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This is my fanfic. It originally began as a parody of DBM's U7 but I started incorporating a bunch of old fanfic ideas that I've had like Broly falling in love, a Spartan-like group of Saibamen, Babidi and Hoi teaming up, the story of Sandland taking place in the Demon Realm, etc.
When DBS came out I decided to continue from there and cover those sagas. I was never really good at writing so I went with a comic format by using panels from DBM, Kanzenban edition of the original manga, Toyble's AF, and the DBS manga. Don't expect a great story but I would like to hear your thoughts if anyone wants to read it.
When DBS came out I decided to continue from there and cover those sagas. I was never really good at writing so I went with a comic format by using panels from DBM, Kanzenban edition of the original manga, Toyble's AF, and the DBS manga. Don't expect a great story but I would like to hear your thoughts if anyone wants to read it.
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Anybody who's anybody knows Gast and Palz! I hope you update more often.Skar wrote:This is my fanfic. It originally began as a parody of DBM's U7 but I started incorporating a bunch of old fanfic ideas that I've had like Broly falling in love, a Spartan-like group of Saibamen, Babidi and Hoi teaming up, the story of Sandland taking place in the Demon Realm, etc.
When DBS came out I decided to continue from there and cover those sagas. I was never really good at writing so I went with a comic format by using panels from DBM, Kanzenban edition of the original manga, Toyble's AF, and the DBS manga. Don't expect a great story but I would like to hear your thoughts if anyone wants to read it.
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I don't know if I want to link mine (just on fanfiction.net so not a manga style one). Partly because its a crossover one, partly because of apprehension.
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I always wanted to write a story about Ginyu Force being a boy or rock band with Freeza as their manager but I'm too lazy to write it and post it in Fanfiction.net
If you ask me for the boy band formation :
• Ginyu - ¿?
• Burter - ¿?
• Jeice - The Sensible one
• Guldo - ¿?
• Recoome - ¿?
or the rock band formation :
• Ginyu - Vocal
• Burter - Guitar
• Jeice - Bass
• Guldo - Keyboard
• Recoome - Drums
Zarbon & Dodoria act as the roadies and the concerts take place in different planets ruled by Freeza.
If you ask me for the boy band formation :
• Ginyu - ¿?
• Burter - ¿?
• Jeice - The Sensible one
• Guldo - ¿?
• Recoome - ¿?
or the rock band formation :
• Ginyu - Vocal
• Burter - Guitar
• Jeice - Bass
• Guldo - Keyboard
• Recoome - Drums
Zarbon & Dodoria act as the roadies and the concerts take place in different planets ruled by Freeza.
Check out some of my topics:
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Boy Band works better for them, with the whole posing and dancing thing they already have going.
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Is Frieza a crime boss in this? Are the Ginyu Force in deep debt?Tian wrote:I always wanted to write a story about Ginyu Force being a boy or rock band with Freeza as their manager but I'm too lazy to write it and post it in Fanfiction.net
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Kanassa wrote:- FoolsGil, Out of Context, 2017FoolsGil wrote:I hope Mark is dead. But chances are the dragonballs will bring his stupid ass back.
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Freeza is Great Leader that will pop their heads if the Ginyu Force doesn't sing their songs about his praise.Kanassa wrote:Is Frieza a crime boss in this? Are the Ginyu Force in deep debt?Tian wrote:I always wanted to write a story about Ginyu Force being a boy or rock band with Freeza as their manager but I'm too lazy to write it and post it in Fanfiction.net
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You are right. making them a rock band would be a waste of the team's choreography.Jackalope89 wrote:Boy Band works better for them, with the whole posing and dancing thing they already have going.
He's still a tyrant ruler in this story but only by day. By night, he's a reowned music producer in Frozen Records (yeah, I changed it because I think the manager thing fits more with Zarbon)Kanassa wrote: Is Frieza a crime boss in this? Are the Ginyu Force in deep debt?
About the Ginyu Boys, they aren't in a deep debt.
Also, I've been planning them to have an eternal rivalry with another boy band called "The Elite" composed of Vegeta, Nappa and Raditz.
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Dragon Ball's Argentinian broadcast history
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Dragon Ball's Argentinian broadcast history
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Thanks man and long time no chat . I'm currently waiting for the DBS manga to catch up and then I'll work on the Universe Survival saga. After that Cell and the Shadow Dragons are the only villains left to cover.FoolsGil wrote:Anybody who's anybody knows Gast and Palz! I hope you update more often.
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I see you are influenced from the Burst Limit credits stills (has Vegeta, Nappa, and Raditz posing).Tian wrote:You are right. making them a rock band would be a waste of the team's choreography.Jackalope89 wrote:Boy Band works better for them, with the whole posing and dancing thing they already have going.
He's still a tyrant ruler in this story but only by day. By night, he's a reowned music producer in Frozen Records (yeah, I changed it because I think the manager thing fits more with Zarbon)Kanassa wrote: Is Frieza a crime boss in this? Are the Ginyu Force in deep debt?
About the Ginyu Boys, they aren't in a deep debt.
Also, I've been planning them to have an eternal rivalry with another boy band called "The Elite" composed of Vegeta, Nappa and Raditz.
http://www.kanzenshuu.com/forum/viewtopic.php?f=11&t=40715&start=20#p1439892
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Not really...because I never played Burst Limit.ShadowBardock89 wrote:I see you are influenced from the Burst Limit credits stills (has Vegeta, Nappa, and Raditz posing).Tian wrote:You are right. making them a rock band would be a waste of the team's choreography.Jackalope89 wrote:Boy Band works better for them, with the whole posing and dancing thing they already have going.
He's still a tyrant ruler in this story but only by day. By night, he's a reowned music producer in Frozen Records (yeah, I changed it because I think the manager thing fits more with Zarbon)Kanassa wrote: Is Frieza a crime boss in this? Are the Ginyu Force in deep debt?
About the Ginyu Boys, they aren't in a deep debt.
Also, I've been planning them to have an eternal rivalry with another boy band called "The Elite" composed of Vegeta, Nappa and Raditz.
Check out some of my topics:
Nickelodeon & Nicktoons airings | List of "Pérolas"
Dragon Ball's Argentinian broadcast history
Nickelodeon & Nicktoons airings | List of "Pérolas"
Dragon Ball's Argentinian broadcast history
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Tian wrote:Not really...because I never played Burst Limit.ShadowBardock89 wrote:I see you are influenced from the Burst Limit credits stills (has Vegeta, Nappa, and Raditz posing).Tian wrote:
You are right. making them a rock band would be a waste of the team's choreography.
He's still a tyrant ruler in this story but only by day. By night, he's a reowned music producer in Frozen Records (yeah, I changed it because I think the manager thing fits more with Zarbon)
About the Ginyu Boys, they aren't in a deep debt.
Also, I've been planning them to have an eternal rivalry with another boy band called "The Elite" composed of Vegeta, Nappa and Raditz.
http://www.kanzenshuu.com/forum/viewtopic.php?f=11&t=40715&start=20#p1439892
http://dba.bn-ent.net/character/barduck.html
https://i.imgur.com/86hOk5i.gif
http://dba.bn-ent.net/character/barduck.html
https://i.imgur.com/86hOk5i.gif
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They look like if they were recruiting people.ShadowBardock89 wrote:
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Nickelodeon & Nicktoons airings | List of "Pérolas"
Dragon Ball's Argentinian broadcast history
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Dragon Ball's Argentinian broadcast history
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How do you guys deal with needing to rewrite entire chunks of your fics from scratch.
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Lots and lots of sugar.ekrolo2 wrote:How do you guys deal with needing to rewrite entire chunks of your fics from scratch.
When Super apparently shoves Goku down our throats:
Spoiler:
Kanassa wrote:- FoolsGil, Out of Context, 2017FoolsGil wrote:I hope Mark is dead. But chances are the dragonballs will bring his stupid ass back.
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Eugh... I'll burn that bridge when I get to it. (I have to rewrite my first 20 chapters, as they're just not up to snuff anymore.) What I think is best is to start doing so in parallel with writing new stuff if you can. That way you won't get too demotivated.ekrolo2 wrote:How do you guys deal with needing to rewrite entire chunks of your fics from scratch.
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Anyone know of any fics that have "what if Chichi kept training" as the premise? Preferably free of dubisms.
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I try to avoid rewriting. I don't update my story as frequently as others to begin with. So adding that on top of it? Yeah, bad combo (unless its just to fix a few minor errors).ekrolo2 wrote:How do you guys deal with needing to rewrite entire chunks of your fics from scratch.
What I do, is I proofread every chapter 2-3 times, at least, before I post it. I catch bad spelling and grammar mistakes, and see how well it flows. Like if there's something unnecessary, or it needs a little extra.
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You don't. Being a perfectionist never pays off.ekrolo2 wrote:How do you guys deal with needing to rewrite entire chunks of your fics from scratch.
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Yeah, I'm agreeing with you there, that mentality has really killed my interest in doing a certain story.Doctor. wrote:You don't. Being a perfectionist never pays off.ekrolo2 wrote:How do you guys deal with needing to rewrite entire chunks of your fics from scratch.
When someone tells you, "Don't present your opinion as fact," what they're actually saying is, "Don't present your opinion with any conviction. Because I don't like your opinion, and I want to be able to dismiss it as easily as possible." Don't fall for it.
How the Black Arc Should End (by Lightbing!):
How the Black Arc Should End (by Lightbing!):
Spoiler: