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Fic idea.

Post by Hades » Tue May 21, 2013 5:50 pm

How does this sound?

DBZ/Heart of Darkness
Goku and Chi-Chi have settled down and have a son, Gohan. As the years go by, Goku decides to meet up with his friends at Capsule Corp. When he arrives, he senses something. A pod crashes nearby, and it turns out to be a Saiyan named Nappa. He gives the cliffnotes version of Goku's heritage, and tells him that his Brother Raditz and their leader, Vegeta, have gone rogue, and Freeza dispatched Nappa to go after them. After a year or so preparing, Goku leaves with Nappa, Tenshinhan, and Piccolo. Along their investigations, they find out that Vegeta and Raditz are on Namek, which are rumoured to have their own set of dragonballs. The objectives become clear: find Raditz and Vegeta, and stop them before they use the dragonballs. Along the way, Goku and Piccolo will encounter unpleasant truths about their origins, and look into the mirror.
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Re: Fic idea.

Post by TheGmGoken » Thu Jun 27, 2013 11:35 am

Hades wrote:How does this sound?

DBZ/Heart of Darkness
Goku and Chi-Chi have settled down and have a son, Gohan. As the years go by, Goku decides to meet up with his friends at Capsule Corp. When he arrives, he senses something. A pod crashes nearby, and it turns out to be a Saiyan named Nappa. He gives the cliffnotes version of Goku's heritage, and tells him that his Brother Raditz and their leader, Vegeta, have gone rogue, and Freeza dispatched Nappa to go after them. After a year or so preparing, Goku leaves with Nappa, Tenshinhan, and Piccolo. Along their investigations, they find out that Vegeta and Raditz are on Namek, which are rumoured to have their own set of dragonballs. The objectives become clear: find Raditz and Vegeta, and stop them before they use the dragonballs. Along the way, Goku and Piccolo will encounter unpleasant truths about their origins, and look into the mirror.
Honestly sounds like a good retelling of the story.

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Re: Fic idea.

Post by Hades » Fri Jun 28, 2013 4:20 am

I wonder who should be the Kurtz figure: Vegeta, Super Kami Guru or Freeza?
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Re: Fic idea.

Post by TheGmGoken » Fri Jun 28, 2013 4:52 am

Hades wrote:I wonder who should be the Kurtz figure: Vegeta, Super Kami Guru or Freeza?
Vegeta. Freeza will plot his downfall.

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Re: Fic idea.

Post by Kamiccolo9 » Fri Jun 28, 2013 12:02 pm

Hades wrote:I wonder who should be the Kurtz figure: Vegeta, Super Kami Guru or Freeza?
Guru would be an interesting twist. I say go with that.
(Not to mention that I can easily imagine TFA Guru going, "The horror, the horror!") :P
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Re: Fic idea.

Post by dbzfan7 » Fri Jun 28, 2013 1:15 pm

Hades wrote:How does this sound?

DBZ/Heart of Darkness
Goku and Chi-Chi have settled down and have a son, Gohan. As the years go by, Goku decides to meet up with his friends at Capsule Corp. When he arrives, he senses something. A pod crashes nearby, and it turns out to be a Saiyan named Nappa. He gives the cliffnotes version of Goku's heritage, and tells him that his Brother Raditz and their leader, Vegeta, have gone rogue, and Freeza dispatched Nappa to go after them. After a year or so preparing, Goku leaves with Nappa, Tenshinhan, and Piccolo. Along their investigations, they find out that Vegeta and Raditz are on Namek, which are rumoured to have their own set of dragonballs. The objectives become clear: find Raditz and Vegeta, and stop them before they use the dragonballs. Along the way, Goku and Piccolo will encounter unpleasant truths about their origins, and look into the mirror.
Why does Goku go with Nappa? Does Nappa mislead them? Nappa isn't very bright and even with a years worth of training Goku and Tenshinhan would still be pretty useless. Nappa wouldn't need Goku's help. Also why would Piccolo join. He hates Goku and doesn't have a reason to join. He only joined Goku against Raditz because he didn't stand a chance alone. After that fight he was then forced to bring out Gohans power which lead him to becoming good. What does Nappa do that makes Piccolo join.
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Re: Fic idea.

Post by Dr. Machismo » Sat Jun 29, 2013 6:32 am

Can't Raditz and Nappa switch roles in this?
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Re: Fic idea.

Post by Hades » Sun Jun 30, 2013 8:00 pm

Kamiccolo9 wrote:
Hades wrote:I wonder who should be the Kurtz figure: Vegeta, Super Kami Guru or Freeza?
Guru would be an interesting twist. I say go with that.
(Not to mention that I can easily imagine TFA Guru going, "The horror, the horror!") :P
All you need is a fat Marlon Brando as Vegeta/Freeza and we're set.
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Re: Fic idea.

Post by miguelnuva1 » Wed Jul 03, 2013 7:42 am

I agree with switching Raditz and Nappa's role.

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