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Post by coola » Fri Mar 04, 2016 3:02 pm

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Post by Lord Beerus » Fri Mar 04, 2016 3:31 pm

This kinda reminds me of the battle between Goku and Beerus in Battle Of Gods where Beerus toyed with SSJ3 Goku on King Kai's Planet.
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Post by dbgtFO » Fri Mar 04, 2016 4:00 pm

Lord Beerus wrote:This kinda reminds me of the battle between Goku and Beerus in Battle Of Gods where Beerus toyed with SSJ3 Goku on King Kai's Planet.
I thought exactly the same. This whole page feels like a throwback to that fight with Gotenks mimicking Goku by charging at Buu, then appearing above him instead and throwing a punch Buu easily catches. Of course here's where the comparisons stops as Gotenks throws a mouth blast at Buu. In BoG Beerus threw Goku away. IIRC it's exactly the same way the fight begins in BoG.
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by ekrolo2 » Fri Mar 04, 2016 4:11 pm

Love it or hate it, SSJ3 never quite looked this damn good in the official manga imo.
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Post by Marco Polo » Fri Mar 04, 2016 4:41 pm

ekrolo2 wrote:Love it or hate it, SSJ3 never quite looked this damn good in the official manga imo.
Because it was basically a joke in the official manga, not a serious form.
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Post by Lord Beerus » Fri Mar 04, 2016 4:46 pm

ekrolo2 wrote:Love it or hate it, SSJ3 never quite looked this damn good in the official manga imo.
I thought SSJ3 appeared quite awesome in the manga too.
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Post by ekrolo2 » Fri Mar 04, 2016 5:00 pm

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ekrolo2 wrote:Love it or hate it, SSJ3 never quite looked this damn good in the official manga imo.
I thought SSJ3 appeared quite awesome in the manga too.
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It looks pretty good in its introduction shot but afterward, it doesn't have much in the way of noticeable ones in the confines of purely the manga.
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Post by Mewzard » Fri Mar 04, 2016 6:40 pm

ekrolo2 wrote:It looks pretty good in its introduction shot but afterward, it doesn't have much in the way of noticeable ones in the confines of purely the manga.
Mainly because it's not used much, and in the few times it is used, it never really leads to a hero's victory over a foe.
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Post by Kamiccolo9 » Fri Mar 04, 2016 7:11 pm

You know, I have my gripes with the comic every now and then....

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Post by Doctor. » Fri Mar 04, 2016 7:41 pm

His artwork is fantastic, even though sometimes it gets a bit too detailed for its own good, but the paneling needs work.
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Post by Fionordequester » Sat Mar 05, 2016 8:13 pm

Doctor. wrote:His artwork is fantastic, even though sometimes it gets a bit too detailed for its own good, but the paneling needs work.
How does his paneling need work, out of curiosity?
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Post by BlazingBarrrager » Sat Mar 05, 2016 8:13 pm

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ekrolo2 wrote:It looks pretty good in its introduction shot but afterward, it doesn't have much in the way of noticeable ones in the confines of purely the manga.
Mainly because it's not used much, and in the few times it is used, it never really leads to a hero's victory over a foe.
Only because Goku and Gotenks ignore the ki drain issue and drag that fight like they usually do. Goku flat out called himself on it when talking to Vegeta.
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Post by Doctor. » Sat Mar 05, 2016 9:36 pm

Fionordequester wrote:
Doctor. wrote:His artwork is fantastic, even though sometimes it gets a bit too detailed for its own good, but the paneling needs work.
How does his paneling need work, out of curiosity?
I'm not well-versed with the proper terminology to explain it properly, but the panels seem too... samey? They don't vary a whole lot, it's common to find a page with panels that are the exact same size.
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Post by saiyanvegetable » Sun Mar 06, 2016 12:51 am

Fionordequester wrote:
Doctor. wrote:His artwork is fantastic, even though sometimes it gets a bit too detailed for its own good, but the paneling needs work.
How does his paneling need work, out of curiosity?
His artwork is great, but his panels are very linear and expository. There's not too much room for creativity.
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Gorou » Sun Mar 06, 2016 6:39 am

After this fight there will be another lunch break ??
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Post by Marco Polo » Sun Mar 06, 2016 8:35 am

GogetaJr is still the best DBM artist.
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Post by rereboy » Sun Mar 06, 2016 8:43 am

Doctor. wrote:
Fionordequester wrote:
Doctor. wrote:His artwork is fantastic, even though sometimes it gets a bit too detailed for its own good, but the paneling needs work.
How does his paneling need work, out of curiosity?
I'm not well-versed with the proper terminology to explain it properly, but the panels seem too... samey? They don't vary a whole lot, it's common to find a page with panels that are the exact same size.
If they were doing chapter by chapter releases he would have more freedom to vary. Since it's page by page, they want to have decent progress in almost every page, which implies something like 5 panels or 6, and there's only so many ways to have 5 or 6 panels in a rectangular page.

For example, in this current chapter, all pages had different panel composition, but they all had 6 panels. So, he does vary but he can only do so much with 6 panel per page.
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Post by dbgtFO » Sun Mar 06, 2016 2:57 pm

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by ekrolo2 » Sun Mar 06, 2016 3:00 pm

Well, it was established that 3s stamina issues get worse the stronger you are. It only makes sense he'd de-fuse so fast :lol:
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Post by dbgtFO » Sun Mar 06, 2016 3:06 pm

ekrolo2 wrote:Well, it was established that 3s stamina issues get worse the stronger you are. It only makes sense he'd de-fuse so fast :lol:
Perhaps Buu's magic will allow them to refuse immediately rather than having to wait for an hour.
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