Fan Works Explosion

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Re: Fan Works Explosion

Post by Anime Kitten » Fri Sep 23, 2016 5:36 pm

With how Goku's SSJ2 hair is, and how I'd draw Vegeta's (more spiky), I sorta followed that with Dawn's hair. A bit spikier, and it raises more since more Ki is being channeled. And the eyes overlapping with the hair is completely intentional; I do that all the time. It's based on some anime characters, namely James from Pokémon.
Perhaps exaggerated, but I'm pretty happy with how my style has developed over the years. Thanks for the thoughts!

EDIT: Forgot to address the headband; it's most likely a strong substance that resists that kind of power. And I'm saving something along those lines for another character. No spoilers, though. =P
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Re: Fan Works Explosion

Post by Alruneia » Fri Sep 23, 2016 5:47 pm

Anime Kitten wrote:With how Goku's SSJ2 hair is, and how I'd draw Vegeta's (more spiky), I sorta followed that with Dawn's hair. A bit spikier, and it raises more since more Ki is being channeled. And the eyes overlapping with the hair is completely intentional; I do that all the time.
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Perhaps exaggerated, but I'm pretty happy with how my style has developed over the years. Thanks for the thoughts!
I wasn't referring to the overlap. I'm familiar with that style choice. However, your eyes are a bit too large for your heads. They're even kinda big by chibi standards. That's what I meant.
As for the hair, all I'll point at is this: SSJ1 vs SSJ2 Teen Gohan, SSJ1 vs SSJ2 Future Trunks (manga version). Longer, less spiky hair means more drastic changes. But this is all a matter of personal taste. I like my SSJ2s with a bit more impact, others don't. That's fine.
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Re: Fan Works Explosion

Post by Anime Kitten » Fri Sep 23, 2016 7:58 pm

Alruneia wrote:However, your eyes are a bit too large for your heads. They're even kinda big by chibi standards. That's what I meant.
Oh, that. That's also a stylistic choice. I'll try some smaller sizes, but I won't guarantee I'll convert. Thanks for the advice, though. Glad my bodies look decent, at least. :D
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Re: Fan Works Explosion

Post by nobody231 » Fri Sep 23, 2016 9:37 pm

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Finished this about last week. Any advice would be appreciated.

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Re: Fan Works Explosion

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nobody231 wrote:[spoiler]Image[/spoiler]
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Finished this about last week. Any advice would be appreciated.
The addition of lightning would've added to the intensity of it

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Re: Fan Works Explosion

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nobody231 wrote:[spoiler]Image[/spoiler]
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Finished this about last week. Any advice would be appreciated.
Gohan is like 9 in the manga. He looks too masculine. Maybe give a more round face :D
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Re: Fan Works Explosion

Post by Lord Beerus » Sat Sep 24, 2016 12:41 pm

Captain Strawberry wrote:
nobody231 wrote:[spoiler]Image[/spoiler]
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Finished this about last week. Any advice would be appreciated.
Gohan is like 9 in the manga. He looks too masculine. Maybe give a more round face :D
Well, any issues you have with that fan-art, you'll have to take up with the original manga, considering that fan art is a direct homage to this awesome panel in the manga:
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Re: Fan Works Explosion

Post by Captain Strawberry » Sat Sep 24, 2016 12:56 pm

Lord Beerus wrote:
Captain Strawberry wrote:
nobody231 wrote:[spoiler]Image[/spoiler]
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Finished this about last week. Any advice would be appreciated.
Gohan is like 9 in the manga. He looks too masculine. Maybe give a more round face :D
Well, any issues you have with that fan-art, you'll have to take up with the original manga, considering that fan art is a direct homage to this awesome panel in the manga:
[spoiler]Image[/spoiler]
Gohan's chin is too masculine/square in this fan art :D

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Re: Fan Works Explosion

Post by nobody231 » Sat Sep 24, 2016 3:29 pm

Dbzfan94 wrote:
nobody231 wrote:[spoiler]Image[/spoiler]
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Finished this about last week. Any advice would be appreciated.
The addition of lightning would've added to the intensity of it
wow. I... forgot.. How did I forget!? Thanks for reminding me about lightning.
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Lord Beerus wrote: Well, any issues you have with that fan-art, you'll have to take up with the original manga, considering that fan art is a direct homage to this awesome panel in the manga:
[spoiler]Image[/spoiler]
Gohan's chin is too masculine/square in this fan art :D

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still trying to fix that. Still trying! Although the original is WAAAY too baby-faced for Gohan at that age.

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Re: Fan Works Explosion

Post by nite_jay » Sat Sep 24, 2016 3:36 pm

Gohan isn't really babyfaced at all there. His face at 10 looks a lot older than Goku's at 15 anyway.

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Re: Fan Works Explosion

Post by Anime Kitten » Sat Sep 24, 2016 3:44 pm

In my ever-plugged fanfic, Gohan's age at that appearance is 13 (later 14), so I don't have any issues with his chin.
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Re: Fan Works Explosion

Post by nobody231 » Sat Sep 24, 2016 3:59 pm

nite_jay wrote:Gohan isn't really babyfaced at all there. His face at 10 looks a lot older than Goku's at 15 anyway.
I meant that page. Gohan usually looks fine, but that page looks bad to me.

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Re: Fan Works Explosion

Post by Anime Kitten » Sat Sep 24, 2016 4:20 pm

I'd normally post this in the sprite thread, but I figured I'd share it here in case anyone else is interested. My masterpiece!
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Re: Fan Works Explosion

Post by Lord Beerus » Sat Sep 24, 2016 4:45 pm

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Man, I would kill for Super Saiyan Blue to have an aura as awesome like that. Hell, I'd kill for any transformation to have an aura like that.

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Re: Fan Works Explosion

Post by nite_jay » Sun Sep 25, 2016 5:31 pm

Lord Beerus wrote:Image
I can tell they are a great artist, but realism and Dragonball seem to almost never look good together. :?

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Re: Fan Works Explosion

Post by Anime Kitten » Sun Sep 25, 2016 5:37 pm

nite_jay wrote:I can tell they are a great artist, but realism and Dragonball seem to almost never look good together. :?
Agreed, but this is amazing:
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