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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by TheBritWriter » Sat Mar 28, 2015 11:51 am

This should be one of the darkest chapters in the entry but instead its akin to watching the boxer who never had a chance and instead of seeing an entertaining fight, forced to seeing him just cower against incoming blows till the timer stops. It is that uninteresting, its a very simple concept. Buu absorbs two characters and wins, the end.

eight pages (not counting the cover) and 'buugeta' who had absorbed since the second page is still toying around with Goku? The appeal of this is lost, not because Goku will lose, that's obvious but in how it drags out this scenario, there's just no tension due to the length of a very dragged out fight, which didn't need to be dragged out to begin with.

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Vegitofaxx » Sat Mar 28, 2015 11:59 am

TheBritWriter wrote:This should be one of the darkest chapters in the entry but instead its akin to watching the boxer who never had a chance and instead of seeing an entertaining fight, forced to seeing him just cower against incoming blows till the timer stops. It is that uninteresting, its a very simple concept. Buu absorbs two characters and wins, the end.

eight pages (not counting the cover) and 'buugeta' who had absorbed since the second page is still toying around with Goku? The appeal of this is lost, not because Goku will lose, that's obvious but in how it drags out this scenario, there's just no tension due to the length of a very dragged out fight, which didn't need to be dragged out to begin with.
I agree. At this rate, we'll have like two pages after the fight showing Buu's "rebirth" (that's the title, not "Buu joking around, punching Goku, and oh, he sorta absorbs people)
Keep in mind, i don't know when the fight will end. But if it's not over in 8-10 pages. I'll bang my head against the wall.
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Pantalones » Sat Mar 28, 2015 1:15 pm

Still a million times better than better than "Cell kills everyone in unnecessarily gory ways" or "Bojack kills everyone with his dreaded Super Ugly Art powers."

I'm guessing Goku's SSj3 will run out soon (since he's using it in his living body like vs. Kid Buu) and that'll be it for him. Though I wonder... whatever happened to Kaioshin/Kibito trying to distract Buu from the outside to give Goku a chance? He seemed to think he'd actually be of some help against Buu after fusing with Kibito, so it must've been a significant boost even though it didn't put him anywhere near the "Goku and Vegeta fusions" level of power... is he still so weak he can't even manage that? Or is that going on right now and that's why Goku is... sorta kinda almost putting up a fight, rather than losing immediately?

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Scarz » Sun Mar 29, 2015 2:06 pm

What's with the random pages being colored?

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by TheBritWriter » Sun Mar 29, 2015 2:48 pm

Hmm,
Pantalones wrote:Still a million times better than better than "Cell kills everyone in unnecessarily gory ways" or "Bojack kills everyone with his dreaded Super Ugly Art powers."
Yes that's true, honestly that was chapter was overly brutal and disturbing, and the bojack one, is there anyone in the team that says 'This is a bad idea or the guy who's drawing this can't draw for his life' because if there isn't then there needs to be!

Ah new page. The kick looks a bit odd angled, though if I were to be nitpik I would say doing a back kick (or the way our Mr Kai does it here) has little power in it. I'm not faulting that he finally shows up but I think he could had attacked in a more efficient manner, other then using an impractical kick under the rule of cool.

I'm impressed with the colouring though.

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by FoolsGil » Sun Mar 29, 2015 3:00 pm

It seems Kibitoshin decided that learning the Kienzan was not worth his time, being a "mortal technique."

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by TheBritWriter » Sun Mar 29, 2015 3:05 pm

FoolsGil wrote:It seems Kibitoshin decided that learning the Kienzan was not worth his time, being a "mortal technique."
Ironic as that would give goku the opening he needed!

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by BlazingBarrrager » Sun Mar 29, 2015 8:11 pm

TheBritWriter wrote:
FoolsGil wrote:It seems Kibitoshin decided that learning the Kienzan was not worth his time, being a "mortal technique."
Ironic as that would give goku the opening he needed!
Would it? For all we know that Kienzan would go straight through where Goku is and hit him in the process.

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by FoolsGil » Sun Mar 29, 2015 8:44 pm

BlazingBarrrager wrote:
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FoolsGil wrote:It seems Kibitoshin decided that learning the Kienzan was not worth his time, being a "mortal technique."
Ironic as that would give goku the opening he needed!
Would it? For all we know that Kienzan would go straight through where Goku is and hit him in the process.
The odds are against that happening, considering how big Buu's body is, and how small Goku is.

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by BlazingBarrrager » Sun Mar 29, 2015 11:14 pm

Unlikely yes, but not impossible. None the less, I'm guessing Kibitoshin was acting on impulse and wasn't really thinking of an effective tactic to do.

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by coola » Mon Mar 30, 2015 10:07 am

Well, kick could also potentially squashed Goku, so... i might be wrong, but, shouldn't Kibitoshin be more powerful than SSJ3 Goku and Super/Kid Buu? He was pretty confident he could help taking down Gotenks Buu, and I'm sure he would be careful to not let himself absorbed
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Post by rereboy » Mon Mar 30, 2015 10:25 am

coola wrote:Well, kick could also potentially squashed Goku, so... i might be wrong, but, shouldn't Kibitoshin be more powerful than SSJ3 Goku and Super/Kid Buu? He was pretty confident he could help taking down Gotenks Buu, and I'm sure he would be careful to not let himself absorbed
In the official manga, he is treated like he's not as useful as SSJ2 Vegeta, so, despite his fusion, his power must not have increased much.

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by mAcChaos » Mon Mar 30, 2015 2:50 pm

The art for that last panel is great.
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by jcogginsa » Wed Apr 01, 2015 1:53 am

I'm looking to read through the thread, specifically the pages about my fave bits of the story. Can someone tell me what pages the following fights start getting discussed?

Cell vs. Dabura
Cell vs Bojack
Bojack vs. Pan
King Piccolo vs. Gast
Nappa vs. Frieza
Trunks vs. Cooler
Trunks vs. Vegeta
Vegeta vs. Raichi
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Post by coola » Wed Apr 01, 2015 2:00 pm

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Vegitofaxx » Wed Apr 01, 2015 2:13 pm

Kinda dissapointed there's no April Fools joke...
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by FoolsGil » Wed Apr 01, 2015 2:31 pm

Vegitofaxx wrote:Kinda dissapointed there's no April Fools joke...
Isn't the joke that Kibitoshin is trying to distract Buu with physical blows?

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Vegitofaxx » Wed Apr 01, 2015 2:39 pm

FoolsGil wrote:
Vegitofaxx wrote:Kinda dissapointed there's no April Fools joke...
Isn't the joke that Kibitoshin is trying to distract Buu with physical blows?
Got me there :lol:
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Vegitofaxx » Fri Apr 03, 2015 2:07 pm

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