ROF Arc Manga Version!

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ROF Arc Manga Version!

Post by Xeztin » Tue Mar 15, 2016 2:58 am

As most of us know the ROF arc wasn't included in the Super manga, but a fan sort of ripped frames from the movie and made this 20 page comic continuing from the 3 chapter special done by Toyotaro. I was wondering if anyone here was talented enough and would tackle these in redrawing them decently for those of us that like to be completionists and have the entire story in manga format. You could use these 20 pages as sort of a story board and layout or even guidance if it helps. The only scene I'd change is Goku being shot by the laser, and I'd use the anime's version of him being in base and off guard and such. The reason I brought this up is because it seems highly unlikely that the arc will be completed and included in the official volume release. I can't draw to save my life so hopefully some of you can, and if you want you could make this a group project! If you take it on please post the finished page(s) on this thread! :)

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Re: ROF Arc Manga Version!

Post by Lord Beerus » Wed Mar 16, 2016 1:02 pm

Nice work, Xeztin. Would you be planning to do something like this for Battle Of Gods?

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Post by Tzigi » Wed Mar 16, 2016 2:19 pm

Lord Beerus wrote:Would you be planning to do something like this for Battle Of Gods?
BoG is already there in the manga. FnF isn't and that's why completionists (I consider myself one as well) would like to have it in such a version.

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Post by Lord Beerus » Wed Mar 16, 2016 2:48 pm

Tzigi wrote:
Lord Beerus wrote:Would you be planning to do something like this for Battle Of Gods?
BoG is already there in the manga. FnF isn't and that's why completionists (I consider myself one as well) would like to have it in such a version.
Oh yeah, I forget the Super manga did Battle Of Gods.

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Re: ROF Arc Manga Version!

Post by Xeztin » Wed Mar 16, 2016 5:04 pm

Yeah I really was hoping that Michsi would be interested in the project, his "Who wants to be a superhero" comic was amazing. Haven't heard back from him yet though.

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Post by ekrolo2 » Wed Mar 16, 2016 5:07 pm

Xeztin wrote:Yeah I really was hoping that Michsi would be interested in the project, his "Who wants to be a superhero" comic was amazing. Haven't heard back from him yet though.
Michsi remaking the movies with his art-style & possible story ideas?!

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Re: ROF Arc Manga Version!

Post by Malik_DBNA » Thu Mar 17, 2016 11:35 am

If I had the time, I'd gladly tackle it. Maybe I can do a page or two in the meantime

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Re: ROF Arc Manga Version!

Post by Xeztin » Thu Mar 17, 2016 4:46 pm

Malik_DBNA wrote:If I had the time, I'd gladly tackle it. Maybe I can do a page or two in the meantime
I among others would appreciate that greatly Malik :)

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Re: ROF Arc Manga Version!

Post by Xeztin » Fri Jun 10, 2016 8:39 pm

Just bumping this up in-case it grabs someones eye. :)

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Re: ROF Arc Manga Version!

Post by TheBritWriter » Sat Jun 11, 2016 1:42 am

Possibly, I'll keep note...I would be interested in working on pages 6-9, I might leave the speech bubbles out so whoever wants to fill in the necessary dialogue can do so. Unless there's a script and particular font in mind. I'll see how next month fares out.

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Re: ROF Arc Manga Version!

Post by Xeztin » Sun Jun 12, 2016 2:38 pm

TheBritWriter wrote:Possibly, I'll keep note...I would be interested in working on pages 6-9, I might leave the speech bubbles out so whoever wants to fill in the necessary dialogue can do so. Unless there's a script and particular font in mind. I'll see how next month fares out.
That'd be great, any help is appreciated! The dialog will be directly ripped from the movie, or changed a bit if Super's is better in any of the scenes. You can type or leave the bubbles clean it is up to you! if you choose to type the text, font is up to you as well, though I think Whizbang I believe it's called is popular for Dragon Ball manga. :)

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Re: ROF Arc Manga Version!

Post by Xeztin » Thu Jul 21, 2016 4:46 pm

Marb done the English typeset for us! These images are out of order (I hate imgbox) but here they are: http://imgbox.com/g/tdDOsPoo3D

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Re: ROF Arc Manga Version!

Post by Riczi » Thu Jul 21, 2016 4:57 pm

I saw them in his personal DBS manga version :D Good job.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zVmgA21rUgk
also, where I can find this Young Jijii's special about Pilaf?

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Re: ROF Arc Manga Version!

Post by Xeztin » Thu Jul 21, 2016 5:05 pm

Riczi wrote:I saw them in his personal DBS manga version :D Good job.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zVmgA21rUgk
also, where I can find this Young Jijii's special about Pilaf?
It's a special in AF volume 8 :)

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Re: ROF Arc Manga Version!

Post by Xeztin » Wed Jul 27, 2016 6:07 pm

Marb's translation made me want to revisit this, What do you guys think? Should I continue?

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Re: ROF Arc Manga Version!

Post by samuo2 » Wed Jul 27, 2016 6:46 pm

Hi ! I'm new on this forum, and my opinion is that the project doesn't interest that much people. Because of the lack of volunteers to draw (If I've understood well your request) a complete manga FnF version, you try though with some scrrenshots of the movie, but a legal equivalent already exists no ?

Like the Battle of Gods anime Comics, a Fukkatsu no F's version is predicted, no ?
And even if I'm wrong, I think a fanmade anime comics isn't what people wants..

It's a really nice attention to want to please everybody, but I think that you should rennounced.

I don't say that to be unkind or something like that, but I see you do your best and unfortunately nobody's ready to follow your project, it's too bad.. :/
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Re: ROF Arc Manga Version!

Post by Xeztin » Wed Jul 27, 2016 7:34 pm

Forgot to add Gray scale version since I can't edit post:
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Re: ROF Arc Manga Version!

Post by Riczi » Thu Jul 28, 2016 5:05 am

The auras are too white. Just simple b&w won't be enough?

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Re: ROF Arc Manga Version!

Post by TheDevilsCorpse » Thu Jul 28, 2016 10:47 am

Xeztin wrote:Forgot to add Gray scale version since I can't edit post:
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That...just doesn't look good. If no one is willing to redraw everything (I'd offer, but I don't have time to do it for free), then you're going to have to go with a more proper grayscale with darker tones so that you don't wash out half the image like the Orange Bricks.

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Re: ROF Arc Manga Version!

Post by Ajay » Thu Jul 28, 2016 11:53 am

To add to that:

Don't stretch the images outside of their intended aspect ratio. It looks awful.

Crop them or draw the panels with a proper 16:9 aspect ratio.
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