Your edits look great, I want to put that front and center. Even though I can kinda see it from the artstyle what is from Super and what is from the movie, it's actually VERY well done editing wise. The only thing I'm not sure about, though this could be because it just doesn't work, is that you omit everything that Super brought to the table that is pretty neat. Well of course that's completely opinion based, let's be honest, but still that's how I feel about it. What I think would add value (in my opinion again) to your edit is adding:
- Seeing Buu actually sleeping.
- Gotenks vs Tagoma (and yes, with Ginyu). Freeza seeing Goten and Trunks, to me, would feel pretty much essential to the plot.
- Maybe seeing everyone on Earth before it explodes? I thought that was a nice touch, and everyone who survives is a little more upset in the Super version.
- Gohan being super weak and in the end realising that "shit, I need to get my shit together else I risk my friends when Vegeta and dad aren't home".
Now I get that that's mostly Super, and I get that that is one heck of a job to get all those things to mesh (especially pacing wise). But those, to me, are the things that Super added to the story that felt... well at least better
I wish they did more with Gotenks vs Tagoma and all that stuff, sure. But still
Anyway, what I DO like about your editing project is the addition of the third wish thing, the beginning with Krillin (though I wonder if you paid it off as Super did with Krillin during the fighting), and of course knowing when to use the movie footage for the fights
So while I might not agree entirely with your decisions, I think the craft behind it is very well done!