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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by dbzfan7 » Sun Jan 25, 2015 10:57 pm

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I haven't quite seen your opinions on the comic I suppose. Still don't quite get how throwing something out for the sake of quantity is better than actual quality but whatever. I'd never support toei if they took the DBM approach and threw in TV specials that were sub par while the wait for their upcoming movie was some time away.
If the specials were better than they are, obviously it would be better for DBM overall. However, given what's behind the specials (that I've explained), getting hung up on them is, imo, rather silly, and expecting them to be better when they are supposed to only last a chapter and just present the audience with an un-developed curiosity or two about a certain universe is also kind of silly in my opinion.

I would kind of understand that reaction if this was the first or the second special and you were lead to believe that they would be more than they are, but from the very first special is pretty clear what they are, so continuing to be hung up on it doesn't make much sense to me, especially when they are so easily ignored.

I have several criticisms for DBM but, at least for the main one I can find a justification for it based on the fact that its a fan manga with specific constraints.

The main criticism is the lack of development of character interactions, thoughts and focus on universe #18. In DBM there's a certain feeling of lack of depth or emotion regarding the characters, like they are more hollow than in the original manga. However, I think this is mainly because they have to prioritize what they show given that they can only make so many pages and takes a long time to release a chapter. It gets kind of hard with this scale of a event in a fanmanga.

Regarding the plot I honestly don't have many criticisms to make besides some details. The premise is pretty good for a fan comic and the planning of the tournament (who advances and who is gonna fight with who and who loses) is also pretty good for a fan comic, as well as the composition of each universe participating. The plot also allows for a lot of serious and less serious opportunities for all the characters in it and its pretty interesting overall. And it mixes the relaxed feeling of a mega fan wish-fulfillment tournament with the impending threat of a bigger danger that its still under wraps (XXI), as well as other potential dangers (Zen Buu, Cell, Vegetto, Ginyu). Also, the bigger threat is a logical one (the guy that imprisoned Dai Kaioshin 75 millions years ago and that was already very bad news then) instead of one that comes from nowhere, which is very positive.

Something that deserves some criticism is the lack of thought behind each universe's backstory. I think its kind of obvious that the DBM team didn't actually plan extensively the backstory of each universe. Some were easy enough, like Vegetto never defusing, but in others I'm pretty sure they just went "hey, wouldn't be cool if one universe had these fighters" and they never really planned extensively their backstories. This is not very important for the tournament itself or the fan manga, but it would have been nice to actually get the feeling that they all were well-planned. Of course, I can be wrong and maybe they are well planned, but I don't think so.

Other stuff is just some details, like Cold being stronger than Freeza without a better explanation for it. I actually offered better explanations for it on this topic. Or Broly's "invincible" state and the reason for why he is so strong. I believe that classification was just needless and I believe that Broly's power and resistance could have been better explained without any need for a constantly rising power and a "invincible" classification. And I also offered better explanations, imo, for it, on this topic. And some other stuff, but nothing really major.

Overall, I do have criticisms, but its obvious to me that DBM is basically the best DB fan manga. Some, like who wants to be a superhero, can be argued to be better, but its an unfair comparison because they don't even try to do something of this scale or are even remotely as long as DBM or try to have an ending or conclusion. They end up being short, incomplete and sweet because they focus solely on a few good ideas and aren't developed enough to even go beyond those few initial ideas, they never actually go beyond the potential state. Like yourself stated, DBM hooked you at the beginning. What if DBM had been interrupted in the early chapters and never continued? You probably you rank it higher but would it truly be better just because it never got to develop beyond the initial point and got stuck at the potential state? I don't think it would, I think that's just an illusion because we only get to see the potential of it.
I don't think it's silly because if they put out a silly chapter, I will criticize said silly chapter. You don't hold back on a free to play game, netflix show, or comic just cause of a schedule. None of that matters. It's the final product and quality that matters above all. They have full reins to do whatever they want to do with their scheduling and time. It's up to them. They could change if they want to, or not. Ignoring any of the delays or one page a few days thing some people don't like, it's still the final product that matters in the end. It just means more likely people who wait will lessen the blow of disappointment, or feel better to not have to be to wrapped up in a story they may like. For the specials they are the only mean to an actual story. I like to think they at least give people a story and focus that the main series sorely lacks, but unfortunate they are not thought out enough.

Well like I said I enjoy seeing the stupidity and how some people are ok with shovelware. It boggles my mind that more content=better than less content to be formed into something good. Apparently being patient for the page schedule is the right thing to do, but being patient for maybe a hiatus to allow for some critical thinking and plotting, is not ok.

Final result is all that matters. Constraints effect the results, but they do not effect how something should be criticized. Many many games have had these kind of problems and worse, but no one should go easy on them because something in production went wrong. None of that matters to the final result. The final result is what's looked at and decided to be good enough. But is it really? That's up to the viewers.

Personally I'd feel it's more of not having a properly planned out story, or just going above what they can handle. From what I see when they do a good job, they really do a good job. However when they force themselves to deal with all this extra stuff, they are hurting themselves. I think they should introduce an ongoing story like all of Toriyama's tourney's instead of the implications of something possibly great, but leaving us with a hollow, but occasionally fun match up.

I somewhat agree with you here. Except for the hollow conflicts and how most of it can be thrown under the carpet like it never happened. Conflicts don't seem to come up or evolve, they just show up, are dealt with quickly, then are gone for a long period of time. That's about the conflicting nature of the story to me in a nutshell. Here's Broly, he's gone and nothing really changes. Here's Boo in space going after Broly, and it's pretty much dropped much to even Vegetto's confusion, then is never brought up again. Here's the weapon that can kill the audience by accident, and it's pretty much not even debated about even though it's a safety hazard. It's like Eh who cares if these tech guys can kill the audience with their weapons (Dragon balls or not). Here's Bardock with the future, and he keeps it to himself so nothing changes. Here's Boo taking over...and now he's quickly stopped. This one could amount to something...but we'll have to see.

That's kinda what the specials should really cover which they do sometimes when it's not stuff no one really asked for. Honestly the Z warriors die to the villains thing is too damn obvious that everyone probably knew. Stuff like that isn't really important. Things like how they did Tapion, Gast, etc are more important.

Oh you could go so much more into this, but yeah whatever.

I don't think it's unfair at all. The only thing that matters is final satisfaction, not the production itself. If I am more satisfied with an incomplete comic, it did it's job better for me at least then an ongoing one. You can find tons of indie titles with way less ambition that can be more enjoyed then the massive AAA productions. Scale doesn't matter, the enjoyment is what matters. I also would rank DBM higher just as someone would rank the Simpsons higher if the show ended sooner instead of going on and on to some people's disappointment. Right now it really is starting to interest me in a good way again, as well as Boo actually making changes that can't simply be ignored. He will probably actually make a much bigger affect now, than any of his other two moments in the story.

I thank you for sharing your opinion with me here Rereboy. Though being a translator and part of their team does unfortunately make me think there may be some bias. I mean we all do have some bias to the things we work on. I know I do.
Skar wrote:I think DBM would work differently since it's not really an independent story. The foundation for DBM was the manga and the other universes. If there's a beginning, middle, and the end of DBM then the tournament would technically be the middle. Salagir could have had written the long history of each alternate universe and then decide to have a big tournament between all the AUs he wrote. Instead he decided to start the story at the beginning of the tournament and slowly tell the backstory of the universes as filler. That's why I don't really consider DBM a sequel. It's a sequel in the sense that it takes place after the manga ended but it's more of a side-story or crossover after the storylines of each of the individual universes have ended. That's why the development of the story won't feel like it did in the manga or in the usual sequel with multiple shorter sagas.
It does it's job as a crowd pleaser, but as a work of genius or something spectacular it is not. It is to be commended for it's ambition, but it's short comings overall I feel hurt it. I feel if they got more people to help them work things out and make decisions, things could be better. I'm happy no matter what as it's fan stuff and it ain't official anyways. When the official stuff is bad, well fuck we're stuck with that. If DBM does bad I get a laugh and it really doesn't matter since it's fanwork. It's harmless in the end. I look forward to Zen Boo here as unlike his forgettable other conflicts which meant nothing, this could mean something for once. I swear if those Vargas ignore this like the killer tech weapons, then Broly needs to come back and kill more of them. DBM got that right for sure XD.
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by TheGmGoken » Sun Jan 25, 2015 11:09 pm

DBM is basically the best DB fan manga.
Just making sure. You're stating this as an opinion and not a fact right?

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by rereboy » Sun Jan 25, 2015 11:09 pm

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I thank you for sharing your opinion with me here Rereboy. Though being a translator and part of their team does unfortunately make me think there may be some bias. I mean we all do have some bias to the things we work on. I know I do.
I literally just translate a few lines a couple of times per week. Takes me 5 minutes. Hardly an investment. And I do it out of good will to help out.

My arguments were all clear and logical. I don't think there's any bias in them.

And I literally never said that you can't criticize stuff. I just said that its silly to get so hung up on the specials when they end up being a so irrelevant part of DBM and that there's no point in constantly repeating the same criticisms like a broken record. I believe you just focus too much on the wrong things about DBM, that's why I said that your posts are more emotional than rational.
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DBM is basically the best DB fan manga.
Just making sure. You're stating this as an opinion and not a fact right?
Being better is a subjective term. So, how could it be a fact? Think about it. Its impossible. For something to be "better" is always according to someone's opinion.

But I did fully explain my reasons for my opinion. They are all logical.

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by TheGmGoken » Sun Jan 25, 2015 11:16 pm

Being better is a subjective term. So, how could it be a fact? Think about it. Its impossible. For something to be "better" is always according to someone's opinion.

But I did fully explain my reasons for my opinion. They are all logical.
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by dbzfan7 » Sun Jan 25, 2015 11:26 pm

rereboy wrote: I literally just translate a few lines a couple of times per week. Takes me 5 minutes. Hardly an investment. And I do it out of good will to help out.

My arguments were all clear and logical. I don't think there's any bias in them.

And I literally never said that you can't criticize stuff. I just said that its silly to get so hung up on the specials when they end up being a so irrelevant part of DBM and that there's no point in constantly repeating the same criticisms like a broken record. I believe you just focus too much on the wrong things about DBM, that's why I said that your posts are more emotional than rational.
Woah hey I'm not trying to insult. Just saying people even me do tend to give leeway to stuff we work on. In fact it's one of the things I do when I do some editing for fan comics as well. I don't always get my way and I don't agree with every choice, but we still feel somewhat proud in something we're apart of. You don't sound very biased to me, just saying there could be some. I got the rose tints for Broly even though I agree with tons of people on how stupid he is...especially in this comic.

We could say the same thing about tons of the movies of dragon ball, yet to this day we have people who go on about those. They're meaningless to the core Dragon Ball (Cept the newer ones), but people still go crazy over DB Movie 4 even if it means nothing to the manga. People go crazy about the Bardock special even though they mean nothing to the manga beyond promotion. See it doesn't matter if it matters or not in the grand scheme of things. A product was put out, and so I will harp on it whether good or bad. That's all there is too it.
But I did fully explain my reasons for my opinion. They are all logical.
I can't quite agree as we see things differently and I don't see all your points that way, but you did allow me to see your opinion which is enough for me.
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Skar » Tue Jan 27, 2015 9:01 pm

dbzfan7 wrote:It does it's job as a crowd pleaser, but as a work of genius or something spectacular it is not. It is to be commended for it's ambition, but it's short comings overall I feel hurt it. I feel if they got more people to help them work things out and make decisions, things could be better.
In comparison to other fan comics I would consider it the one involving the most creativity and work. It's difficult to make a Dragonball sequel without retreading old ground. Salagir could've taken the easy way out and wrote yet another AF. With an artist like Gogeta Jr or Asura, that story would've easily been in the top 5 most popular AF variations. It probably would've had less than 10% of the fanbase DBM has but much less work and most likely would've been done by now.

I honestly don't know what they could've done for a long-running sequel other than DBM if they didn't want to do another AF. I feel it's not fair to compare DBM with Who Wants To Be A Superhero and other short stories. Those were meant to be short and only focus on a small number of characters. It's like comparing a TV series with an ensemble cast like Walking Dead or Lost with a 2 hour movie that only has one or two main characters. If the movie was stretched out across hundreds of episodes or had a bigger cast then it might not work or lose the meaning of the original movie. If Walking Dead or Lost were shrunk down to a 2 hour movie then it would have a much smaller cast and only concentrate on a small portion of the original plot which might make the plot of the movie have a different meaning. Walking Dead and Lost started off with a lot of characters but as the story progressed many of them either died or left the group so there were less characters to focus on. DBM started off with over 64 characters but as the story progressed more of them either lost their matches or decided to return to their universe.

I remember Tzigi explained how the specials work and if I recall she said that Salagir only gives the artists a general outline for the specials. Many of them want to draw fights in their style and not just include some information about that universe. It would be awkward to tell them "the special you drew sucks! You're not getting paid but I demand you redo it!". They would probably wish him good luck and tell all their artist friends that this guy is an asshole.If Salagir had a huge budget then he could've found Asura-tier artists and paid them as much as they wanted to draw as a full time job. Since his budget is zero then it makes it a little difficult to be too demanding. I agree it hurts the overall quality of the finished product but at least the specials can be viewed as a supplementary work instead of part of the main story. Salagir did go to the effort of trying to find the best artists he could for the main story because that's what attracted people to the story. Most of the time when I see someone complain about the specials or the pacing I ask them to find some artists and recommend them to join. If they put their wasted energy into finding more artists instead of repeating the same complaints every few pages then they probably would've found a few by now. I understand if they don't care either way but I think it matters enough to them because they always find enough time during the day to complain every chance they get. I've tried it before on Deviantart and most of the artists either ignored my messages or said they wouldn't be interesting in drawing for a comic. I stopped complaining about specials after that since I got a feeling of how much effort it took. I don't enjoy them either but since I can't do anything to improve them and my complaints will just get ignored I just wait it out.

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Post by Tzigi » Wed Jan 28, 2015 3:03 am

Skar wrote: I remember Tzigi explained how the specials work and if I recall she said that Salagir only gives the artists a general outline for the specials. Many of them want to draw fights in their style and not just include some information about that universe.
Well, yes and no (or rather no and yes): all artists get to decide together with Salagir which universe they want to draw a special chapter about. Some artists are content with Salagir's scenario and just go along but there have been some situations where the artist either started the special chapter without consulting Salagir (I remember especially the Italian guys who did the first u13 special chapter) or had some idea they really did not want to let go of. Then Salagir tries to accomodate them. But in the end they always get a full scenario by Salagir - only it may be influenced by their likes and dislikes. So if an artist wants to draw a fight and not include much info, then yeah, they draw that - and the problem is that sometimes they make them longer then we, readers would like (the fights aren't always described panel-by-panel in the scenario so that the artist can fit them best to his style and sometimes it results in their increased length).

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FoolsGil wrote:Main Web Page has a new logo. Thought that was worth mentioning.
Just noticed. Kinda cool!

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Post by dbzfan7 » Wed Jan 28, 2015 4:41 am

Skar wrote:
dbzfan7 wrote:It does it's job as a crowd pleaser, but as a work of genius or something spectacular it is not. It is to be commended for it's ambition, but it's short comings overall I feel hurt it. I feel if they got more people to help them work things out and make decisions, things could be better.
In comparison to other fan comics I would consider it the one involving the most creativity and work. It's difficult to make a Dragonball sequel without retreading old ground. Salagir could've taken the easy way out and wrote yet another AF. With an artist like Gogeta Jr or Asura, that story would've easily been in the top 5 most popular AF variations. It probably would've had less than 10% of the fanbase DBM has but much less work and most likely would've been done by now.

I honestly don't know what they could've done for a long-running sequel other than DBM if they didn't want to do another AF. I feel it's not fair to compare DBM with Who Wants To Be A Superhero and other short stories. Those were meant to be short and only focus on a small number of characters. It's like comparing a TV series with an ensemble cast like Walking Dead or Lost with a 2 hour movie that only has one or two main characters. If the movie was stretched out across hundreds of episodes or had a bigger cast then it might not work or lose the meaning of the original movie. If Walking Dead or Lost were shrunk down to a 2 hour movie then it would have a much smaller cast and only concentrate on a small portion of the original plot which might make the plot of the movie have a different meaning. Walking Dead and Lost started off with a lot of characters but as the story progressed many of them either died or left the group so there were less characters to focus on. DBM started off with over 64 characters but as the story progressed more of them either lost their matches or decided to return to their universe.

I remember Tzigi explained how the specials work and if I recall she said that Salagir only gives the artists a general outline for the specials. Many of them want to draw fights in their style and not just include some information about that universe. It would be awkward to tell them "the special you drew sucks! You're not getting paid but I demand you redo it!". They would probably wish him good luck and tell all their artist friends that this guy is an asshole.If Salagir had a huge budget then he could've found Asura-tier artists and paid them as much as they wanted to draw as a full time job. Since his budget is zero then it makes it a little difficult to be too demanding. I agree it hurts the overall quality of the finished product but at least the specials can be viewed as a supplementary work instead of part of the main story. Salagir did go to the effort of trying to find the best artists he could for the main story because that's what attracted people to the story. Most of the time when I see someone complain about the specials or the pacing I ask them to find some artists and recommend them to join. If they put their wasted energy into finding more artists instead of repeating the same complaints every few pages then they probably would've found a few by now. I understand if they don't care either way but I think it matters enough to them because they always find enough time during the day to complain every chance they get. I've tried it before on Deviantart and most of the artists either ignored my messages or said they wouldn't be interesting in drawing for a comic. I stopped complaining about specials after that since I got a feeling of how much effort it took. I don't enjoy them either but since I can't do anything to improve them and my complaints will just get ignored I just wait it out.
While I do agree the comparison is a bit unfair, it is still the fault of the writers to not keep focus on a grand story. Other comic books have several lines to fix this issue. Like having several stories run in the same universe. DBM is a different case and can't really afford to do that which leaves them in a pickle. Pickle or not I'm left with the final product, and it's pretty cardboard heavy during the tournament itself.Their ambition wrote them into a corner to make them unable to get a focused story. People seem to enjoy the fanservice enough so if that ties people over, it's good enough for them I suppose. As a story though it doesn't do a good job. It does an attempt at a story, but I think there should be some more going on. Say maybe after a match we see some people outside the ring following some sort of plot. Like say Boo or XXI is doing something and maybe someone we know follows them. So we get a match, and then we see what either may be up to. Right now since the tourney is on hold, we're kinda getting that story I want...so long as Boo's antics start one. I still can't believe nothing was done about the techies and their murder weapons that affect the crowd. Don't care if it's legal as a weapon, the crowd should come first.
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by rereboy » Wed Jan 28, 2015 7:43 am

dbzfan7 wrote: Other comic books have several lines to fix this issue.
Professional comic books. With professional writers and artists that get paid and do a full time job of it and don't really have as much time and page/panel considerations and constraints as this fan manga has due to being a fan manga.

Compare it to any weekly manga, that has a full chapter every week and, because of it, it can properly develop a lot of stuff without worrying that its taking too much time in one single page, like DBM worries.

The ideas you offered are good for a manga that can take its time developing everything. But DBM, as a fan manga with its inherent constrains due to how little work can be done is a certain amount of time, simply can't do it without taking 25 years for the fan manga to finish. You disregard this and fault the fanmanga anyway, despite the fact that its beyond its power, even though you fully admit that its true that DBM has that constraint.

Comparing it to professional works is even more unfair than comparing it to other fan mangas like who wants to be a hero.
dbzfan7 wrote:I still can't believe nothing was done about the techies and their murder weapons that affect the crowd. Don't care if it's legal as a weapon, the crowd should come first.
The Vargas are the ones to blame. They assured that the crowd would be protected and yet their barrier was ineffective agaisnt their weapons. However, they also rely on the sets of Dragon Balls they possess to fix things, which is probably one of the reasons why they already used one set to resurrect people, including people from the audience. And there's no more of those guys in the tournament so the Vargas are probably breathing a little easier now.

That being said, the crowds at the martial tournaments in the manga have always been in danger. At least in this tournament there was protection :lol:

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Post by dbgtFO » Wed Jan 28, 2015 10:00 am

rereboy wrote:Comparing it to professional works is even more unfair than comparing it to other fan mangas like who wants to be a hero.
Indeed.
I believe people are expecting too much. It's a credit to Salagir and company, that people make it sound like they expect the standards of a professional work.

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by dbzfan7 » Wed Jan 28, 2015 2:23 pm

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dbzfan7 wrote: Other comic books have several lines to fix this issue.
Professional comic books. With professional writers and artists that get paid and do a full time job of it and don't really have as much time and page/panel considerations and constraints as this fan manga has due to being a fan manga.

Compare it to any weekly manga, that has a full chapter every week and, because of it, it can properly develop a lot of stuff without worrying that its taking too much time in one single page, like DBM worries.

The ideas you offered are good for a manga that can take its time developing everything. But DBM, as a fan manga with its inherent constrains due to how little work can be done is a certain amount of time, simply can't do it without taking 25 years for the fan manga to finish. You disregard this and fault the fanmanga anyway, despite the fact that its beyond its power, even though you fully admit that its true that DBM has that constraint.

Comparing it to professional works is even more unfair than comparing it to other fan mangas like who wants to be a hero.
dbzfan7 wrote:I still can't believe nothing was done about the techies and their murder weapons that affect the crowd. Don't care if it's legal as a weapon, the crowd should come first.
The Vargas are the ones to blame. They assured that the crowd would be protected and yet their barrier was ineffective agaisnt their weapons. However, they also rely on the sets of Dragon Balls they possess to fix things, which is probably one of the reasons why they already used one set to resurrect people, including people from the audience. And there's no more of those guys in the tournament so the Vargas are probably breathing a little easier now.

That being said, the crowds at the martial tournaments in the manga have always been in danger. At least in this tournament there was protection :lol:
Way to miss that I said DBM couldn't afford to do what other comics do. My comparison wasn't saying DBM should be doing that, it's saying that's how comics get away with big scale stories. I think the Sonic comics have 2 lines to cover things. Main series and Universe. What DBM can do is have something fucking happening during the matches before them, or after them going on in the background. Like say if Freeza wanted to take over, he'd have his minions slowly acquire the technology of the Vargas. Not saying that should happen, but have something happen besides "Here's a flash back...now don't expect a story for another 2 years." I still fail to see how DBM is exempt from telling an actual story just cause of restraints. That's like if Shovel Knight turned out to be shit cause the Yacht Club Games used kickstarting, and were exempt from all true criticism since they don't have the same resources of AAA games. We look at the final product we're shown, the production doesn't matter and should not effect overall judgement.

So they see the weapon against Boo, then do NOTHING about it when another person with said weapon appears. If anything the match should have been immediately put on hold. But I guess it's either the crowd's fault being completely moronic and unrealistic, or the Vargas being brain dead imbeciles.

Guess there's no point in sticking around here. The mere thought of wanting actual story telling is like blasphemous for some reason. Fan service just doesn't work for me like it seems to for a number of others.
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by rereboy » Wed Jan 28, 2015 2:40 pm

dbzfan7 wrote:
Way to miss that I said DBM couldn't afford to do what other comics do.
Actually... I didn't as you can see here:
...even though you fully admit that its true that DBM has that constraint.
dbzfan7 wrote:My comparison wasn't saying DBM should be doing that, it's saying that's how comics get away with big scale stories. I think the Sonic comics have 2 lines to cover things. Main series and Universe. What DBM can do is have something fucking happening during the matches before them, or after them going on in the background. Like say if Freeza wanted to take over, he'd have his minions slowly acquire the technology of the Vargas. Not saying that should happen, but have something happen besides "Here's a flash back...now don't expect a story for another 2 years." I still fail to see how DBM is exempt from telling an actual story just cause of restraints. That's like if Shovel Knight turned out to be shit cause the Yacht Club Games used kickstarting, and were exempt from all true criticism since they don't have the same resources of AAA games. We look at the final product we're shown, the production doesn't matter and should not effect overall judgement.
DBM started in 2008. Its been going on for about 7 years and they "only" managed to get this far by NOT "wasting" time in further interactions, plot points and developments. I agree that it would almost certainly be better with stuff like that but that would make it be much longer. Hence, why I stated that it would take 25 years. Its simply not feasible because its a fan manga with its inherent contraints.
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So they see the weapon against Boo, then do NOTHING about it when another person with said weapon appears. If anything the match should have been immediately put on hold. But I guess it's either the crowd's fault being completely moronic and unrealistic, or the Vargas being brain dead imbeciles.
For the Vargas point of view, since they have the Dragon Balls they probably just rationalized that if something happened they could just repair it right away. As for the audience point of view, I agree that its kind of moronic but we have seen before in the manga the crowd at a tournament being almost hit by a Kamehameha more than once and choosing to stay nonetheless. Its a lighthearted manga after all.
Guess there's no point in sticking around here. The mere thought of wanting actual story telling is like blasphemous for some reason. Fan service just doesn't work for me like it seems to for a number of others.
Again with the attitude...? :|. You want to stay here only if other people agree with your opinion, is that it? Because nobody insulted you or was rude to you at all. All you got were other opinions with justifications.
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Post by dbzfan7 » Wed Jan 28, 2015 3:51 pm

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Way to miss that I said DBM couldn't afford to do what other comics do.
Actually... I didn't as you can see here:
...even though you fully admit that its true that DBM has that constraint.
dbzfan7 wrote:My comparison wasn't saying DBM should be doing that, it's saying that's how comics get away with big scale stories. I think the Sonic comics have 2 lines to cover things. Main series and Universe. What DBM can do is have something fucking happening during the matches before them, or after them going on in the background. Like say if Freeza wanted to take over, he'd have his minions slowly acquire the technology of the Vargas. Not saying that should happen, but have something happen besides "Here's a flash back...now don't expect a story for another 2 years." I still fail to see how DBM is exempt from telling an actual story just cause of restraints. That's like if Shovel Knight turned out to be shit cause the Yacht Club Games used kickstarting, and were exempt from all true criticism since they don't have the same resources of AAA games. We look at the final product we're shown, the production doesn't matter and should not effect overall judgement.
DBM started in 2008. Its been going on for about 7 years and they "only" managed to get this far by NOT "wasting" time in further interactions, plot points and developments. I agree that it would almost certainly be better with stuff like that but that would make it be much longer. Hence, why I stated that it would take 25 years. Its simply not feasible because its a fan manga with its inherent contraints.
dbzfan7 wrote:
So they see the weapon against Boo, then do NOTHING about it when another person with said weapon appears. If anything the match should have been immediately put on hold. But I guess it's either the crowd's fault being completely moronic and unrealistic, or the Vargas being brain dead imbeciles.
For the Vargas point of view, since they have the Dragon Balls they probably just rationalized that if something happened they could just repair it right away. As for the audience point of view, I agree that its kind of moronic but we have seen before in the manga the crowd at a tournament being almost hit by a Kamehameha more than once and choosing to stay nonetheless. Its a lighthearted manga after all.
Guess there's no point in sticking around here. The mere thought of wanting actual story telling is like blasphemous for some reason. Fan service just doesn't work for me like it seems to for a number of others.
Again with the attitude...? :|. You want to stay here only if other people agree with your opinion, is that it? Because nobody insulted you or was rude to you at all. All you got were other opinions with justifications.
Ok I seem to have missed that.

So we're supposed to overlook it's biggest short comings because of time constraint. That's the biggest load of bullshit. Guess I can excuse every fan comic ever because of possible job or school restraints instead of seeing the product for what it is. Well the Absalon guy might have some problems of his own behind the scenes so I guess we can excuse him of everything too. I don't give a fuck about DBM's production and constraints. Like anyone else they put out a story, and people check it out to see how it is. That's all there is to it. The production is just a reason to the shortcoming, not an exemption from it. Hell as others have pointed out the only thing the series has going for it is art. The comic would bomb hard without people like Gogeta Jr and Asura.

Ah yeah so guess that means it's ok to let people die, not put out any kind of warning, or something. Well so long as the DB's are around who cares if anyone dies right. Also no one in the DB tournaments understood what those Kamehameha's were. Here they saw people die.

I never said that. I ask for a story and you go "Well they can't because of restraints though that would make things better, so there's no point in getting wrapped up in the story. DBM is great." But yeah go ahead and say it's cause you don't agree with me and I'm unhappy some people don't agree. I don't know what you mean about "people". I can name some who don't agree with me, but also some who do. So no that's not it.

DBM is like getting a sick expensive looking sports car, then finding out the mileage is absolute shit. Sure it looks awesome, but in the end it's mostly all flash for the work put into said car instead of the important needs.
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Post by FoolsGil » Wed Jan 28, 2015 3:59 pm

Today's update...kind of unsettling.

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FoolsGil wrote:Today's update...kind of unsettling.
Yeah, that's... creepy.

Is this XXI's doing? I have a feeling we might see his true form.

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Post by rereboy » Wed Jan 28, 2015 4:34 pm

dbzfan7 wrote:Ok I seem to have missed that.

So we're supposed to overlook it's biggest short comings because of time constraint. That's the biggest load of bullshit.
No, we're supposed to recognize it as a problem that the fan manga has, but also recognize that its a problem that its pretty much unavoidable due to it being a fan manga and thus not really the fault of the people doing it.

In short, we are supposed to recognize that DBM is limited by its nature and, as such, obviously not have the same standards of demands that we have for works that aren't fan-made.

In regards to criticism, since the main point of criticism is to help things improve, repeated criticism regarding this aspect is pointless since its pretty much unavoidable. Instead of criticism, it becomes more like bashing it rather than criticizing it... which, by now, is what I'm convinced you are doing, because there's no other justification to your excessively long posts filled with examples and metaphors and the excessive use of foul language to colorfully illustrate what you are saying... If you were merely criticizing it, there would be no need to do that.
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FoolsGil wrote:Today's update...kind of unsettling.
Yeah, that's... creepy.

Is this XXI's doing? I have a feeling we might see his true form.
I read in the comments of the website that "Buu is about to learn the pecking order". I found that pretty funny :lol:
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by rereboy » Wed Jan 28, 2015 4:41 pm

*double post*
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