Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

[OhHiRenan]

I just wanted a fun What-If tournament, man. I didn't sign up for this filicide shit.

[jjgp1112]

Sheesh, gonna need the whole senzu plant for that

[Kanassa]

God, this is one of the most blandest 'Reason you suck' speeches I've ever read. Also, Salgir, a big wall of squished text doesn't make it any better.

[Fionordequester]

Last line does not convey the same message in English as in French or other latin based languages.

In my opinion, even something as simple as "You are not special" or "You are ordinary" would been much better.

So basically, "other people have problems too, and they don't go flying off the handle!"

[RandomGuy96]

This whole plot point feels so anti-Dragon Ball.

[TobyS]

https://i.postimg.cc/hhWJd7t8/Bra-vs-bra.png

[ZeroNeonix]

God, the Broken English is strong with this page.

[Marco Polo]

Top 10 anime beatdowns

[FoolsGil]

https://i.postimg.cc/hhWJd7t8/Bra-vs-bra.png

Fucking epic

[Slangh]

Ah, the wall of text was very effective!

[goku the krump dancer]

Absolutely inexcusable! Horrible, HORRIBLE writing right here folks, YIKES. Now we’re stuck here for the next four fricken months!

[SSJgogeto]

I want to laugh and cry at the same time.

[Neo-Makaiōshin]

I'm tempted to say that this is the worst string of of events (writing wise) in DBM thus far, I hope we have reached absolute botton, and thus what comes next is nothing but improvements...and we'll have to wait four months to see if that ever happens.

[Kanassa]

So, all this plodding, gruesome mess of wanking and death... And the solution was just to call Bra Mcfly a chicken.

[coola]

Question, did Salagir made fun of GT and its writing a couple of times? If so, he really shouldn't do it, as his writing make DBGT look like masterpiece...I probably won't post new pages until October

[FoolsGil]

Achievement Unlocked: Talk No Jutsu.

Well, the massacre is over, at least.

[JulieYBM]

Daughters don't often show it when their abusive fathers abuse them. They act out in other ways, which could be a combination of doing whatever they can to please their abuser or loudly proclaiming they are their own person while being shitty themselves. The paneling and dialogue here is atrocious but that's not unique to fan projects.

Majin Bra getting torn down by her non-combat junkie self from a different universe is a fitting end for her.

[jjgp1112]

Ladies & Gentlemen, our long national nightmare is over!

[TheGodfather93]

Man, I hope she lost the M because Babidi died, not because she got talk no jutsu'd and somehow found the mental fortitude to snap out of mind control.

If Majin Vegeta couldn't lose the M despite going against Babidi's wishes, there's no reason Bra should be able to.

Edit: Just saw a comment from Salagir saying Babidi's still alive and that she broke out of it on her own.

Well, fair enough if he want to go that route with his story, but given all the atrocities she's committed without remorse, I find it incredibly hard to believe that a tantrum from an alternate version of herself would bring her back from the Dark Side.

[Koitsukai]

I never been trolled like that before.

It must be a laugh riot when you read the whole thing, go through all the maming, and limbs flying around and get to this conclusion