If this is unreasonable, then mods, please delete this thread or move this into the "fan-works explosion" thread as necessary.
Now, I have been on many internetz, and I have posted my arts on a plethora of websites, most of the time they go unnoticed, but other times, on certain sites, I request some critique or, constructive criticism if you will. Well, every time I do so, I get responses like "That is perfect, I love your art A+ thumbsuplol11!!!" or "Better than I can do, so I think it's good."
I post this here because I want some honest critique. Don't have to be super knowledgeable in art to criticize; see something you don't like? Feel free to state so! Think it outright suxxorz? You can believe that! Just state why you feel that way and how you think I could improve if possible.
Now on to the art in question.
For now, I only have this one that I drew specifically for this thread, and I must say that this is one of my better works. It took about 2 or so hours, and I did try pretty hard.
All of the tutorials/books/lessons I have referred to over the years have stated that you need to be able to draw lighting fast, so that is what I attempt to do every time. I feel that if I could take as long as I wanted, then I would be able to draw anything... (not only that, but I also have little time on my hands and I want to draw as many things as possible...)
Also, I am not very good at mimicking Toriyama-sama's illustrious art style, but I cannot imaging his characters any other way, so forgive plz.
Without further ado, here is my drawing:
CC plz.
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How did you achieve that effect?? 
