DragonBall GT Revised [fanfic]

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Re: DragonBall GT: Revised [fanfic]

Post by TheMightyOzaru » Mon Dec 10, 2012 12:14 am

Dude Kaboom this is awesome. Do you mind if I use a few idea's for my GT rewrite?
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Re: DragonBall GT Revised [fanfic]

Post by Kaboom » Mon Dec 10, 2012 1:39 am

Free country, I guess. Half of my ideas are just inspired by something else.

Since the thread's been bumped, I guess I should say something about current progress... Chapter 16 has been delayed this long through an unfortunate combination of self-sabotage in terms of planning as well as lots of outside responsibilities that have taken priority. But it's rapidly nearing completely. Like, seriously. Home stretch. Update within the next few weeks, and I'll make sure it's worth the wait, too.
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Re: DragonBall GT Revised [fanfic]

Post by CaBrPi » Mon Dec 10, 2012 1:58 pm

You should probably change your signature, too.

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Re: DragonBall GT Revised [fanfic]

Post by Sin » Mon Dec 10, 2012 5:50 pm

Just started reading this and I have to say it's impressive, it's almost exactly what I would've wanted from GT and then some stuff I could not have thought of.

Would love to see a fan-manga version of it but at the same time I love how descriptive it all is, can't wait to carry on reading.

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Re: DragonBall GT Revised [fanfic]

Post by Kaboom » Mon Dec 10, 2012 11:59 pm

CaBrPi wrote:You should probably change your signature, too.
At this rate I may as well just leave it up and then alter it slightly for Chapter 16's release.
Sin wrote:Would love to see a fan-manga version of it but at the same time I love how descriptive it all is, can't wait to carry on reading.
I would love to do it as a fan-comic in the first place instead of a fanfic, but it takes enough time to make progress as it is.
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Re: DragonBall GT Revised [fanfic]

Post by Saiga » Tue Dec 11, 2012 12:04 am

Really? I would have thought drawing a comic would be faster/easier than writing prose, as long as you can draw well like you can.

Ah, well, there goes my dream of spontaneously becoming able to draw and using that to get around my inability to write prose.
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Re: DragonBall GT Revised [fanfic]

Post by Kaboom » Tue Dec 11, 2012 12:08 am

It's not really about it being easier or harder, in my experience. It's more about using time and resources in different ways, but it's just as time-consuming either way. At least when sticking to working in text format, I have more options as to when and where I can work on it.
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Re: DragonBall GT Revised [fanfic]

Post by Insertclevername » Tue Dec 11, 2012 1:05 am

GTR should have it's own anime! :P ... or better yet, a fanime...ha... I'll be here all week.
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Re: DragonBall GT Revised [fanfic]

Post by Tzigi » Tue Dec 11, 2012 8:02 am

Kaboom wrote:
Sin wrote:Would love to see a fan-manga version of it but at the same time I love how descriptive it all is, can't wait to carry on reading.
I would love to do it as a fan-comic in the first place instead of a fanfic, but it takes enough time to make progress as it is.
And if you were to make it into a fan-manga, which character would you include on the spine (Tankoubon style)? I'd see Pan and Trunks but I'd like to know your opinion :)

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Re: DragonBall GT Revised [fanfic]

Post by Kaboom » Tue Dec 11, 2012 11:07 am

Tzigi wrote:And if you were to make it into a fan-manga, which character would you include on the spine (Tankoubon style)? I'd see Pan and Trunks but I'd like to know your opinion. :)
Since I actually plan to do a tankobon spine-style spread of characters eventually as "official" GTR art, but the included characters would be potentially spoilerish this early on, I'll have to keep my mouth shut on this one.
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Re: DragonBall GT Revised [fanfic]

Post by Tzigi » Tue Dec 11, 2012 5:00 pm

Kaboom wrote:
Tzigi wrote:And if you were to make it into a fan-manga, which character would you include on the spine (Tankoubon style)? I'd see Pan and Trunks but I'd like to know your opinion. :)
Since I actually plan to do a tankobon spine-style spread of characters eventually as "official" GTR art, but the included characters would be potentially spoilerish this early on, I'll have to keep my mouth shut on this one.
So now I'm not sure whether I'm:
a. happy that I've guessed that something like this would be made
b. happy to know that you're planning to do it
c. unhappy that I don't get to see it now
Probably a little of every one of those :)

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Re: DragonBall GT Revised [fanfic]

Post by Kaboom » Tue Dec 11, 2012 5:46 pm

Yeeeaah, I'm afraid you're just going to wait.

In the meantime, here. Everyone feel free to amuse yourselves by re-reading the fanfic thus far as presented by Gizoogle.

Read at your own risk.
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Re: DragonBall GT Revised [fanfic]

Post by dbzfan7 » Tue Dec 11, 2012 5:50 pm

Kaboom wrote:Yeeeaah, I'm afraid you're just going to wait.

In the meantime, here. Everyone feel free to amuse yourselves by re-reading the fanfic thus far as presented by Gizoogle.

Read at your own risk.
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Re: DragonBall GT Revised [fanfic]

Post by Saiga » Wed Dec 12, 2012 7:18 am

Well I did just start reading Cataclysm yesterday, maybe I should read the following chapters in that format.
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Re: DragonBall GT Revised [fanfic]

Post by Sin » Wed Dec 12, 2012 10:42 pm

Is there a certain point that I should read Cataclysm or can I just read it whenever?

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Re: DragonBall GT Revised [fanfic]

Post by CaBrPi » Wed Dec 12, 2012 11:00 pm

Sin wrote:Is there a certain point that I should read Cataclysm or can I just read it whenever?
I think it's supposed to go after chapter 7, but it's really just a (damn good) side story.

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Re: DragonBall GT Revised [fanfic]

Post by Kaboom » Thu Dec 13, 2012 12:24 am

Sin wrote:Is there a certain point that I should read Cataclysm or can I just read it whenever?
For now, it'd be any time after Chapter 8, which (at this point) contains a brief summary of Cataclysm's plot, and thus spoilers for it. That's probably going to change in the near future, though.
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Re: DragonBall GT Revised [fanfic]

Post by DragonBalllKaiHD » Thu Dec 13, 2012 2:15 am

If you need any help with drawing spine in tankoubon style, then I'm more than happy to do it. I can draw them in Toriyama's style. That's is, if you want me to :)
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Re: DragonBall GT Revised [fanfic]

Post by Kaboom » Wed Dec 26, 2012 2:42 am

Merry Christmas! Here's your present!
GT Revised Chapter 16 - "Another Day In Paradise"
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I'm experimenting with using the obscene amounts of space I have on SkyDrive to offer up the PDFs for download, and it seems to let you read the PDF online right there, as well. Let me know what you think compared to my previously using MediaFire!

As promised during this past week, I've managed to post the new chapter itself on Christmas Day (in some timezones). I should be able to whip up the usual bonus goodies and post them within the next few days, hopefully by New Year's Day. In the meantime, enjoy!

Geez, 3 chapters in one year... all self-deprecating humor aside, that's really got to change...
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Re: DragonBall GT Revised [fanfic]

Post by JulieYBM » Wed Dec 26, 2012 3:01 am

The .pdf linked is Chapter #15. :(
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