Revised DBE manga
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Revised DBE manga
Because everyone started fan-made works based on Dragon Ball: Evolution, I decided to tag along and start something
((which make it three future project along with Dead Zone fandub and Arabic version of the Special's manga version))
The plot will be re-written to make it close to the original series. and that mean:
No high school crap, Goku's not a playboy, Fu Lums and Mai will be replaced by "Normal" Piccolo Henchmen, More expostion and Piccolo's history, Muten Roushi lives on an island, Kuririn will be introduced. etc.
The designs will follow my own drawing style rather than immitating Toriyama's designs
So far, I've done Goku, Piccolo's close-up and one of his henchmen
Goku:
He is about 15 or 16 years old ((His head is a bit too big, will be fixed)). Not too young, and not too adult. I'll try to keep his original personality as close as possible
Piccolo:
Wonder why I gave him red eyes? 1- He is a Great Demon King. 2- Piccolo's eyes are red on the cover of vol. 16
A full body illustration will be made soon
Contra
One of Piccolo's henchmen. a hybrid between Drum and Dodoria. His name is a pun on Contrabass
The chapters will be black & white, exept for maybe the first page or two will be in colors
It'll be a tough job for me... as I have another weekly series with not less than 16 pages a chapter
When will I start? When I'll buy the DVD and re-watch it... although I don't think I'll need to...!!
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Some plot points I thought of: [SPOILERS]
- Piccolo's henchmen attacks Gohan at home while Goku is going fishing away.
- Goku meets Chichi by finding a Dragon Ball and "saving" her from something.
- Muten Roushi visits Karin in his tower for a new sealing jar
- Piccolo knows who are the Saiyens, and Goku is one of them
- Goku turns into a Super Saiyen 4 - esque form
More illustrations tomorrow
((which make it three future project along with Dead Zone fandub and Arabic version of the Special's manga version))
The plot will be re-written to make it close to the original series. and that mean:
No high school crap, Goku's not a playboy, Fu Lums and Mai will be replaced by "Normal" Piccolo Henchmen, More expostion and Piccolo's history, Muten Roushi lives on an island, Kuririn will be introduced. etc.
The designs will follow my own drawing style rather than immitating Toriyama's designs
So far, I've done Goku, Piccolo's close-up and one of his henchmen
Goku:
He is about 15 or 16 years old ((His head is a bit too big, will be fixed)). Not too young, and not too adult. I'll try to keep his original personality as close as possible
Piccolo:
Wonder why I gave him red eyes? 1- He is a Great Demon King. 2- Piccolo's eyes are red on the cover of vol. 16
A full body illustration will be made soon
Contra
One of Piccolo's henchmen. a hybrid between Drum and Dodoria. His name is a pun on Contrabass
The chapters will be black & white, exept for maybe the first page or two will be in colors
It'll be a tough job for me... as I have another weekly series with not less than 16 pages a chapter
When will I start? When I'll buy the DVD and re-watch it... although I don't think I'll need to...!!
---------------------------
Some plot points I thought of: [SPOILERS]
- Piccolo's henchmen attacks Gohan at home while Goku is going fishing away.
- Goku meets Chichi by finding a Dragon Ball and "saving" her from something.
- Muten Roushi visits Karin in his tower for a new sealing jar
- Piccolo knows who are the Saiyens, and Goku is one of them
- Goku turns into a Super Saiyen 4 - esque form
More illustrations tomorrow
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Bulma
I thought it would suit her the "Explorer" theme, as you may notice with the shorts, the backpack, the boots... She is still a scientest in the plot.
Yamcha
How do you like this version of Yamcha? With a rocket launcher none the less!! Now, he is a Desert Bandit.
Piccolo
The cloths resambles Piccolo the Second, but I added the hood on his head because I liked it from the movie.
I thought it would suit her the "Explorer" theme, as you may notice with the shorts, the backpack, the boots... She is still a scientest in the plot.
Yamcha
How do you like this version of Yamcha? With a rocket launcher none the less!! Now, he is a Desert Bandit.
Piccolo
The cloths resambles Piccolo the Second, but I added the hood on his head because I liked it from the movie.
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I willOolong215 wrote:These are awesome! I really hope you continue doing this.
Trust me... I know how hard it is...!!JAPPO wrote:Sounds like a lot of work but I hope you really do finish it.
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Bontro
His name is a pun on Trombone. Special Ability: His arm turns into a Ki cannon
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Kuririn
Absent from the movie, included here.
Chichi
Yep, she uses the Bashosen as her main weapon.
Fonsa
Piccolo's Right Hand Demon. The one resambles Piccolo the most among the others. His name is a pun on Saxsophone
Absent from the movie, included here.
Chichi
Yep, she uses the Bashosen as her main weapon.
Fonsa
Piccolo's Right Hand Demon. The one resambles Piccolo the most among the others. His name is a pun on Saxsophone
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I like how Chi-Chi turned out. Good luck with this project and I'm looking forward to seeing more.
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