Fanmanga - Dragon Ball OH
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Fanmanga - Dragon Ball OH
This is a manga made by Splixson91 on DeviantArt. It seems interesting so far.
The manga can be read here
The manga can be read here
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Hopefully there will be frequent updates
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look very promising hope they more coming of this manga
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The power levels are kind of puzzling.
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Hmm, I didn't realize that the motion comic I commented on a few weeks ago, and this comic were the same. Just realized.
Following a group of villain protagonist in the dragonball universe is interesting, but if you're going to have your villains come to Earth, story wise you need to come correct. First, the point of power levels is to show they don't matter. Second, if you are going to use power levels in defiance of the first rule, have the right power levels. In hindsight, he shouldn't have said numbers. Just have the guy use his scouter, it shows symbols in a alien language, and he says his disparaging comment without mentioning numbers.
Another thing is I hope that there is actual stakes here, the villain shows up, makes quick work of the Earthlings. There's dragonballs they're after. But it won't be that easy to get them, hopefully.
Following a group of villain protagonist in the dragonball universe is interesting, but if you're going to have your villains come to Earth, story wise you need to come correct. First, the point of power levels is to show they don't matter. Second, if you are going to use power levels in defiance of the first rule, have the right power levels. In hindsight, he shouldn't have said numbers. Just have the guy use his scouter, it shows symbols in a alien language, and he says his disparaging comment without mentioning numbers.
Another thing is I hope that there is actual stakes here, the villain shows up, makes quick work of the Earthlings. There's dragonballs they're after. But it won't be that easy to get them, hopefully.
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That motion comic I think was a mistake, there's not enough pages so far that give details or some adventure, I like their initally menacing, and the guy has a 'vegeta' vibe to him but it does need more of the story and stakes so far.
edit: So had a re-read and page 14-15 second chapter was such a diservice to krillin, (I assumed the motion comic kept it very brief) throws a punch, caught and knocked to the floor and already crippled. I think the artist took the 'Abridged' idea of krillin and went with it despite that being a parody and that krillin can actually hold his ground.
edit: So had a re-read and page 14-15 second chapter was such a diservice to krillin, (I assumed the motion comic kept it very brief) throws a punch, caught and knocked to the floor and already crippled. I think the artist took the 'Abridged' idea of krillin and went with it despite that being a parody and that krillin can actually hold his ground.