Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by OhHiRenan » Fri Jun 19, 2020 8:45 am

I just wanted a fun What-If tournament, man. I didn't sign up for this filicide shit.
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by jjgp1112 » Fri Jun 19, 2020 3:28 pm

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Sheesh, gonna need the whole senzu plant for that
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Kanassa » Fri Jun 19, 2020 3:36 pm

God, this is one of the most blandest 'Reason you suck' speeches I've ever read. Also, Salgir, a big wall of squished text doesn't make it any better.
When Super apparently shoves Goku down our throats:


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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Fionordequester » Fri Jun 19, 2020 3:55 pm

Sandman wrote:Last line does not convey the same message in English as in French or other latin based languages.

In my opinion, even something as simple as "You are not special" or "You are ordinary" would been much better.
So basically, "other people have problems too, and they don't go flying off the handle!"
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by RandomGuy96 » Fri Jun 19, 2020 4:07 pm

This whole plot point feels so anti-Dragon Ball.
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He's probably referring to the Bardock special. Zarbon was the one who first recommended destroying Planet Vegeta because the saiyans were rapidly growing in strength.
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by TobyS » Fri Jun 19, 2020 5:02 pm

Yamcha almost certainly did not cheat on Bulma:
He was afraid of Women, Bulma was the flirty one.
Yamcha wanted to get married (it was his gonna be his wish)
He suggested they settle down in the Trunks saga.
Alternate future Trunks is not a reliable source.
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by ZeroNeonix » Fri Jun 19, 2020 6:10 pm

God, the Broken English is strong with this page.

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Post by Marco Polo » Fri Jun 19, 2020 6:51 pm

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Post by FoolsGil » Fri Jun 19, 2020 7:26 pm

Fucking epic :lol:
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Post by Slangh » Sun Jun 21, 2020 2:11 pm

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Ah, the wall of text was very effective!

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by goku the krump dancer » Sun Jun 21, 2020 2:15 pm

Absolutely inexcusable! Horrible, HORRIBLE writing right here folks, YIKES. Now we’re stuck here for the next four fricken months!
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by SSJgogeto » Sun Jun 21, 2020 2:27 pm

I want to laugh and cry at the same time.

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Post by Neo-Makaiōshin » Sun Jun 21, 2020 3:46 pm

I'm tempted to say that this is the worst string of of events (writing wise) in DBM thus far, I hope we have reached absolute botton, and thus what comes next is nothing but improvements...and we'll have to wait four months to see if that ever happens.
Lore is NOT story, and it never was, and you should stop spreading this nonsense.
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Kanassa » Sun Jun 21, 2020 4:13 pm

So, all this plodding, gruesome mess of wanking and death... And the solution was just to call Bra Mcfly a chicken.
When Super apparently shoves Goku down our throats:


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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by coola » Sun Jun 21, 2020 5:38 pm

Question, did Salagir made fun of GT and its writing a couple of times? If so, he really shouldn't do it, as his writing make DBGT look like masterpiece...I probably won't post new pages until October :)
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by FoolsGil » Sun Jun 21, 2020 5:54 pm

Achievement Unlocked: Talk No Jutsu.

Well, the massacre is over, at least.
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by JulieYBM » Sun Jun 21, 2020 6:12 pm

Daughters don't often show it when their abusive fathers abuse them. They act out in other ways, which could be a combination of doing whatever they can to please their abuser or loudly proclaiming they are their own person while being shitty themselves. The paneling and dialogue here is atrocious but that's not unique to fan projects.

Majin Bra getting torn down by her non-combat junkie self from a different universe is a fitting end for her.
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by jjgp1112 » Sun Jun 21, 2020 7:15 pm

Ladies & Gentlemen, our long national nightmare is over!
Yamcha: Do you remember the spell to release him - do you know all the words?
Bulma: Of course! I'm not gonna pull a Frieza and screw it up!
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by TheGodfather93 » Sun Jun 21, 2020 9:38 pm

Man, I hope she lost the M because Babidi died, not because she got talk no jutsu'd and somehow found the mental fortitude to snap out of mind control.

If Majin Vegeta couldn't lose the M despite going against Babidi's wishes, there's no reason Bra should be able to.

Edit: Just saw a comment from Salagir saying Babidi's still alive and that she broke out of it on her own.

Well, fair enough if he want to go that route with his story, but given all the atrocities she's committed without remorse, I find it incredibly hard to believe that a tantrum from an alternate version of herself would bring her back from the Dark Side.
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Koitsukai » Sun Jun 21, 2020 10:43 pm

I never been trolled like that before.

It must be a laugh riot when you read the whole thing, go through all the maming, and limbs flying around and get to this conclusion

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