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Post by Forgotten Hero » Mon Oct 27, 2008 12:40 am

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Forgotten Hero wrote:Just to note on this new page in Multiverse: What's up with Trunks coming from ten years after the Cell games? Oh and #16 returns...Awesome!
I just realized, he looks a lot younger than I'd expect him to. That's about the same way he looked after the Cell Games and I know that over 10 years Gohan and Goten aged noticably and they are all of the same race.
He is a bit young, and also: why does Trunks have long hair and no Saiyajin armor. I liked that look for him. I'm not into his purple sweater and sword.
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Post by Super Ghost Kamikaze » Mon Oct 27, 2008 2:30 am

SSj_Rambo wrote:
Forgotten Hero wrote:Just to note on this new page in Multiverse: What's up with Trunks coming from ten years after the Cell games? Oh and #16 returns...Awesome!
I just realized, he looks a lot younger than I'd expect him to. That's about the same way he looked after the Cell Games and I know that over 10 years Gohan and Goten aged noticably and they are all of the same race.
I dunno, I think Goku doesn't change too noticeably from the Saiyan saga through the Buu saga, other than the obvious muscle build-up. Perhaps Trunks was just in that stage of development...

...or you're looking too far into a fan project. =p

Also, I think the lack of armor is appropriate for a Trunks that finally has found himself in a time of peace and rebuilding.

I always did wonder if that Trunks ever found a way to bring the people killed by the androids back to life, though.

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Post by Captain Awesome » Mon Oct 27, 2008 2:37 am

I'm really enjoying the art, but to me it still seems wasted on the story.

The story just feels like a poor excuse to have a bunch of impossible fights.
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Post by Super Ghost Kamikaze » Mon Oct 27, 2008 2:42 am

Captain Awesome wrote:I'm really enjoying the art, but to me it still seems wasted on the story.

The story just feels like a poor excuse to have a bunch of impossible fights.
...Really?

To me it feels like a poor excuse to have a bunch of impossible meetings, with the fights being almost unimportant, short, and at most a source of humor.

The short little meetings are amusing enough for me to continue following it, really.

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Post by Captain Awesome » Mon Oct 27, 2008 3:01 am

Well the first pages are a fight between Broli and Vegetto. :roll:
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Post by JulieYBM » Sat Nov 01, 2008 2:31 pm

Oops, looks like Gohan went to the wrong Universe!

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Post by Rocketman » Sat Nov 01, 2008 3:16 pm

JulieYBM wrote:Oops, looks like Gohan went to the wrong Universe!
I'm guessing this is Vegetto's universe.

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Post by Scarz » Sat Nov 01, 2008 6:28 pm

16: "I didn't want to at first...But there are several Son Goku here and I'd like to kill one."

...Awkward. I guess Bulma forgot to uninstall the kill mode in Android 16. I wonder if Gohan's in the wrong part of Universe, if he is this is going to be very interesting.

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Post by JulieYBM » Wed Nov 05, 2008 3:27 pm

Page 60 is up!

So, in this universe Gokû is dead and Pan never met him. I wonder if that means Gohan beat Boo.

Also, from a page 59 comment:
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The 10 first page are a "trailer" and meant to confuse the fans, but still they must recognize Vegetto and Broly instantly. If I show them directly in a new transformation, it's just "too much" I think.
So they are the same, in this part of the fight.
I do not say they can or they can't transform more ;)

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Post by Rocketman » Wed Nov 05, 2008 4:03 pm

"Subscribed" Gotenks? I'd correct it, but I'm not sure what you were going for there. I assume "formed" or "learned how to fuse" or something like that.

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Post by JulieYBM » Wed Nov 05, 2008 5:29 pm

Rocketman wrote:"Subscribed" Gotenks? I'd correct it, but I'm not sure what you were going for there. I assume "formed" or "learned how to fuse" or something like that.
'Entered Gotenks into the competition', I assume.

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Post by SSJ2bardock » Wed Nov 05, 2008 6:48 pm

JulieYBM wrote:
Rocketman wrote:"Subscribed" Gotenks? I'd correct it, but I'm not sure what you were going for there. I assume "formed" or "learned how to fuse" or something like that.
'Entered Gotenks into the competition', I assume.
Yeah that's what I thought too, I would have went with registered.
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Post by JulieYBM » Wed Nov 05, 2008 7:22 pm

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Rocketman wrote:"Subscribed" Gotenks? I'd correct it, but I'm not sure what you were going for there. I assume "formed" or "learned how to fuse" or something like that.
'Entered Gotenks into the competition', I assume.
Yeah that's what I thought too, I would have went with registered.
As I understand English isn't their strong suit.

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Post by Drabaz » Wed Nov 05, 2008 8:11 pm

JulieYBM wrote:Page 60 is up!

So, in this universe Gokû is dead and Pan never met him. I wonder if that means Gohan beat Boo.
Another scenario could be that when Goku and Vegeta fused, the fusion never wore off. Thus, Pan never met Goku or Vegeta....just Vegetto.
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Post by DNA » Wed Nov 05, 2008 9:06 pm

JulieYBM wrote:Page 60 is up!

So, in this universe Gokû is dead and Pan never met him. I wonder if that means Gohan beat Boo.
This is universe #16, Vegetto's universe.
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Post by Thanos6 » Thu Nov 06, 2008 3:03 am

Rocketman wrote:"Subscribed" Gotenks? I'd correct it, but I'm not sure what you were going for there. I assume "formed" or "learned how to fuse" or something like that.
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Post by Dayspring » Thu Nov 06, 2008 12:44 pm

The whole "subscribed" thing is "Frenglish." Registration in this context is quite literally identical to subscription, it's just something we don't say in English anymore. When translating from French to English, they probably didn't know that.
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Post by Thanos6 » Thu Nov 06, 2008 12:47 pm

Oh, I know. Doesn't mean I can't use it for a joke. ;)
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Post by Salagir2 » Sun Nov 09, 2008 2:50 pm

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Snail wrote:Who is this I'K'L character?
I think it was to be a member of Freeza's race, judging by the mother's ears and tail. I'K'L being a pun on "icle" from the word "icesicle."
It's not a member of Freeza's, and its name wasn't based on anything, but I totally accept this pun as official :)
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Super Ghost Kamikaze wrote:I always did wonder if that Trunks ever found a way to bring the people killed by the androids back to life, though.
DBs don't revive people dead for more than a year, so I guess not. (maybe Namekiens don't have this limit)
Dayspring wrote:The whole "subscribed" thing is "Frenglish.".
Yes. Still not fluent in English. Just saw latest James Bond and didn't understand most of the dialogs. Bad movie though.
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Post by Dayspring » Sun Nov 09, 2008 4:54 pm

Knew it was Vegetto's universe.

And yay for me introducing an official name pun. :P
Too bad I mispelled "icicle." :oops:
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