Toyble DBAF [June 9, 2012] Vol 4 HD release complete

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Post by CoolerEX » Tue Jan 02, 2007 12:12 am

On everything holy on this world! FREEZA!? FREEZA!? My god! As the Poltergeist 2 stated "They're baaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaacks!" Cooler, King Cold, Freeza, AND Kuriza!? This is too good to be true! Is their a link between them still being alive!? Does this mean that Freeza and Goku are "gasp" RELATED!? I am in love with this new manga. Hopefully Freeza and the others show up again.

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Post by tainted saiyan » Tue Jan 02, 2007 12:39 am

Ya, it would make Goku, Frieza's step something(mother's boyfriend).

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Post by CoolerEX » Tue Jan 02, 2007 12:41 am

So Goku beat his own child?

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Post by Eclipse » Tue Jan 02, 2007 2:58 am

Anyways, I had really nothing to do this evening, so I decided to try and 'scanlate' the first 4 pages of this manga. Basically, I used the existing translations, and just reworded it here and there, as well as doing it in Photoshop, so it'll look nicer, I hope =)

Page 1
page 2
page 3
page 4

~Enjoy
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Post by gohanku » Tue Jan 02, 2007 3:04 am

Wow, Freeza's mum is a kai? Your like some god Eclipse, you turn the DBAF from WTF, how to read this to WTF, Freeza's mum a kai?
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Post by strawberry » Tue Jan 02, 2007 7:30 am

Olivier Hague wrote: That would most probably be the author's kana spelling of "Xicor". His story appears to be based on the BS one that surfaced a while ago, what with "zaiko-"/Xicor being the son of Gokû and a goddess named "raira"/"Lila".
Ah, thank you. ^^ I have never read any of the various AF stories, so I did not know what to to with that name.

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Post by Eclipse » Tue Jan 02, 2007 6:56 pm

gohanku wrote:Wow, Freeza's mum is a kai? Your like some god Eclipse, you turn the DBAF from WTF, how to read this to WTF, Freeza's mum a kai?
..............
Ok, I'm confused. In case you thought I did all those pages, I didn't.
All I did was the text.

Thanks for the praise anyways ^.^

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Post by DaemonCorps » Tue Jan 02, 2007 9:08 pm

Seems like toyble updated with another page... with SSJ4 Vegeta (Just scroll down a bit)! I guess Vegeta was able to reach it without going Oozaru anymore.
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Post by Eclipse » Tue Jan 02, 2007 11:23 pm

This is some awesome art. Nice to see SSJ4 Vegeta makes an appearance.

If someone could do a dialogue translation for these pages, I could do them again, likewise same treatment I did for first 4 pages. Nobody really said anything about stopping, so... :)

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Post by Big Momma » Tue Jan 02, 2007 11:35 pm

I got it!

The artist of this comic is actually Toriyama sensei in disguise!!! :o He DOES want to continue the story!(I'm just kidding, no offense to the real creator of this fan manga!) :D
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Post by Magica » Tue Jan 02, 2007 11:36 pm

Big Momma wrote:I got it!

The artist of this comic is actually Toriyama sensei in disguise!!! :o He DOES want to continue the story!(I'm just kidding, no offense to the real creator of this fan manga!) :D

Hmm yes. Let's not have some idiot fanboy misunderstand and believe you. XD

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Post by Tatsunoboshi Horoko » Tue Jan 02, 2007 11:39 pm

The size of these pages suck for me. (Weren't there bigger pages somewhere?)
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Time traces back a bit directly after Son Goku, who had awakened his Super Saiyan, defeated Freeza, Ruler of the Entire Universe, on the distant Planet Namek.

While he received Goku’s final attack, Freeza barely managed to survive…

Ship Hand: We’ve found Freeza-sama!
Cold Daio-sama!!

King Cold: Freeza!!

How could this be!?
To a mere Saiyan…!?

Freeza: It hurts. Papa, Mama…

Raila: Hmph.

King Cold: I will definitely exact revenge for him!

Cooler: M-Mother!
F-Freeza!
He's alive?!

Raila: I have no idea about that near-dead fool.
I no longer need a son who is not the best in the universe!
Prepare a ship immediately!

Ship Hand: Huh? Oh, yes ma’am!

Raila: The Saiyan who brought down Freeza that far named “Son Goku”…
Just what kind of man is he?
I want to know! He will become my key to universal conquest!
I must reach contact with him before Cold and the others do!
Hurry up and get it ready! I am leaving immediately!!

Ship Hand: C-Certainly!
Raila-sama!!

And now, several decades’ time has passed.
A crisis unlike any before it has drawn near the peaceful Earth.

---DRAGONBALL AF---
(Toyable)
Chapter 1 – Former Warriors in the Future
Everyone has been waiting for you…
Dragonball’s new adventure has started!!

Until now, the Earth’s fighters, including Son Goku, have protected the world from Cell and Majin Boo’s attacks…From then on, while the earth faced a countless number of threats, on each occasion, Goku and the others would repeatedly develop and save the world. And then, finishing his task at last, Son Goku disappeared from the world of the living with Shenlong. The Earth was deprived of both Goku and the Dragonballs…However, the world had obtained peace in return…

This is the college in Satan City: “Orange Star University.”

Gohan: R-Right. The academic conference tomorrow!
Wait just a second, I’m tied up at the moment…!

University Hand: E-Excuse me…
Professor…?

Gohan: Well…you see…

University Hand: Professor Son!!

Gohan: Could it wait until later?
Oh—sorry!

University Hand: Um, it’s just that it’s almost time for your lecture…

[Books fall]

Aaaaaah!!

Gohan: Urk…

University Hand: Pr-Professor!!

Gohan: T-The lecture…
I forgot.

[Walking to class]

I sure wish I could concentrate solely on my research…
But that seems impossible…[Can't see]
Okay, let’s begin.
…As can be seen above, the habitats of the seven-colored wart toad are extremely scarce…

Goten’s Classmate: Hey, Goten, did you see the news yesterday?

Goten: Yeah, I saw!
About them catching an alien on Satan Rock, right?

Goten’s Classmate: Yeah, that’s it! Sure is something, huh?

Goten’s Classmate 2: But hey, this is what I heard.
That alien…
I heard it’s actually a shaven ape!

Both: For real—!!!?

Classmate: Say, let’s go check it out right now!

Goten: Sounds good!
Come along Pales!

Pares: An ape?


PA: This is an emergency broadcast!

[===]

And that's where I couldn't take it anymore. (I think that's "Keyboard Down" or "Keypord Down"...or something...after that.) Sorry everyone. Maybe tomorrow.
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Post by sangofe » Fri Jan 05, 2007 2:48 pm

Hmm, I wonder where pages 37-56 are...

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Post by landoku » Fri Jan 05, 2007 3:00 pm

Eclipse wrote:Anyways, I had really nothing to do this evening, so I decided to try and 'scanlate' the first 4 pages of this manga. Basically, I used the existing translations, and just reworded it here and there, as well as doing it in Photoshop, so it'll look nicer, I hope =)

Page 1
page 2
page 3
page 4

~Enjoy

Awesome! Keep the translations coming!

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Post by mAcChaos » Fri Jan 05, 2007 3:55 pm

Freeza and Kold are so out of character. Freeza would never say something like, "Mama, Papa, it hurts," and I doubt Kooler would've cared if Freeza bit the dust. In fact, he probably was hoping for it so he could take over.
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Post by Olivier Hague » Fri Jan 05, 2007 4:07 pm

mAcChaos wrote:Freeza would never say something like, "Mama, Papa, it hurts," and I doubt Kooler would've cared if Freeza bit the dust.
The mere fact Freeza calls his father "papa" makes me think he could say such a thing.
As for Coora... It's been a while (decade?) since I've seen the movies, but do we really know that much about his relation with Freeza?

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Post by caejones » Fri Jan 05, 2007 4:43 pm

Yay! Text that I can read! *Showers translaters with cookies and Mr. Satan T-Shirts... and gifts that are actually good*.

It's possible that Cooler was just saying stuff to avoid looking like he didn't care? It may also have had something to do with explaining things as far as character understandings are concerned. Meh? Hmm.

*Wants to read more*
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Post by mAcChaos » Fri Jan 05, 2007 4:45 pm

Olivier Hague wrote:
mAcChaos wrote:Freeza would never say something like, "Mama, Papa, it hurts," and I doubt Kooler would've cared if Freeza bit the dust.
The mere fact Freeza calls his father "papa" makes me think he could say such a thing.
As for Coora... It's been a while (decade?) since I've seen the movies, but do we really know that much about his relation with Freeza?
Well, if I recall correctly, he pretty much lets Goku escape because what Freeza does is his own business, and if something goes wrong because of it, it's his fault. So I assume he'd take the same stance towards Goku beating Freeza down on Namek—and of course, he did, when he came to fight Goku in the movies. He said he didn't care that his brother died, just that the family honor was tarnished.

In any case, I'm still somewhat interested in what the next few pages bring; the art is good enough.
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Post by CoolerEX » Sat Jan 06, 2007 12:11 am

Yes I agree, while I am enjoying this new manga I hate to see the Freeza family reduced to looking like such idiots.

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Post by nathantheguitarist » Sat Jan 06, 2007 4:24 am

Forget the Freeza family looking out-of-character. The art is good enough to keep reading!

Someone needs to scanlate those missing pages! :lol:
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