Fanmanga - Dragon Ball New Age

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Re: Fanmanga - Dragon Ball New Age

Post by Malik_DBNA » Thu Oct 05, 2017 12:25 am

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Captain Strawberry wrote:How long will it take to catch up?
Chapter 8 will require the most redraws of the earlier chapters now that I have finished Chapter Zero. Chapter 13 is the final Chapter with the lowest quality once printed, so once I finish there, it shouldn't be too long before I can resume the main story
So, you won't redraw Chapters 22-35?
Other than panels that may need it here or there, I don't plan to

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Re: Fanmanga - Dragon Ball New Age

Post by Malik_DBNA » Thu Oct 05, 2017 2:09 pm

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slight alteration to the text in page 2. Mr. Satan is no longer deceased in DBNA

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Re: Fanmanga - Dragon Ball New Age

Post by wakabayashy » Fri Oct 06, 2017 9:31 am

your fan manga is very one of the best (if it's none the best), please continue, you're a master :D

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Re: Fanmanga - Dragon Ball New Age

Post by Regarder » Sat Oct 07, 2017 8:46 am

Shouldn't it say "whom his match with at the Budokai is fondly remembered by the populace"?

Keep up the good work!

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Re: Fanmanga - Dragon Ball New Age

Post by sangofe » Sat Oct 07, 2017 11:22 am

Regarder wrote:Shouldn't it say "whom his match with at the Budokai is fondly remembered by the populace"?

Keep up the good work!
The with really doesn't go well where you put it in this line.

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Re: Fanmanga - Dragon Ball New Age

Post by Xeztin » Sat Oct 07, 2017 7:44 pm

Malik_DBNA wrote:Image
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slight alteration to the text in page 2. Mr. Satan is no longer deceased in DBNA
You cold have always had Satan fake his death since everytime something bad happens the city looks for him to stop the bad guys. :P

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Re: Fanmanga - Dragon Ball New Age

Post by Regarder » Sun Oct 08, 2017 9:15 am

sangofe wrote:
Regarder wrote:Shouldn't it say "whom his match with at the Budokai is fondly remembered by the populace"?

Keep up the good work!
The with really doesn't go well where you put it in this line.
It's awkward sounding, but the line doesn't make grammatical sense without it.

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Re: Fanmanga - Dragon Ball New Age

Post by Malik_DBNA » Sun Oct 08, 2017 12:36 pm

I did miss the with, but it should be "WITH whom his match at the Budokai..."

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Re: Fanmanga - Dragon Ball New Age

Post by Regarder » Sun Oct 08, 2017 5:17 pm

Yeah, that's on the mark!

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Re: Fanmanga - Dragon Ball New Age

Post by ChahikoDBZ » Mon Oct 16, 2017 6:32 pm

Please make the ship happen.

Loving the new stuff Malik! I'm looking forward to reading the next parts of New Age once they're finally out :)
(Fanfiction link coming soon.)

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Re: Fanmanga - Dragon Ball New Age

Post by sangofe » Fri Oct 20, 2017 3:48 pm

Hey Malik. It's been so long since I read your manga, but how should I resume reading your manga? I don't actually remember what happened last of what you released a year + ago (my sense of time might be off, mind you).

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Re: Fanmanga - Dragon Ball New Age

Post by Malik_DBNA » Sat Oct 21, 2017 4:27 pm

sangofe wrote:Hey Malik. It's been so long since I read your manga, but how should I resume reading your manga? I don't actually remember what happened last of what you released a year + ago (my sense of time might be off, mind you).
I'm not sure. The pages I'm posting are revisions to Chapter Zero. My earlier chapters had lower quality when printed and a few plot holes that I need to fix, so I'm working on them first

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Re: Fanmanga - Dragon Ball New Age

Post by Xeztin » Sun Oct 29, 2017 7:11 pm

Malik_DBNA wrote:
sangofe wrote:Hey Malik. It's been so long since I read your manga, but how should I resume reading your manga? I don't actually remember what happened last of what you released a year + ago (my sense of time might be off, mind you).
I'm not sure. The pages I'm posting are revisions to Chapter Zero. My earlier chapters had lower quality when printed and a few plot holes that I need to fix, so I'm working on them first
Are you going to release a new version of the first 3 volumes since your redoing the chapters? Also any progress on volume 4?

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Re: Fanmanga - Dragon Ball New Age

Post by Captain Strawberry » Sun Oct 29, 2017 9:36 pm

Your drawings look a lot like Toriyama's.
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