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Webcomic created by me.

Post by Kryptoniano_SSJ » Mon Jan 29, 2018 6:40 pm

Hi, I'm Kryptoniano_SSJ!

As the title says, I'm doing a DB webcomic called "Dragon Ball What If ...", where, as in the Tenkaichi Budokai saga of PS2, I show how Dragon Ball would have been if certain aspects and characters were changed .
In the first issue, I am recreating the story with Vegeta as the protagonist of the series, being sent to Earth instead of Goku. I'm a beginner and it's the first comic I do, 100% created by me, so I'd like you to take a look and give me your opinions here and on the page where the comic is uploaded. Thank you very much, I'll be waiting for your comments!

P.S: My native language is Spanish, so excuse me if I make a mistake when I write.

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Re: Webcomic created by me.

Post by FoolsGil » Tue Jan 30, 2018 9:22 am

It has potential, I will say that.

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Re: Webcomic created by me.

Post by Kryptoniano_SSJ » Tue Jan 30, 2018 10:44 am

FoolsGil wrote:It has potential, I will say that.
Thank you! :thumbup:

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Re: Webcomic created by me.

Post by TheDragonBallGuy75 » Tue Jan 30, 2018 11:07 am

Reminiscent of Dragon Garow Lee's DB Sai but this time Vegeta is already a kid? Interesting that you're paying attention to the actual ages of the characters in this what if.

I can't say I'm confident that Vegeta won't just destroy every organized military on planet Earth from day one and declare himself ruler, but we'll see. Good work :)
Someone asked me why I invest so much time into collecting Dragonball doujinshi.
I answered, "Because I don't see anyone else doing it".

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Re: Webcomic created by me.

Post by Kryptoniano_SSJ » Tue Jan 30, 2018 2:33 pm

TheDragonBallGuy75 wrote:Reminiscent of Dragon Garow Lee's DB Sai but this time Vegeta is already a kid? Interesting that you're paying attention to the actual ages of the characters in this what if.

I can't say I'm confident that Vegeta won't just destroy every organized military on planet Earth from day one and declare himself ruler, but we'll see. Good work :)
Thank you so much! Yes, I like Dragon Ball so much that I pay too much attention to details. I'm glad you like it! :D

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