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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Kakarot9001 » Thu Mar 05, 2015 8:18 pm

Marco Polo wrote:If Freeza isn't a universal threat then surely Cell isn't either.
Good point, the Kaioshins didn't care for Freeza... I never knew why, though

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Post by Kamiccolo9 » Thu Mar 05, 2015 8:20 pm

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Marco Polo wrote:If Freeza isn't a universal threat then surely Cell isn't either.
Good point, the Kaioshins didn't care for Freeza... I never knew why, though
Freeza wanted to rule the universe, not destroy it. Gods don't care about what mortals rule other mortals.
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Hellspawn28 » Thu Mar 05, 2015 9:18 pm

Kakarot9001 wrote:
Marco Polo wrote:If Freeza isn't a universal threat then surely Cell isn't either.
Good point, the Kaioshins didn't care for Freeza... I never knew why, though
They didn't feel like a threat to them. Freeza wanted to rule the Universe. He was not blowing things up like Buu was.
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Hellspawn28 » Fri Mar 06, 2015 4:23 pm

We all know how this will turn out. Super Buu would stop them and ends up absorbing them both.
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by ZombieVito » Fri Mar 06, 2015 5:07 pm

Interesting, I wonder how he would absorb Gohan and the others again.

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Post by RealtreeByGod » Fri Mar 06, 2015 7:26 pm

Art's relatively decent at least, so that's a good thing.

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by ParkerAL » Fri Mar 06, 2015 7:37 pm

Suggested dialogue improvements:

"You are even smaller than fleas, you know that?" -> "Don't you know you're even smaller than fleas?"

Notes: This change would make Buu's statement sound more like a taunt, which I'm guessing is what the writer intends.

"We will need to find an exit after having you neutralized" -> "We'll need to find an exit after neutralizing you"

Notes: Eliminates the passive voice, though the dialogue itself remains rather bland, pretty much stating the obvious.

"You cannot do it... you will be killed in here" -> "You cannot beat me... you will die in here"

Note: Again, passive voice simply doesn't sound good in English. Also, I replaced "do it" with "beat me" to sound a little more colorful, though the line remains pretty run-of-the-mill.

Vegeta's dialogue is fine.
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Lord Beerus » Sun Mar 08, 2015 1:49 am

Ugh. Hasn't this Super Buu What-If scenario already been explored? :|

Not saying it's bad, but I wish DB Multiverse would cut down on the endless specials for other characters that ultimately don't do much to change the main story.

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Post by CordonBloo » Sun Mar 08, 2015 8:07 am

Back to the Freeza thing, the Kaio-Shin were all stronger than Freeza, he says so when they're flying to Bobbidi's ship. They were aware of his existence, but never needed to interfere. Like someone said earlier, he wasn't destroying planets indiscriminately and upsetting the balance of creation/destruction, he was a businessman! Cell wasn't around for very long in the grand scheme of things, I doubt they even noticed him.
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Post by FoolsGil » Sun Mar 08, 2015 9:32 am

CordonBloo wrote:Back to the Freeza thing, the Kaio-Shin were all stronger than Freeza, he says so when they're flying to Bobbidi's ship. They were aware of his existence, but never needed to interfere. Like someone said earlier, he wasn't destroying planets indiscriminately and upsetting the balance of creation/destruction, he was a businessman! Cell wasn't around for very long in the grand scheme of things, I doubt they even noticed him.
But then the Kais interacted personally with Bojack. You could say that Bojack was upsetting the balance of creation/destruction, but it was stated he was nothing more than a space pirate, and at the end of the Bojack wins special, Yemma won't allow intervention because they will effectively rule the universe(which is what Freeza chose to do, and apparently, was not what they were doing before): Does being sealed in a planet for a couple eons make you change your mind about life? Or did Toei not think things through when they created a villain with Freeza's aspirations and Cell's strength?

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Post by Marco Polo » Sun Mar 08, 2015 3:46 pm

Full color special? Interesting.

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Post by Vegitofaxx » Sun Mar 08, 2015 3:49 pm

Marco Polo wrote:Full color special? Interesting.
Sadly no, only some pages are color.
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Post by FoolsGil » Sun Mar 08, 2015 4:25 pm

You know I brought up this at the end of the U8 Special: The special makes it sound like that without Vegeta, everyone was doomed on Namek, when really it all came down to timing at the end. Same thing here, Buu just happened to be a second faster in this universe, the change all came down to timing.

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by RandomGuy96 » Sun Mar 08, 2015 7:07 pm

I just hope we get an actual SS3 Goku vs base Super Buu "fight". That'd be a curb-stomp I'd like to see.
FoolsGil wrote:You know I brought up this at the end of the U8 Special: The special makes it sound like that without Vegeta, everyone was doomed on Namek, when really it all came down to timing at the end. Same thing here, Buu just happened to be a second faster in this universe, the change all came down to timing.
In the manga, he tried to jump at Vegeta to stop him, but since Toriyama never keeps speed feats consistent, Vegeta reacts faster than him and pulls the pod. In this, he can just grab Vegeta with a pair of arms from the ground without actually getting near him. I don't know why he didn't do this in the main universe if he always could.
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Post by rereboy » Sun Mar 08, 2015 8:05 pm

RandomGuy96 wrote: In the manga, he tried to jump at Vegeta to stop him, but since Toriyama never keeps speed feats consistent, Vegeta reacts faster than him and pulls the pod. In this, he can just grab Vegeta with a pair of arms from the ground without actually getting near him. I don't know why he didn't do this in the main universe if he always could.
Simply because he didn't thought of it in time or because he panicked.

Its like in real life when someone says something and we want to retort to what that person says, but we can't think of anything quickly. Its not that we are incapable of coming up with something or reacting that fast, its just in that moment, for some reason, we weren't able to. And other times we are.

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Post by coola » Wed Mar 11, 2015 3:00 pm

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by rereboy » Wed Mar 11, 2015 3:05 pm

I really don't like the next pages of this special. Too much power inconsistency, imo.

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