - I'd also say give it a go!
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Re: Fic Idea: Trial of Vegeta

Post by Hades » Sun Apr 13, 2014 5:57 am

It's for better writers than I to do. Besides, it would need someone with a legal background to properly write.
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Re: Fic Idea: Trial of Vegeta

Post by Hades » Sun Apr 13, 2014 10:09 am

Some things that could be used

Otherworld Vs. Vegeta.

Sitting Judge: Enma-Daio

Advocate for the defence: Son Goku

Advocate for the prosecution: Piccolo

Charges: 5 counts of Genocide (Pre-Z)

5 counts of conspiracy to commit genocide (Pre-Z)

1 count of murder on Earth (Nappa)

1 count of torture on Earth (Goku)

1 count of Mass Murder on Namek (Namekian Village)

1 count of Manslaughter on Earth (truck driver)

1 count of conspiracy to create a weapon of mass destruction (becoming a majin)

1 count of Mass Murder (World Tournament Massacre)
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Re: Fic Idea: Trial of Vegeta

Post by Gyt Kaliba » Sun Apr 13, 2014 5:49 pm

Hades wrote:it would need someone with a legal background to properly write.
Eh...that part, I dunno about. It would still need to feel more like Dragon Ball than a John Grisham novel, IMO, and who's to say that the courts of the netherworld would work exactly the same way as any Earth court system, outside of the basic judge/jury/possibly witnesses set-up. Still sounds like an interesting idea that I hope someone gives a go though.
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Re: Fic Idea: Trial of Vegeta

Post by Hades » Sun Apr 13, 2014 7:47 pm

Gyt Kaliba wrote:
Hades wrote:it would need someone with a legal background to properly write.
Eh...that part, I dunno about. It would still need to feel more like Dragon Ball than a John Grisham novel, IMO, and who's to say that the courts of the netherworld would work exactly the same way as any Earth court system, outside of the basic judge/jury/possibly witnesses set-up. Still sounds like an interesting idea that I hope someone gives a go though.
Upon further reflection, would Vegeta be facing specific charges, or would he be getting evaluated on his character upon his death? As well as that, I doubt those as connected to him as Goku or Piccolo could act as counsel in any form.
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Re: Fic Idea: Trial of Vegeta

Post by Sun-Wukong » Sun Apr 13, 2014 8:48 pm

Basically, pretend you're writing a Phoenix Wright story and replace all the character names. That'd work for a rough draft, anyway.
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Re: Fic Idea: Trial of Vegeta

Post by Hades » Mon Apr 14, 2014 2:49 pm

Sun-Wukong wrote:Basically, pretend you're writing a Phoenix Wright story and replace all the character names. That'd work for a rough draft, anyway.
The problem is, doing a trial in the Other World. I can easily see Freeza, Nappa and Cell as witnesses for the prosecution, which could be interesting, if handled well.
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Re: Fic Idea: Trial of Vegeta

Post by Hades » Mon Apr 14, 2014 2:53 pm

Sun-Wukong wrote:Basically, pretend you're writing a Phoenix Wright story and replace all the character names. That'd work for a rough draft, anyway.
The problem is, doing a trial in the Other World, especially if there's no idea on how the legal system works in DB. Although I can easily see Freeza, Nappa and Cell as witnesses for the prosecution, which could be interesting, if handled well.
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