Fanmanga - another DBAF

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Re: Fanmanga - another DBAF

Post by KentalSSJ6 » Fri Feb 14, 2014 4:35 am

Seems he altered a lot of his traced over drawings. Not all of them mind you but the majority of them have been redone, kudos to him for making that effort.
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Re: Fanmanga - another DBAF

Post by L·Lawliet » Mon Feb 17, 2014 10:27 pm

tomac66 wrote:Hi, I have the vol. 11 as always but I haven't time to scan it, let me time to do it.
when you will post it ? :clap:

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Post by TheDevilsCorpse » Mon Feb 17, 2014 11:01 pm

L·Lawliet wrote:
tomac66 wrote:Hi, I have the vol. 11 as always but I haven't time to scan it, let me time to do it.
when you will post it ? :clap:
You've already been told that he'll do it when he has time. You should stop asking and just be patient.
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Re: Fanmanga - another DBAF

Post by DragonBalllKaiHD » Tue Feb 18, 2014 2:16 am

Man, out of all doujinshi shown in this forum, this guy draws the best speed-lines. Not even Toyble holds a candle to him. Malik is good, but not on the same level as Young Jin. Another thing that makes his doujinshi great is his heavy use of black ink. The heavier the black is, the more the depth looks in the scenes. I really hopes Malik will improve to match Young Jin's level.
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Re: Fanmanga - another DBAF

Post by mAcChaos » Tue Feb 18, 2014 2:45 am

lol this is like blow for blow the piccolo vs freeza fight.
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Post by infectedmann » Tue Feb 18, 2014 1:25 pm

L·Lawliet wrote:
tomac66 wrote:Hi, I have the vol. 11 as always but I haven't time to scan it, let me time to do it.
when you will post it ? :clap:
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Post by KentalSSJ6 » Tue Feb 18, 2014 3:24 pm

Calling someone a retard is kinda uncalled for dont you think?
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Post by Tzigi » Wed Feb 19, 2014 6:52 am

KentalSSJ6 wrote:Calling someone a retard is kinda uncalled for dont you think?
I would concur but in this particular situation it feels really fitting. L·Lawliet is constatnly nagging everyone about new translations, new scans and cannot understand that they will come (or not) in due time.

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Re: Fanmanga - another DBAF

Post by tomac66 » Fri Feb 21, 2014 9:43 am

Hi, here you have the vol. 11 scaned and edited by me.

http://www.flickr.com/photos/78500615@N ... 305684003/

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Re: Fanmanga - another DBAF

Post by Goku shin » Fri Feb 21, 2014 10:13 am

Thx tomac66 :thumbup: your awesome.

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Re: Fanmanga - another DBAF

Post by goku the krump dancer » Fri Feb 21, 2014 12:35 pm

Can't say it was a good read but it was excellent eye candy lol. The only part I feel needs translating is when the one star dragon shows up. He/she/it looks so damn creepy posing/dancing like that on the mountain and Kaioshin looking scared as hell was cool too. He doesn't seem "bad" at the moment but I wonder what he's up too.
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Re: Fanmanga - another DBAF

Post by kei17 » Fri Feb 21, 2014 1:41 pm

I hope this artist will be a little more creative. It's not really fun to read rehashed fights with characters replaced.


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Re: Fanmanga - another DBAF

Post by KentalSSJ6 » Fri Feb 21, 2014 2:16 pm

I think he is making a effort. as I said before, if you look at the public releases of volume 1 and 2 on his blog youll see he redid quite a few scenes so they arent traced over. He's getting better, albeit at a slow rate.
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Re: Fanmanga - another DBAF

Post by mAcChaos » Fri Feb 21, 2014 7:50 pm

Is that Videl fighting Gohan or something?
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Post by Malik_DBNA » Fri Feb 21, 2014 9:03 pm

DragonBalllKaiHD wrote:Man, out of all doujinshi shown in this forum, this guy draws the best speed-lines. Not even Toyble holds a candle to him. Malik is good, but not on the same level as Young Jin. Another thing that makes his doujinshi great is his heavy use of black ink. The heavier the black is, the more the depth looks in the scenes. I really hopes Malik will improve to match Young Jin's level.
During my initial print of DBNA I used rulers and such to do speed lines. It took FOREVER and they never looked as good as they did in the manga. I'm currently using a speed and focus line tool in a digital program to add speed and focus lines to my comic.

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Re: Fanmanga - another DBAF

Post by Vegeta AF » Sat Feb 22, 2014 2:28 pm

tomac66 wrote:Hi, here you have the vol. 11 scaned and edited by me.

http://www.flickr.com/photos/78500615@N ... 305684003/
Thank you for the scans! I hope someone will continue to translate the books into English. I can understand most of what's going on, but there are a few parts where it would be nice to know what they are saying. I am glad this series is still alive :thumbup:

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Re: Fanmanga - another DBAF

Post by goku1234 » Sun Feb 23, 2014 8:46 pm

vol.3 After The Future (RAW) is out
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Re: Fanmanga - another DBAF

Post by KentalSSJ6 » Sun Feb 23, 2014 9:14 pm

Volume 3 brought up a interesting question for me.

If a Fusion Warrior loses a limb, who loses it after the timer runs out? Gotenks lost his left arm so would both Goten and Trunks lose their left arm, or would it be whoever did the dance from the left (in this case, Trunks)?
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Re: Fanmanga - another DBAF

Post by Malik_DBNA » Sun Feb 23, 2014 10:04 pm

Really wish I knew what Inking tools Jijii is using. I need some o' those

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Re: Fanmanga - another DBAF

Post by KentalSSJ6 » Sun Feb 23, 2014 10:07 pm

Malik_DBNA wrote:Really wish I knew what Inking tools Jijii is using. I need some o' those
If you have a decent translator/knowledge of Japanese, you can leave a message on his blog and watch for a reply. Or you can ask one of the forum's more fluent members.
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