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Fanfiction - The monster that Lived on

Post by Gog » Wed Jan 18, 2017 11:26 pm

Chapter one

I'll try to update this tale, eh I don't know once a day? Week?



[spoiler]Son Goku, and Freeza their climatic battle on namek had come to a fierce end. With Freeza presumed dead and Goku himself lost to the recesses of space, the Z fighters believed that no more trouble would befall them, and that they had won their hard earned peace.
A year later they were proven wrong, as fate would have it


A large ship slowly touched down onto one of Earth’s hundreds of hard dry unusable spaces, that nobody used or bothered to go to no more.

Krillin gaped afraid at the ship, remembering it from his horrific experience on Namek, he turned to Piccolo “that’s him” he babbled terrified.

Piccolo looked down to him “I know, and with Son Goku gone, it seems that we have the fight of our lives” Piccolo replied strongly. Krillin nodded, in earnest.

Krillin looked to Tien, who hadn’t even said a word this entire time, not a single word this entire time, what goes up in that head? Krillin questioned to himself, Tien noticed Krillin staring. “It’s time to brace yourself for the battle ahead” he stated plainly.

Krillin nodded along and slipped into his fighting pose

The ship’s door slowly opened, and a ramp slowly extended. “Well I don’t need you, any of you worthless morons, as I’ve been training- “Vegeta stated arrogantly.

Piccolo rolled his eyes at what the arrogant prince was stating and wished that he could have killed him sooner.

But then this situation would have been worse off, Piccolo acknowledged to himself, he sighed, inwardly, without Goku theirs just no way we can actually win this, Vegeta even knows it, he just hides it best, we just can’t win, were going to die. Piccolo realised to himself, accepting it, but knowing that he would only ever go down fighting.


“- but in this battle I will- Who is that?” Vegeta asked, when he realised that Freeza wasn’t by himself.



A squadron of useless soldiers that served no other use, then to do the work, of cleaning the planet for Freeza, hustled out of the ship, stopping outside of it, in a group. Freeza and his father King Cold regally descended from the ship

Freeza stood next to King cold, his father dwarfing him in size, “Honestly Freeza this super saiyan nonsense has infected your mind, you probably just had a moment-” King cold looked down at his son, realising that he had just lost most of his body, and was currently only barely alive due to some quickly strung together cybernetics.

Freeza looked up at him, and glared menacingly.

“Erm, a pretty bad moment if I’d say it myself” King cold finished lamely, at the very least, this will be the last I see of him King cold calculated to himself. Freeza noticed the Z-fighters in their entirety. A dark sadistic smile crossed his dark lips.

“Oh paa~paa” Freeza politely asked, King cold didn’t even bother looking to him, to know what he wanted. “Really? Freeza? Really” King questioned when he noticed the earthling’s in the distance. “Oh come on, while the men are making sure the planet, is nice and pretty, I’ll entertain myself” Freeza replied defiantly.

“Oh fine then, why do you even bother? Not even worth it in my opinion.” King cold complained.

Freeza grinned and slowly started moving towards the Z fighters.



“HE’S COMING!” Piccolo shouted, he slipped into his fighting pose, Tien, yamcha, chiatzu all slipped into one as well. Vegeta grimaced at the amount of power Freeza had coming off him at this moment.

Not even a fraction, Vegeta thought to himself remembering namek, and that fool’s kakarot, and Freeza’s battle, completely helpless, he was.

Vegeta’s body tensed up, as he slipped into a fighting pose, never again, he thought to himself, as Freeza arrogantly strolled towards them, Vegeta would never be a slave to Freeza, he would die fighting.



A young man strolled in front of the small army, wearing a jacket. King cold stared at the man. “Freeza, it looks like some more natives have arrived, what do you think?” King cold asked him, Freeza stopped his movement and turned his head to the blue haired boy.

“He’s probably with them”, Freeza replied boredom cleverly hiding in his voice. Something about that imbecil is off… Freeza pondered to himself, as he studied the suicidal lemming who was walking to them.

Is that a sword? Freeza thought to himself, when he saw the pommel on the boy’s back.

Freeza’s mind suddenly filled with nasty ideas, on what he could use that sword for. Only ever used a sword once, on that saiyan, Tarble was it? Freeza questioned to himself, doesn’t matter, all that matters… A big wide grisly smile lit up on the mechanical sociopath’s face.

Is that I can use it again.




Piccolo stared at the human who was walking unfazed to the soldiers ahead of him, “is he insane” Piccolo growled. “How did he even get here? Isn’t the city, 50 miles from here?” Tien questioned, “actually it’s a few miles” Yamcha corrected, Tien turned his head to Yamcha.

Yamcha nervously laughed, “my team had a gig a month ago, first one” he explained. “Well whoever it is, he’s about to win the Darwin award” Vegeta said, using the catch phrase that Bulma would
scream at him, from time to time. A bitch of a women, Vegeta scornfully thought of her. Their best moments only in bed.



King Cold pursed his lips as he made a decision, “kill him” he commanded his men. They nodded to him and started shooting at the young blue haired man.

The man disappeared in front of their eyes, the squad started buckling over, their throats slit, with their eyes bulging out they all fell to the ground. The young man stood in the middle of the corpses, he put his sword back on his back.

Freeza stared at the boy, and scoffed, why the hell did papa have to bring these worthless men along? ‘sigh’ now I’ll have to do all the work myself once this is over. Freeza scrutinised his men’s corpses, dead people always look ugly, he regarded.

King Cold rolled his eyes, must I do it myself, contemplated the usefulness of the current army, well that should change, the scientist are apparently building a gravity machine, or whatever, should be useful King cold contemplated all of this as he strolled over to the young man. The young man was walking towards him as well, leaving the pile of dead men behind him.



“Did he just…”, Vegeta asked. “I think he did” Piccolo stated, trying to make sense of what he saw, how could he move faster than what I could see? Is he even an earthling Piccolo pondered. “Wow he was really fast, I couldn’t even see him” Krillin stated impressed, at the feat.



“Uggh… At the very least you could have cleaned up the bodies” King Cold’s complained, King Cold stared down at the young man, who looked up at him, his piercing blue eyes, seemed to have seen some things.

“Your opinion won’t matter in the end as I’m going to kill you and Frieza” Trunks stated plainly. Huh wonder why he’d say Frieza, does he not know my name? Freeza pondered to himself.

King Cold stared down at Trunks, his face a mask of befuddlement, what a fool, I’ll tell him what he’s up against, probably won’t even comprehend what I say, “you, beat me? - “King Cold started laughing, he pointed at the blue haired man.

“-King Cold the father of Freeza, the king who has a power level of 90 million?” King cold stated saying the word with a certain gravitas. He raised a fist, King Cold arrogantly smirked, he opened the fist, and slapped the fool’s head expecting it to pop.

King Cold suddenly screamed in pain, as he felt his arm suddenly being wrenched off, he slowly stepped backwards. His bulbous eyes mad with pain, he screamed more when he felt the sword slice through his legs, cutting them off. I don’t want to die, I don’t want to die, he babbled desperately in his mind. King Cold slowly collapsed in front of his legs.

The super saiyan slowly walked to the head of the babbling, mad king, and raised his sword above his head, the super Saiyan brought the reddened sword down onto King Cold’s head, the super saiyan continually, silently hacked at King cold’s head until it was just a mere pulpy mess.

Freeza’s eyes widened, at the golden glow that consumed the saiyan, Freeza growled and banished the fear, he would not lose this time. I can’t lose Freeza realised.



Trunks stared at the monster, king cold. Trunks had to do this, apparently according to Gohan, these creatures were really strong, and could survive nearly anything, Frieza survived after losing most of his body. Though he’s basically an android now, Trunks realised to himself. Speaking of Frieza, Trunks cold eyes turned to Frieza, a jet of ki surrounded the blade, burning the blood, and brain matter off it. Trunks put the blade in its sheathe, he strolled towards the mechanical Tyrant.



Freeza stared at the super saiyan, strolling towards him, I’m much stronger than I was on namek, I can use the saiyan’s love of battle to power to allow myself to unlock my full power, Freeza smiled, at the thought of crushing not one but two super saiyans today
.
“Saiyan- “. “Trunks” Trunks interrupted, Freeza’s eye twitched at Trunk’s rude reply. “Do you want a good battle? If so then, it would be essential to allow me to power up” Freeza stated plainly, this will work, Freeza knew, the fool son Goku allowed it.

“No, I came to kill you, to save the future” those words froze Freeza’s heart. He won’t allow me to power up? There’s only one thing left… Trunks slowly walked towards him. Freeza manifested a large ball of orange ki in his hand. Trunks eyes widened at the weapon of death started dashing at him, Freeza roared and threw the ball of Ki down.



Trunks stared horrified at the ball of Ki that Freeza had thrown down. He wouldn’t? Trunks turned around, and flew to the Z-fighters, pushing his legendary power to the limit. I have to save them, there’s no way they could survive this. Trunks shouted at himself. The ball of ki behind him, expanded as all the power inside of it was unleashed.



Piccolo looked at the ball of Ki Freeza threw down, this is the end then… Gohan… I’m sorry. Piccolo closed his eyes, and waited for the wash of pain to come. Piccolo felt a uneasy presence in the air. “Open your damn eyes your idiot!” Piccolo groaned when he heard Vegeta’s voice, Piccolo opened his eyes, and stared at Trunks.

A massive crater lay a few miles in front of them, it was the attack Freeza had launched previously. The uneasy presence grew stronger.

“So your Trunks huh?” Piccolo asked “Yes I’m Trunks, and in a few minutes- “Piccolo stopped hearing Trunk’s voice when, he finally sensed the great power continually building up, all around them, he looked to his left and right, the rest of the Z-fighters had sensed it as well.

Trunks noticed their expressions of shock “huh what’s wrong, I killed King Cold, and Freeza-”, “YOU IDIOT, FREEZA’S STILL ALIVE!!” Vegeta shouted at Trunks, Trunks turned around to the crater, his super saiyan aura flared up.

Trunks unsheathed his sword, and gripped it tightly, he gestured for the Z-Fighters to leave. The Z-fighter’s aura’s powered up, and they burst into the sky their aura’s covering them, and trailing them as they slowly disappeared into the distance.

His super saiyan aura burst up around him, and he flew to the crater his golden aura wrapping around him.



“Did you feel that?” Krillin asked Piccolo, who growled through his gritted his teeth, “I did, the boy’s going to die”. Piccolo stated the fact bluntly. The Z-Fighters all raced as far away from the battle field as they could, because nobody would survive the wrath of the broken tyrant.



Trunks paused above the crater, even he was capable of feeling the evil energy that washed over this place, it felt heavy on his shoulders. Trunks descended down into the crater, the feeling of weight seemed to get stronger and stronger, the deeper he went. And even then is it getting stronger? Trunks pondered to himself as he finally touched the bottom.

Trunks slipped into a fighting pose the only one Gohan taught him before. Stay focused Trunks, he warned himself, he was in the most dangerous position, in his entire life, maybe worse than the-

The ground suddenly burst in front of him, Freeza roared at him, his brow sweaty, and his eyes murderous. Trunks flew backwards, when he saw his enraged opponent, Freeza flew up at him, easily outpacing him, Freeza raised both of his arms, his over muscular one, and his mechanical weaker one and hammered Trunks down into the ground.

Trunks got up out of the crater, breathing heavily, he felt his ribs, defiantly broken, he gritted his teeth, he would have to deal with it, where’s Goku? Trunks wondered to himself, he felt a death beam scrape his cheek, and looked up, to see Freeza.

His finger aimed at him, and a malicious grin on his face, how could he miss? Trunks thought to himself, he got up and flew towards the tyrant, he raised his sword above his head, as he charged at him. Freeza, wiped his sweaty brow, and disappeared from Trunk’s view.

Freeza hammered deliberately hammered Trunks into the crater, it was a big enough target that he couldn’t miss it.

Freeza wiped his brow, “ha…” he gasped. He slowly floated down to Trunks. Freeza landed behind Trunks, and looked down at him, who was lying down in a folate position. “Ha…. Oh, how’s your back Trunks? Must be similar to mine” Freeza joked.

Freeza noticed that the sword had fallen, a few meters away from Trunks, Freeza’s face lit up on the sight of it, he pulled it towards his hand with Telekinesis.

“Ha…. It was fun while it lasted Trunks, but now I have to wait for a real super saiyan, and I’ve got him a gift” Freeza stated, he raised the sword above his head, a large grin alit on his face, at the murder he would be committing.

Son Goku teleported onto the crater in his line of sight. “That’s enough Freeza”, Goku commanded when he saw the blue haired man in front of Freeza. Freeza suddenly threw the blade at Goku aiming for his head.

Goku didn’t move an inch as the blade completely missed him. A golden aura ignited around Goku, “I guess your aim isn’t what It used to be” Goku told him, Freeza growled. “I’M DOUBLE THE STRENGTH I WAS ON NAMEK!” Freeza roared at him.

“strength isn’t everything, if you can’t hit your opponent then what use is it for” Goku spoke, Freeza wiped the sweat off his brow, “gu-guh…Ho, ho, ho, what do you mean I can’t hit my opponent” Freeza politely asserted, Freeza’s mechanical foot came down and crushed Trunk’s neck, Goku’s eyes widened at the act Freeza committed, he clenched his fists and slipped into a fighting pose. “you see, I know where a head is, I know where you are, I think you know what comes next” Freeza stated.

Goku looked down at him coldly, “I win” he asserted, Freeza roared, and bull rushed him, Goku flew higher into the sky, Freeza stopped suddenly, he looked upwards and noticed Goku, flying upwards into the air. Freeza, flew after him, effortlessly catching up.

Freeza threw a punch, Goku it’d behind him and kicked him down into the ground, a barrage of death beams ensured from the crater, all of them missed Goku, who stared down at the bloated, mechanical figure below.

Freeza disappeared, and reappeared behind Goku, raising both of his fists above his head to hammer Goku into the ground, Goku turned his head, and it’d behind Freeza, Goku kneaded Freeza in the back, Freeza’s tail lashed out at Goku. Who it’d even further back.

Freeza turned around, he wiped some sweat off his fore head “ha…What is, that what are you doing?” Freeza stated, Goku stood their looking at Freeza. “It won’t matter if I tell you” Goku confirmed.

Freeza shot a death beam at Goku, who never even had to move to dodge it, “I’ll win the battle in the next hit” Goku explained to him, Freeza growled his half bloated face, looking unnatural compared to the mechanical side

Arrogant monkey, I’ll show- Goku punched Freeza’s face and it’d away. Freeza stood unmoving in the air, the punch not even fazing him. He floated in the air, unmoving with his face a mask of rage.



“Do you feel that?” Piccolo asked. “yeah, its Goku!” Krillin excitably stated. “No, not that you moron!” Vegeta insulted. “No, this energy, it’s getting bigger, and bigger” Piccolo stated



Freeza dropped to the ground, and wiped off the sweat of his brow, Goku flashed in front of him with a titanic amount of blue Ki cupped in his hands. Freeza’s eyes widened in fear, “KAMEHAMEHA” Goku screamed at Freeza, he brought all of the energy forward, and unleashed the attack at Freeza. A dark shield extended around the tyrant as he desperately sought any means to survive.

Freeza strained against the attack, which could so easily take his life, he strained and strained, as the attack pushed him further and further underground, until the attack fizzled out. Freeza stood alone in the dark, underground.

His overly bloated appearance started to fade, as his power shrunk and shrunk, and shrunk till it was less than nothing. “Ha…Ha, I still have a few years left” Freeza told himself, he held up his hand, a small pathetic ball of Ki cast some light, Freeza, felt his heart rate slowdown, and his metabolism slowed down.

I’ve never once run out of Ki before…I wonder… how… lo….ng? Freeza thoughts slowly spiralled out, he slowly fell down onto the ground, as he also fell into a hibernation to regain his lost Ki.


“hu….” Goku straightened up, his super saiyan aura flickered off, “so lemme see here” Goku put his fingers to his forehead, “Piccolo, Ten, Vegeta, Krillin” Goku flickered as he teleported to their Ki signatures.



Goku teleported into the middle of the group, who looked stunned at his new ability “hey guys! Missed me?” Goku cheerfully asked, “Goku!” Krillin shouted his name with happiness. “Heh, heh took you long enough” Piccolo stated. “You, idiot what took you so long!” Vegeta shouted angrily at Goku, who shyly scratched his head.

“Well I thought…That blue haired- “. “Trunks” the group all stated simultaneously. “-Trunks, Trunks could have taken Freeza...” An image of the broken saiyan emerged in Goku’s mind and he grimaced at what happened to him.

Piccolo noticed Goku’s grimace, must be thinking about that blue haired saiyan. “Don’t worry about it, we can revive him with the dragon balls” Piccolo assured him, Goku grinned, “Okay I’ll have to visit Bulma for that.”

Goku put his fingers against his forehead, “so small” he whispered while trying to locate her small Ki signature. “Oh what the hell is he doing- “Goku disappeared before Vegeta could complete the sentence.

Bulma sat on a table experimenting with the Hoi Poi capsules, honestly if I can get these to be able to store living organisms, then I can’t even imagine the amount- Bulma’s thoughts were interrupted when Goku crashed on the table, “heh, he, he, hey Bulma could I borrow the dragon radar?” He asked.



Much later, after Son Goku had gathered the seven dragon balls, a large green serpent towered, over them framed in the pitch black sky.

“WHAT BE YOUR WISH?” Shenron asked the group of warriors. Piccolo walked to the front, “Shenron, I ask of you to revive the one known as Trunks, and bring him here” Piccolo stated. “YOUR WISH IS MY COMMAND’ Shenron stated. Trunks appeared in front of the group, his eyes glazed, and expressionless.

“FARE YOU WELL” Shenron stated as his body dispersed, the seven dragon balls around him floated up, and each one shot into the distance. The dark sky, lightened up.

Trunks looked at the group, some spittle slowly dripped out of his mouth, Piccolo walked up to him, and stared him in the face, Trunks is a bit broken… “Oh stop, staring the boy in the face, and let me handle it!” Vegeta shouted, he pushed Piccolo out of the way.

Goku had a strained look on his face, if Vegeta doesn’t cut the attitude… Goku could only ponder what he would do.

“Listen to me boy” Vegeta grabbed Trunks face, and stared into his glazed eyes, “you’re a super saiyan, if you can’t even get over one death than your pathetic” Vegeta pushed Trunks backwards. Trunks did nothing, some more drool, pooled out of his mouth.

Vegeta growled, “your, are A SUPER SAIYAN!” He shouted, Vegeta punched Trunks in the jaw. Goku’s eyes narrowed, and he stepped forward, Piccolo put his arm out to stop him. Trunks stepped backwards, his eyes a little less glazed.

“PATHETIC!” Vegeta screamed, he lunged forward. A super saiyan glow erupted around, Trunks, who grabbed Vegeta’s fist, Vegeta grinned and jumped backwards.

“You never once told us where you came from, explain” Vegeta plainly asked, Trunks closed, his eyes, and opened them.

“I came from the future, to warn you”.[/spoiler]

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Re: Fanfiction - The monster that Lived on

Post by Gog » Sun Jan 29, 2017 5:25 pm

Chapter two

[spoiler]“Warn us about what?” Piccolo asked. “The androids, three years from now they will come, both of them stronger than Freez…” Trunks slowly trailed off, an awkward silence permeated from the group “…They kill all of you except for Goku” Trunks perked up.

“Wait a minute, how do I die?” Goku asks. Pointing at himself, Vegeta grins “I must have killed you then” he confirmed. Trunks shook his head, he reached inside of his pocket, and pulled out a small hoi poi capsule. He walked over to Goku, and gave him the medicine.

“That there will save your life” Trunks confirmed. Vegeta snorted, when he heard what Trunks stated, “a pill will save him from me? I don’t think so,” Vegeta scornfully mocked. Piccolo glared deeply at him. Vegeta noticed and arrogantly smiled “such a shame, I never got to wear your skin as my clothes” Vegeta stated.

“Try it, and you’ll see what happens” Piccolo cut back. Vegeta walked up to Piccolo and stared defiantly up into his eyes, “I know what will happen” Vegeta stated. Piccolo’s and Vegeta’s bodies tensed up. Goku started moving towards the two, too break them up, a hard look was present on his face. I can’t believe this, even Piccolo? Goku thought to himself.
“QUIT IT!” Trunks screamed. Vegeta and Piccolo turned their head’s to him, eyes widened and their expressions shocked. “I have come back here, from a world of death and pain! To save this one, so it doesn’t end up like the other one! SO STOP BICKERING LIKE CHILDREN!” Trunks furiously screamed at the two.

Vegeta’s nostrils flared up, and he walked away from Piccolo. Piccolo averted his eyes from Trunks I can’t believe I let Vegeta get too me. He thought shamefully to himself. Goku grinned and turned to Trunks, “wow! I actually thought that I would have to step in there” Goku sheepishly smiled.

“Okay Goku soon there will be an epidemic, it will be on the news, and you will die from it” Trunks explained to him, group’s eyes widened up when they heard about Goku’s apparent death. “Geez- “Goku stated he rubbed the back of his head. “-That’s really a load off, and especially with Freeza I’ll have to take this seriously” Goku admitted.

“So now your taking this seriously huh?” Vegeta stated angrily, Goku turned his head to Vegeta. “I’ve been taking this seriously Vegeta, the whole time I have” he confirmed to him. “I thank you all but I have to go back to the future to see if my mother is alive”. Vegeta’s expression ever so slightly softened at the word mother.

Piccolo looked down at him, noticing the change, wonder what’s up with him? Piccolo asked himself. Future Trunks floated off the ground, “I wish you the best of luck, with the future threat”, Future trunks blasted off into the distance, his white aura trailing after him.

Vegeta watched Trunks fly into the distance, eventually disappearing from his view. “I hope my son end’s up alright…” He wished, the group’s eyes widened and their mouths dropped. “V-vegeta, he’s your son?!?” Krillin asked. “How do you even know he is your son?” Piccolo questioned.

Vegeta smirked, “let’s just say the women’s been getting fatter, after our little tirades” Vegeta joked. Goku pursed his lips, it is true Trunks does have Bulma’s hair colour and he is capable of turning super saiyan. Goku sighed, unless some other saiyan came to the future. Than Vegeta’s right, he is his son.

If Trunks is here, then were is Gohan? Goku pondered to himself. “Well I’m going back to the women” Vegeta told everyone. “Um yeah, I’ll go back to Roshi’s place” Krillin sheepishly stated. Tien grunted.

Most of the group powered up, and flew to their own homes, the thought of the eventual androids on their minds, and how much they would need to improve to stop them.

Piccolo stood exactly where he was, silent, the events of the day washing over him. What use am I? He questioned to himself. Piccolo tightly clenched his hands. Today, I should have died today. Against the monster Freeza’s and his father’s might, I was less than nothing. I even lowered myself to Vegeta’s level and had to be told off like some child.

They all realised it, Yamcha, Krillin, Tien, they were outmached by Goku, and now Trunks, and soon even Vegeta… The dark truth washed over Piccolo. Even Vegeta has more worth in battle than me… Piccolo growled, “I will find a way to catch up to Son Goku” he promised.

Piccolo’s aura wrapped around him, trailing around him as he flew off into the distance.



Goku flew, knowing his destination. Wonder what ChiChi’s reaction will be? Goku worried to himself as he flew further north south, effortlessly managing to break the sound barrier. I wonder if she’ll still be mad at me if I tell her why I was away for so long? Goku pondered to himself. I wonder how Gohan’s doing? Goku finally thought to himself.

Large grey majestic mountains jutted up in the distance, a large forest spread out below all of the mountains. Trailing in the centre was a large sprawling, ancient river. A considerably large smile grew on Goku’s face at the sight of mount Paozu, his home.



Goku flew inwards of Mount Paozu, mountain after mountain spread ever side of him. Goku looked left and right, his eyes focused on a particularly small stubby mountain compared the rest. Goku’s face lit up, and he flew towards the base of it.

Goku travelled closer and closer to the base of the mountain, he saw a small little white oval sitting in a clearing. Goku willed himself to go faster, he landed in the front door. He rapped his knuckle against the door a few times.

Goku visibly recoiled in shock when he heard angry shoutings, loud thumping could be heard nearing the door. The door ripped open. “WHAT- “a dishevelled ChiChi screamed. ChiChi’s face softened when she saw Goku.

ChiChi stared at her Goku, her mouth agape, “G-Goku?” She gasped, ChiChi fell backwards.



Vegeta flew back to Capsule Corp, his mind alit with the passing day. Even though that boy’s a super saiyan, a dark grin ignited on Vegeta’s face. Even though my boy is a super saiyan, that doesn’t give him any right to treat me as he did. Vegeta flew through the skies did my counterpart ever ascend? Vegeta asked himself.

A while later Vegeta descended onto the front of Capsule Corp. He walked ahead, and kicked the door off the hinges. Why do they even bother to lock that thing? Vegeta questioned to himself, he arrogantly strolled to the kitchen, a path that he had long since been memorised.

Vegeta opened the fridge, and memorized what was in it. Ugh? What is this crap? He questioned. “Uh hem” a feminine voice interrupted. Vegeta rolled his eyes, and kept looking in the fridge to locate some scant sources of protein.

Vegeta felt her angry eyes burning through his neck. “Honestly women, how did you even knew I was in here” Vegeta told her. “Because it’s the only place you spend besides the gravity chamber!” Bulma shouted at him.

Vegeta rolled his eyes at her accusations. He slowly turned around, and stared at the women, who was embarrassingly enough, stood a few inches above him. “What do you even want women?” Vegeta asked disrespectfully.

Bulma put her hands to her waist, and huffed. “I came here to tell you a surprise, but since you’re such a gnome haired dick head, I might not as well even bother” Bulma complained. Vegeta chuckled, “then why did you even bother coming over if you aren’t going to tell me a surprise? Did you miss me?” Vegeta mocked.

“NO YOU HAVE A CHILD!” Bulma shouted, at him her face red with rage. Vegeta smiled, bulma’s words cementing his analysis’s “is that your so called big surprise? Honestly I’d say that my surprise is fifty times bigger than yours” Vegeta boasted.

“Your surprise, already know it, Goku the legendary SUPER SAIYAN- “Bulma said, Vegeta grimaced when she mentioned super saiyan and Kakarot’s earth name together. It should have been me, Vegeta spoke within.

Bulma noticed Vegeta’s look of discomfort, an arrogant smile spreading across her face, “-saved your ass from Freeza” Bulma asserted. “Honestly women, I never got to tell you what happened. A blue haired boy capable of turning super saiyan killed Freeza’s father- “. Bulma’s eyes widened in surprise when she heard of the blue haired saiyan. “Your pulling my leg, it- “. “No I’m not women, the child, he says his name is Trunks, and that he came from the future” Vegeta stated plainly.

Bulma’s eyes widened when Vegeta stated the facts to her. Vegeta grinned, when he knew that he had nearly convinced her “he also stated that he had to go back to make sure his mother is all right” Vegeta stated slowly, and arrogantly.



Trunks flew, the sun was just setting. With them alerted to the threat of the android’s and Goku having the heart virus. This future is safe, I’ll come back when they’ve beaten them. Trunks stated to himself as he flew through the orange skies.

The green forests below him began to spread out, growing sparser and sparser as he travelled. Eventually the forests below him had completely vanished, left behind long ago. Trunk’s flew through the air.

A large crater came into view. Effortlessly spanning miles in length, and depth. What a monster… Trunks thought to himself as he approached it from the air. Trunks floated in the air above the crater, he turned to his left. It should be over there, he believed as he flew.

The crater stretched on, and on seemingly going on forever. Trunks started getting desperate, did I really start off so far away? Trunk’s questioned to himself. Not acknowledging the truth. Trunk’s kept on flying, eventually he glimpsed the crater’s end.

Wrapping himself in his aura Trunks blasted off to the end of the crater. His eyes desperate trunk’s dropped to the ground. He turned around, the crater seemed to stretch on endlessly. Trunk’s thought’s slowed down, his mind not comprehending the truth of the situation.

Tears slowly dribbled from his eyes, as he stared blankly across the crater, the representation of what he had lost. “Gohan… I’m sorry” he garbled to himself, as he fell to his knees. “I’M SORRY” He cried out, tears streaming down his face.

The tears stopped, and Trunks whimpered to himself as the sun went down slowly. Nobody there to listen to his great sorrow.



Goku, stared at the window which revealed the night outside. He turned his head, and looked down to the assortments of food that ChiChi had prepared for him. Goku grinned, and started funnelling the food into his mouth. ChiChi sighed. She started daintily eating her food.

On the other side of table sat Gohan, a plate piled high with food, but compared to Goku’s his serving was still nothing in comparison. Goku sighed, and leant back against the chair, his face a messy greasy disgusting mess, he sported a cheerful grin.

“So Gohan how’s it been?” Goku happily asked to his son. “Um, I’ve been studying hard- “Gohan grinned to ChiChi, “- Mum’s the best teacher around” he told his father. Goku nodded, and turned his head to ChiChi. “Wow ChiChi, your cooking never changes!” Goku happily stated, ChiChi’s face hardened considerably at the remark.

“Um, ChiChi? What’s wrong?” Goku asked when he noticed her expression. “Nothing Goku, nothing” ChiChi said slowly. Goku grinned at her, and turned his attention towards Gohan. “So Gohan? Anything planned for tomorrow?” Goku pleasantly asked.

“Um, tomorrow’s a day off, I get to go to the- “. “That’s great tomorrow we go train- “. “NO TRAINING!” ChiChi ordered to Goku, Goku looked at ChiChi, noticing the look of ferocity present on her face. “Oh come on ChiChi, I have to train, to- “. “THERE IS NO REASON TO GO TRAINING ANYMORE! THE MONSTER THAT HURT MY SON IS DEAD, THERE IS NOBODY STRONGER THAN HIM, NOBODY STRONGER THAN YOU, SO THERE’S NO NEED TO TRAIN!” ChiChi interrupted him.

Goku ruffled through his gi, and pulled out the medicine from one of the folds, Gohan and ChiChi stared at the medicine dumbfounded. “What is that?” Gohan asked. “It’s what’s going to save my life, so that I can save all of yours” Goku stated plainly.

ChiChi, and Gohan stared at Goku dumbfounded. “Three years from now, two beings stronger than Freeza, and I are going to appear, I need to be there, and I need to be stronger so that I can stop them” Goku told them.

“T-that has to be a lie…” ChiChi asked to herself, not believing it from the look on Goku’s face. She sighed “go on then, save the world” she told him, “save it with Gohan I guess as he can go Super Saiyan” ChiChi admitted.

“Not exactly, exercising all the time will put too much stress on my body, so I’ll have to skip Monday, Wednesday, Friday, and Sunday. I’ll spend those days with you, and Gohan” Goku kindly assured to ChiChi.



In the starry night, Trunks flew through the air. Staying there, and doing nothing won’t help anyone, I-if I can’t save them… Trunk’s thoughts trailed off, knowing that he would never see his timeline again.
Trunk’s aura flared up, and he blasted off into the night, his destination clear, and true in his mind.



Trunk’s landed at the front of the door. He lightly rapped it with his fist, and waited in the dark. The door opened up, and Bulma looked up at him “so your Trunks? Did you decide to visit me?” Bulma asked cheerily. She turned around and walked inside her house.

Trunks strode in after her, closing the door behind them. “Honestly sit down dear, Vegeta will come after a few moments” Bulma assured him. Bulma started to head towards the gravity chamber, to get someone.

Trunk’s observed the lounge room, the style of it was certainly alien. In fact, didn’t mum give these away? Trunk’s pondered, trying to remember an event that he was certain that happened. Trunk’s moved into the room, and placed himself on the red couch, his face crinkled up when he felt the strange softness of it.



I. Need to. Catch. Up. Vegeta felt the strength of the gravity try to push him down. His face twisted up in the deep red light that the gravity chamber seemed to produce. I. Need to. Catch. Up, he repeated to himself an endless mantra as he practiced his combat routines. I. Need. To. Catch. Up Freeza stood above him, his ivory skin unblemished by his greatest attacks.

A being as cruel, but his power godlike compared to him.
Need. To. Catch. Up the endless mantra repeated in Vegeta’s mind endlessly. An image of Freeza flashed in his mind, his mortally wounded body patched up with crude cybernetics like a doll.

His power even managing to far surpass his maximum on Namek. I. Need. To. Catch. Up. Vegeta repeated to himself endlessly, performing each technique perfectly. His movements however where getting sluggish.

A picture of Kakarot appeared in Vegeta’s mind, his hair golden, his eyes a sharp blue, and a fiery aura encompassed his body. Vegeta stopped the motions his eyes widened, he paused there in the air. His lust for the form devoured all of his other thoughts I. Will. Catch. Up.

A moment from the day flashed in Vegeta’s mind, Trunks, no his son’s aura flickering out, as a super saiyan. “E-even if I can achieve the legend, there are beings still capable of crushing it” Vegeta grimaced and clenched his fists. “Then when I get the form. I MUST- “.

A hologram of the women flashed in front of Vegeta’s face “Just look at you, you’re a mess, you can’t look this way to our son” Bulma explained.

Vegeta huffed, his mind finally caught up with the realization “our son, or the one from the future” Vegeta asked. “The one from the future, you moron” Bulma lectured him. Vegeta’s eyes narrowed angrily “what the hell is he doing here?” Vegeta growled.



Vegeta stormed into the room, with Bulma running after him, Trunks turned to face him, his expression changing to fright when he saw the amount of rage present on Vegeta’s face. “How dare you boy” Vegeta threatened. The expression on Trunk’s face hardened and he stood up to face his father.

Anything could escalate them, It’s best if I don’t intervene. Bulma thought to herself. “Why are you here boy? Are you a coward? Why aren’t you in the future now?” Vegeta asked angrily. “Because the time machine was destroyed by Freeza” Trunk’s stated plainly.

Vegeta stared up at Trunk’s face, shocked with the answer, while Bulma observed the situation wide eyed when she heard what Trunks had confirmed. “Then the women will make a new time machine then” Vegeta claimed. “WHAT I DON’T KNOW HOW TO MAKE A TIME MACHINE!” Bulma shouted at him. “Because he’s here isn’t he, and you’re the smartest person on this planet”. “No she’s right, my mother, in the future told me that she only stumbled upon it in a fluke” Trunks told them.

The silence between the group dragged on. All of them assessing their situations.



In a basement underground, full of death. An old man draped in a white robe, lay down on an operating table, he turned his head to his left, and there was an identical old man. Lacking the top part of his head. Dr Gero felt his thoughts slowing down as the medicines were pumped into his body, for the procedure.

His thoughts stopped, as he fell into the deepest of sleeps.



And even deeper underground the monster slept on.[/spoiler]

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Post by Kamiccolo9 » Sat Feb 04, 2017 2:58 pm

You really need to proofread your stuff, man. The punctuation, grammar, and spelling in this are kinda awful. Nobody can really address your content unless you make it readable.
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Re: Fanfiction - The monster that Lived on

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Kamiccolo9 wrote:You really need to proofread your stuff, man. The punctuation, grammar, and spelling in this are kinda awful. Nobody can really address your content unless you make it readable.
:oops: Yeah, that is a problem, I kinda rushed the chapters.

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Gog wrote:
Kamiccolo9 wrote:You really need to proofread your stuff, man. The punctuation, grammar, and spelling in this are kinda awful. Nobody can really address your content unless you make it readable.
:oops: Yeah, that is a problem, I kinda rushed the chapters.
What was the point of rushing them and why don't you make an account in fanfiction net
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The gr wrote:
Gog wrote:
Kamiccolo9 wrote:You really need to proofread your stuff, man. The punctuation, grammar, and spelling in this are kinda awful. Nobody can really address your content unless you make it readable.
:oops: Yeah, that is a problem, I kinda rushed the chapters.
What was the point of rushing them and why don't you make an account in fanfiction net
I just typed them up, but I never checked the grammar, also I have no interest in making a fanficiton.net account, whatsoever

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Post by Dbzfan94 » Sat Feb 04, 2017 5:28 pm

Gog wrote: I just typed them up, but I never checked the grammar, also I have no interest in making a fanfiction.net account, whatsoever
Why is that? Fanfiction.net, despite the stigma, is where fanfiction is supposed to go.

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Dbzfan94 wrote:
Gog wrote: I just typed them up, but I never checked the grammar, also I have no interest in making a fanfiction.net account, whatsoever
Why is that? Fanfiction.net, despite the stigma, is where fanfiction is supposed to go.
I know, I know, it's just that the tale would get lost among the ungodly amount of fanficitons...

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Re: Fanfiction - The monster that Lived on

Post by Dbzfan94 » Sat Feb 04, 2017 7:20 pm

Gog wrote:
Dbzfan94 wrote:
Gog wrote: I just typed them up, but I never checked the grammar, also I have no interest in making a fanfiction.net account, whatsoever
Why is that? Fanfiction.net, despite the stigma, is where fanfiction is supposed to go.
I know, I know, it's just that the tale would get lost among the ungodly amount of fanficitons...
There's not that many in the DBZ section. Besides, it's better than getting lost here.

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Re: Fanfiction - The monster that Lived on

Post by Gog » Sat Feb 04, 2017 7:24 pm

Dbzfan94 wrote:
Gog wrote:
Dbzfan94 wrote:
Why is that? Fanfiction.net, despite the stigma, is where fanfiction is supposed to go.
I know, I know, it's just that the tale would get lost among the ungodly amount of fanficitons...
There's not that many in the DBZ section. Besides, it's better than getting lost here.
Yeah, but I just don't want to create a fan ficiton.net account

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Re: Fanfiction - The monster that Lived on

Post by Dbzfan94 » Sat Feb 04, 2017 7:26 pm

Gog wrote:
Dbzfan94 wrote:
Gog wrote:
I know, I know, it's just that the tale would get lost among the ungodly amount of fanficitons...
There's not that many in the DBZ section. Besides, it's better than getting lost here.
Yeah, but I just don't want to create a fan ficiton.net account
Your laziness is actually a bit frightening. It takes longer to make a Kanzenshuu account yet you did that

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Re: Fanfiction - The monster that Lived on

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Dbzfan94 wrote:
Gog wrote:
Dbzfan94 wrote:
There's not that many in the DBZ section. Besides, it's better than getting lost here.
Yeah, but I just don't want to create a fan ficiton.net account
Your laziness is actually a bit frightening. It takes longer to make a Kanzenshuu account yet you did that
Yeah, I know. All it took was some waiting, and besides, I actually need to take what Kamiccolo9 said about the grammer, punctuation, and spelling and actually fic up the tale.

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Re: Fanfiction - The monster that Lived on

Post by TheUltimateNinja » Sat Feb 11, 2017 6:16 am

Only 2 chapters?

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