I have improved over six years, and my proportioning of the body parts has improved, but I won't lie, it's not perfect, I still have lots of problems drawing bodies, in fact for each 'well drawn' picture you'll see you can bet there's a scrap bit of A4 lying about my room with the same picture drawn many times on it 'till I got it right! Also (as before) it's still obvious that I'm better at drawing faces than the body, this is because when I doodle I just draw faces and leave out the body, which resulted in this outcome, but it can pass. I really only wanted to re-draw the 2 chapters to compare to my old art (the link is in my sig), like a hobby due to being bored so I don't even know if I'll do chapter 3 yet. Living in London and being 25 is hard right now! Getting a job and such, so time ain't on my side, but I'll try and do what I can but I ain't promising nothing!

It's not inked, I'm not good with computers so much so it's not as polished as DBMultiiverse, it's a bit in raw fomat, sorry for that, but at the least I've used Paint to put in computer text and also another program to change the contrast and all that stuff.
Anyways, a few things I've changed about the manga before I post it. Firstly, it's all re-done, secondly I'm not copying hardly anything rom the original manga (I say hardly 'cos of the Uub Kamehameha which I kept as I liked it and SSJ3 Goku from the back view), it's now read from right to left, so it really is a manga and not a comic! I've also tried to vary the panels a bit more, as the old manga has a lot of 'talking heads' so I tried to draw more different positions. I have re-drawn all of chapter 1, I just need to sort out the darkness setting for the other pages and I'll post it tomorrow or something.
Enjoy the manga!
It takes place after Z and before GT. Remember it's read right to left!













