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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Pantalones » Fri May 02, 2014 11:29 pm

I haven't had any real problems with this fight before this point, but I'm not a fan of the random-audience-decapitations thing. Random death just isn't funny (and heads being cut off is especially un-funny to me, for some reason. Not sure why.) I would've left it at "Black Knight reference, pointy-eared guy losing the top of his hairdo, and maybe Uub's arm," not half a dozen random aliens getting heads chopped off and such. Maybe some regenerating guys like Cell and the various Buus too, since it's not as awful when they can just effortlessly grow it back.

And yeah there is absolutely no reason for this guy to not get disqualified at this point.

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Post by Saiga » Fri May 02, 2014 11:30 pm

Pantalones wrote:I haven't had any real problems with this fight before this point, but I'm not a fan of the random-audience-decapitations thing. Random death just isn't funny (and heads being cut off is especially un-funny to me, for some reason. Not sure why.) I would've left it at "Black Knight reference, pointy-eared guy losing the top of his hairdo, and maybe Uub's arm," not half a dozen random aliens getting heads chopped off and such. Maybe some regenerating guys like Cell and the various Buus too, since it's not as awful when they can just effortlessly grow it back.

And yeah there is absolutely no reason for this guy to not get disqualified at this point.
According to the rules you have to specifically attack people, making this 100% okay.

Stupid rules, but there you go.
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Godo » Sat May 03, 2014 12:22 am

Are some of you getting seriously offended by material of which could be present in a Tom and Jerry cartoon?
There is not a single drop of blood in any of the panels, and furthermore, all the characters are making a goofy face to boot. None of the decapitations/slicings are even remotely realistic, even for Dragonball's standards.
I don't see how this could be worse than Oob (also an innocent bystander to the fight) getting his arm cut off with blood spurting.

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Post by Fionordequester » Sat May 03, 2014 12:41 am

Then burn it off with ki.

It really can't be too hard to remove, Freeza was able to bust his armour off laughably easy. Being stretchy doesn't make it invincible.

Of course Bra should simply have the strength to tear it despite being stretchy but whatever.
That's probably what she'll do next. Also, stress can make even trained soldiers not think quite as critically as they otherwise would.
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Post by FrogTrigger » Sat May 03, 2014 1:35 am

Fionordequester wrote:
Then burn it off with ki.

It really can't be too hard to remove, Freeza was able to bust his armour off laughably easy. Being stretchy doesn't make it invincible.

Of course Bra should simply have the strength to tear it despite being stretchy but whatever.
That's probably what she'll do next. Also, stress can make even trained soldiers not think quite as critically as they otherwise would.
Isn't the gravity still affecting her? I think that's why she's having trouble

Figure Eleim blasts it off and Bra rewards him with a boot to the head?

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Saiga » Sat May 03, 2014 3:46 am

Godo wrote:Are some of you getting seriously offended by material of which could be present in a Tom and Jerry cartoon?
There is not a single drop of blood in any of the panels, and furthermore, all the characters are making a goofy face to boot. None of the decapitations/slicings are even remotely realistic, even for Dragonball's standards.
I don't see how this could be worse than Oob (also an innocent bystander to the fight) getting his arm cut off with blood spurting.
This isn't a Tom and Jerry cartoon, and no-one is getting offended. Just criticizing the poor writing.
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Post by rereboy » Sat May 03, 2014 9:10 am

Godo wrote:Are some of you getting seriously offended by material of which could be present in a Tom and Jerry cartoon?
There is not a single drop of blood in any of the panels, and furthermore, all the characters are making a goofy face to boot. None of the decapitations/slicings are even remotely realistic, even for Dragonball's standards.
I don't see how this could be worse than Oob (also an innocent bystander to the fight) getting his arm cut off with blood spurting.
Er.. You do realize that losing an arm and the like has ALWAYS been presented as a serious thing and a big deal, both in the original manga AND this fan-manga when Uub lost his arm the first time. Sure, its wasn't THAT dramatic, but it was portrayed seriously. This change of tone just doesn't fit and is actually in bad taste since it was presented in a serious light before.

Tom and Jerry are never serious at all, so its never presented as serious.

The only thing I found funny was the Black Knight reference purely because of the reference.

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Post by coola » Sat May 03, 2014 10:17 am

Actually, i remember two episodes of Tom and Jerry that had quite dark moments, 1. when Tom failed to stop mices, and was executed for that 2. When Tom and Jerry decide to commit suicide, because of getting dumped by girlfriends. Personally, i don`t have anything against dark humor, i like watching Family Guy and South Park. But, for me, its just not funny, that`s all. I root for Bra, becasue I'm not big fan of these space warriors rejects. And for past few fights, the most boring fighters won (18 and Gotenks)
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Post by dbzfan7 » Sat May 03, 2014 1:53 pm

rereboy wrote:
Godo wrote:Are some of you getting seriously offended by material of which could be present in a Tom and Jerry cartoon?
There is not a single drop of blood in any of the panels, and furthermore, all the characters are making a goofy face to boot. None of the decapitations/slicings are even remotely realistic, even for Dragonball's standards.
I don't see how this could be worse than Oob (also an innocent bystander to the fight) getting his arm cut off with blood spurting.
Er.. You do realize that losing an arm and the like has ALWAYS been presented as a serious thing and a big deal, both in the original manga AND this fan-manga when Uub lost his arm the first time. Sure, its wasn't THAT dramatic, but it was portrayed seriously. This change of tone just doesn't fit and is actually in bad taste since it was presented in a serious light before.

Tom and Jerry are never serious at all, so its never presented as serious.

The only thing I found funny was the Black Knight reference purely because of the reference.
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Also I have 0 problems with the pacing now...because I no longer give much of a shit on this fancomic anymore. Now it's only worth seeing how stupid things will get, or if things will get better. It's a win win on entertainment now...even if it's for the wrong reasons.
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Post by Rocketman » Sat May 03, 2014 3:48 pm

dbzfan7 wrote:Also what the hell is with the last panel. They should be serious as PEOPLE ARE DYING. I guess U16 Goten and Piccolo just don't give a shit. This isn't funny. This is not dragon ball humour at all.
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Post by Kid Buu » Sat May 03, 2014 3:58 pm

Rocketman wrote:
dbzfan7 wrote:Also what the hell is with the last panel. They should be serious as PEOPLE ARE DYING. I guess U16 Goten and Piccolo just don't give a shit. This isn't funny. This is not dragon ball humour at all.
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Kamiccolo9 » Sat May 03, 2014 4:09 pm

Rocketman wrote:
dbzfan7 wrote:Also what the hell is with the last panel. They should be serious as PEOPLE ARE DYING. I guess U16 Goten and Piccolo just don't give a shit. This isn't funny. This is not dragon ball humour at all.
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Zephyr » Sat May 03, 2014 6:46 pm

Rocketman wrote:"I killed and ate your mom"
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Post by FoolsGil » Sun May 04, 2014 2:15 pm

Bout time she got serious.

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Post by TheGmGoken » Sun May 04, 2014 2:26 pm

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Post by Marco Polo » Sun May 04, 2014 2:28 pm

Why did they make Goku dumber in this comic than in the official manga? I'm sure he could have come up with Piccolo's observation on his own.

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Post by Kaboom » Sun May 04, 2014 2:33 pm

Marco Polo wrote:Why did they make Goku dumber in this comic than in the official manga? I'm sure he could have come up with Piccolo's observation on his own.
Well, she did the "two fingers to the forehead" thing, which as far as I'm aware has only been necessary for Yardratan teleportation.
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Post by Marco Polo » Sun May 04, 2014 2:45 pm

Kaboom wrote:
Marco Polo wrote:Why did they make Goku dumber in this comic than in the official manga? I'm sure he could have come up with Piccolo's observation on his own.
Well, she did the "two fingers to the forehead" thing, which as far as I'm aware has only been necessary for Yardratan teleportation.
But Piccolo guessed that it has to be Kaioshin's teleportation technique. Goku could have guessed the same since he is a smart fighter.

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Post by coola » Sun May 04, 2014 2:49 pm

Actually, it is Kibito technique, Kaioshin couldn`t teleport until after they merged.
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