Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by funrush » Wed Jun 08, 2011 6:28 pm

"How dare you making a fool of the saiyans' prince!" I agree, they need to get someone to change this terrible english. How hard could it be to change it to, "How dare you make a fool of the Saiyan's prince!(or of the prince of Saiyans)".

On topic, Bido's done for. I wonder what these next pages will be. I think it might be something like:

Page 395: Bido gets hit and dies.
Page 396: Bojack's crew freaks out: possibly some trash talk from Vegeta.
Page 397: Bojack and/ or Zangya gets ready to take Vegeta down: more Vegeta trash talk.
Page 398: Bojack and/or Zangya start to fight Vegeta.
Page 399: Vegeta and maybe Trunks' death.
Page 400-401: Post battle scenes.

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Post by Metrite » Thu Jun 09, 2011 1:13 am

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The only thing that has convinced me to even bother visiting their site any during this lame special is to get a laugh out of the crazy comments and things making fun of it. :lol:

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Post by SRB2Unleashed » Fri Jun 10, 2011 6:39 pm

Maybe Vegeta will save them after all :P
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by kaialone » Fri Jun 10, 2011 6:45 pm

Wait is this an actual update or another parody? I cant tell anymore at this point.
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Post by Z-Dragon » Fri Jun 10, 2011 6:59 pm

kaialone wrote:Wait is this an actual update or another parody? I cant tell anymore at this point.
This new page is an actual update. And Metrie posted the page above me is a parody about those DBZ characters dressed as some DC Comic characters.

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by funrush » Fri Jun 10, 2011 7:36 pm

The line "Do that sucker" really stood out to me. More terrible art going on with Bido's death. At least this page went as I predicted a few posts up. 6 pages left until the real chapter! :D

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Post by TrunksTrevelyan0064 » Sat Jun 11, 2011 4:54 am

I don't think this artist knows what 'motion lines' are.

The worst thing is that I think this artist can do much better than this, they're just not bothering. Maybe it's supposed to be funny?
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Senzu_Bean » Sat Jun 11, 2011 2:21 pm

How about the new chapter? How does it compare to previous chapters so far?

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Post by Kaboom » Sat Jun 11, 2011 3:11 pm

It's just as bad as most. Only in a different way.
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Post by Asura » Sun Jun 12, 2011 5:03 pm

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Anyone notice Piccolo with half his body blown off? Hah.

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Post by TrunksTrevelyan0064 » Sun Jun 12, 2011 5:11 pm

HUN HUN HUN!! Vegeta's dead.
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Post by bkev » Sun Jun 12, 2011 6:18 pm

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Post by Zionist » Sun Jun 12, 2011 6:26 pm

Why do DBM Specials hate Piccolo :evil:
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Godo » Sun Jun 12, 2011 7:59 pm

It's funny how Bojack swats Vegeta away like he had just killed a fly.

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by funrush » Sun Jun 12, 2011 8:16 pm

It kind of went how I thought it would. Except Bojack killed him in one page with absolutely no effort whatsoever.

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by JulieYBM » Sun Jun 12, 2011 8:27 pm

Well, Vegeta was drained and off guard, it's not that surprising.
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Post by Sun-Wukong » Sun Jun 12, 2011 8:52 pm

Maybe my expectations are just really low at this point, but this page was actually pretty good. The art is decent within considering the style and it got right to the point.
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Rocketman » Sun Jun 12, 2011 10:48 pm

Y'know what the sad part is?


This is a better showing than Vegeta got in the movies.

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Pantalones » Sun Jun 12, 2011 11:15 pm

The worst thing is that I think this artist can do much better than this, they're just not bothering. Maybe it's supposed to be funny?
Possibility #1: They're trying to make a decent alternate-universe backstory... and failing miserably. (I think this one's probably the most likely, considering how the Cell special from a while back was.)

Possibility #2: They're trying to make scenes of pointless violent death funny... and failing miserably (just like pretty much everyone else who's ever tried to make pointless violent death scenes funny. Some people may disagree with me here, but there's a word for these people, and that word is "wrong." And also possibly "psychopath.")

Possibility #3: They're intentionally doing something stupid just to piss people off. (Not too likely, but then again, this is the Internet...)

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