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Post by SSJ2bardock » Tue Sep 30, 2008 2:03 am

Terra-jin wrote:I'm not sure I understand your post... are you being sarcastic or what? If not, please support DBM. You have to understand that Salagir and Gogeta Jr. are doing this in their spare time, so it's not really your place to complain about what they release. On the other hand, you must be really hooked on this fanmanga to be that disappointed with 'just a coverpage' :wink:

Keep up the great work Salagir and Gogeta Jr.! I hope DBM gets very far!
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Post by Salagir2 » Tue Sep 30, 2008 3:52 am

The pages were updated, without the errors I hope :)

While I'm here, I have a question. What's the best writing for the Cyborgs ?
:arrow: 17
:arrow: #17
:arrow: A17 (Android 17)
:arrow: C17 (cyborg 17. In French it's usually C-17, pronounced "cé 17")

I want a writing that is near Japanese pronunciation, or writing, even if it must be different from the English version.

And when I search for Japanese, I see "Jinzōningen #17", but that's way too long ;)
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Post by Captain-Sora » Wed Oct 01, 2008 4:06 am

Just do #17. Great fan manga by the way, very refreshing from all the AF stuff. ;)

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Post by DNA » Wed Oct 01, 2008 5:59 am

Salagir2 wrote:The pages were updated, without the errors I hope :)

While I'm here, I have a question. What's the best writing for the Cyborgs ?
:arrow: 17
:arrow: #17
:arrow: A17 (Android 17)
:arrow: C17 (cyborg 17. In French it's usually C-17, pronounced "cé 17")

I want a writing that is near Japanese pronunciation, or writing, even if it must be different from the English version.

And when I search for Japanese, I see "Jinzōningen #17", but that's way too long ;)
Yeah, #17 is the best way to put it. I will have a re-read of all the pages later on this week to see if I can spot any errors and I'll tell you something. Again, you should make a Neko Majin Z universe! xD
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Post by SSJ2bardock » Wed Oct 01, 2008 5:22 pm

#17 is by far the least biased or possibly offending to people of different versions of the show.

The page this week was quite interesting and a revision if I may, a possible changing of the spelling from Barta to Burter or Butta (is that the Japanese spelling?) would be nice.
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Post by Chibi Mystic Gohan » Wed Oct 01, 2008 5:30 pm

Yeah, he's called 17号 (17-gou, or number 17), so I'd go with either #17 or No. 17.

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Post by Snail » Wed Oct 01, 2008 5:47 pm

Who, and what in the name of Kami is this I'K'L character? Creepy.

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Post by Dayspring » Wed Oct 01, 2008 6:00 pm

Snail wrote:Who, and what in the name of Kami is this I'K'L character? Creepy.
I think it was to be a member of Freeza's race, judging by the mother's ears and tail. I'K'L being a pun on "icle" from the word "icesicle."

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Post by Victator Supreme » Thu Oct 02, 2008 12:40 am

It would be cool to see a Garlic Junior universe. Garlic Junior defeated Gohan and Garlic Senior was successfully wished back.

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Post by Kaboom » Thu Oct 02, 2008 12:41 am

Dayspring wrote:Teen Bra drawing was hot.
If you mean the girl with Vegetto, I thought that was supposed to be a fused Chi-Chi and Bulma.
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Post by Bussani » Thu Oct 02, 2008 12:43 am

Snail wrote:Who, and what in the name of Kami is this I'K'L character? Creepy.
It's actually explained in the page's comment on the website I think.

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Post by SSj_Rambo » Thu Oct 02, 2008 12:47 am

Bussani wrote:
Snail wrote:Who, and what in the name of Kami is this I'K'L character? Creepy.
It's actually explained in the page's comment on the website I think.
Yes, it is:
Salagir wrote:I stole the idea of I'k'l to Yuyu Hakusho. At the end of this manga, there is a tournament, one challenger has a son a few days before, and he is a challenger too.

I added this character in order to show some diversity and that other universes could be very different. I wanted to add others, like beings with no physical body, some magical incarnations, etc... but there was too many characters already.

For the letters of his name, I chose them at random. For the idea of putting many apostrophes, I stole it from Sluggy Freelance, the best webcomic in the world.
This character is also mentioned on page 17 (panel 6).

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Post by Scarz » Thu Oct 02, 2008 3:43 am

Page 50 was highly unsettling. I was fickle at first but now I'm truly a fan of DB multiverse. I hope I don't see anymore Alien Male pregnant things. I'm having a hard time just seeing one.

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Post by Captain-Sora » Thu Oct 02, 2008 3:55 am

Scarz wrote:Page 50 was highly unsettling. I was fickle at first but now I'm truly a fan of DB multiverse. I hope I don't see anymore Alien Male pregnant things. I'm having a hard time just seeing one.
XD yeah that was a bit weird. The child looked disturbingly large too. XD
But even if he was born, how would they have expected the baby to fight?

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Post by Bussani » Thu Oct 02, 2008 4:08 am

Captain-Sora wrote:XD yeah that was a bit weird. The child looked disturbingly large too. XD
But even if he was born, how would they have expected the baby to fight?
Cell Juniors fight right out of the...uh...womb?

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Post by Saiyan-Professor » Thu Oct 02, 2008 9:12 pm

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Scarz wrote:Page 50 was highly unsettling. I was fickle at first but now I'm truly a fan of DB multiverse. I hope I don't see anymore Alien Male pregnant things. I'm having a hard time just seeing one.
XD yeah that was a bit weird. The child looked disturbingly large too. XD
But even if he was born, how would they have expected the baby to fight?
Salagir stated:
I stole the idea of I'k'l to Yuyu Hakusho. At the end of this manga, there is a tournament, one challenger has a son a few days before, and he is a challenger too.
He is referring to the character Yomi in Yu yu Hakusho and during the Saga of the Three Kings. Yomi has a son named Shura that is matured in a incubation chamber perhaps after the egg from a female demon was fertilized in vitro. The child grows to at least prepubescence then he fights his father (Yomi) in the Makai Tournament. However, the weird thing is that Yomi was a male demon (well at least I believe he was) and he did not literally carry the child to term himself. I was freaked out by that situation myself and asked Salagir on his website what the story was behind I'k'l and his mother/father.
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Post by Captain-Sora » Thu Oct 02, 2008 11:07 pm

Saiyan-Professor wrote:
Captain-Sora wrote:
Scarz wrote:Page 50 was highly unsettling. I was fickle at first but now I'm truly a fan of DB multiverse. I hope I don't see anymore Alien Male pregnant things. I'm having a hard time just seeing one.
XD yeah that was a bit weird. The child looked disturbingly large too. XD
But even if he was born, how would they have expected the baby to fight?
Salagir stated:
I stole the idea of I'k'l to Yuyu Hakusho. At the end of this manga, there is a tournament, one challenger has a son a few days before, and he is a challenger too.
He is referring to the character Yomi in Yu yu Hakusho and during the Saga of the Three Kings. Yomi has a son named Shura that is matured in a incubation chamber perhaps after the egg from a female demon was fertilized in vitro. The child grows to at least prepubescence then he fights his father (Yomi) in the Makai Tournament. However, the weird thing is that Yomi was a male demon (well at least I believe he was) and he did not literally carry the child to term himself. I was freaked out by that situation myself and asked Salagir on his website what the story was behind I'k'l and his mother/father.
Oh, I should watch those volumes of him appearing then, I couldn't get my hands on the 2 or 3 DVDs before the final 2. >_<

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Post by JulieYBM » Thu Oct 09, 2008 5:51 pm

Page 52 is up and it seems Fat Boo of Universe 11 is up against some 'Bujin'. Interesting.

I'd also like to say the loyalty to doing new pages is quite inspiring. It takes a lot of work to do what you do.
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Post by Rocketman » Thu Oct 09, 2008 5:59 pm

JulieYBM wrote:Page 52 is up and it seems Fat Boo of Universe 11 is up against some 'Bujin'. Interesting.
Bujin is one of Bojack's henchmen.

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Post by mAcChaos » Thu Oct 09, 2008 6:39 pm

Buu doesn't look fat enough. But other than that, good.
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