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EAFP's DBAF

Post by VeggieXD » Sat Feb 07, 2009 1:22 pm

Well, I'm in a group that is making a DBAF Manga. And we have just finished Chapter One, so I thought I might as well post it here.

EAFP's Dragonball AF

Chapter One


Page 001

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Chapter Two


Chapter 2

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Post by Drabaz » Sat Feb 07, 2009 1:39 pm

I actually liked like it. Very interesting since it's an AF manga with no Goku SSJ 25 or anything dumb like that. I like the new characters. The only problem I have is that everyone is wearing their fighting gi instead of regular clothes. Especially in school. Maybe if you guys designed a whole new kind of gi for these characters. It kinda feels like every descendant of Goku is always born along with a set of orange and blue gi.
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Post by MajinKing » Sat Feb 07, 2009 2:17 pm

I like it, drawings resemble akira's image a bit. That is a plus! Thank god their is no SS12 or something like that.
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Post by Innagadadavida » Sat Feb 07, 2009 2:24 pm

Not yet anyay. This is an AF comic. It's safe to assume there's an upcoming SS5.

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Post by SonEric84 » Sat Feb 07, 2009 2:52 pm

The artwork is very good. Seems like the story has the potential to be interesting too.
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Post by Drabaz » Sat Feb 07, 2009 3:20 pm

Innagadadavida wrote:Not yet anyay. This is an AF comic. It's safe to assume there's an upcoming SS5.
If this manga ends up having SSJ 5, I'll stop reading it. I'll probably even stop if it get's to SSJ 4. Don't let me down guys :wink:
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Post by Pain » Sat Feb 07, 2009 3:24 pm

Drabaz wrote:
Innagadadavida wrote:Not yet anyay. This is an AF comic. It's safe to assume there's an upcoming SS5.
If this manga ends up having SSJ 5, I'll stop reading it. I'll probably even stop if it get's to SSJ 4. Don't let me down guys :wink:
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Post by jda95 » Sat Feb 07, 2009 3:28 pm

I think the concept of the far future (and AF in general) is pretty tired. But I think your art style is nice so I might continue reading.

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Post by VeggieXD » Sat Feb 07, 2009 3:57 pm

Thanks for the awesome comments guys. If anyone wants a link to EAFP's dA or Forum just send me a PM.

Also the guy who has drawn this so far is Juraikken. Also, Drabaz, there will be an SSJ5, but you've got a long while until that happens. This is Season 1, and only Chapter 1. As far as I know SSJ5 doesn't come in until near the end of the last Season.

I'd rather not give out any more information as I would not like to spoil it.

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Post by MajinKing » Sat Feb 07, 2009 5:14 pm

No problem dude! I also already joined your forum a few weeks ago as majinking.
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Post by Forgotten Hero » Sat Feb 07, 2009 5:23 pm

That's really neat, but shouldn't all the pages be linked rather then showing them on the forums? I'm pretty sure that eats bandwidth and it would be a pain for shut down again.

Oh, question, why do the trees levitate?
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Post by jda95 » Sat Feb 07, 2009 5:28 pm

Forgotten Hero wrote:Oh, question, why do the trees levitate?
It's the future.

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Post by Cartman Blues » Sat Feb 07, 2009 10:16 pm

Hey! Is the comic gonna be like the YouTube episodes? :lol:
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Post by VeggieXD » Sun Feb 08, 2009 9:11 am

Oh yeah sorry, I'll link the pages instead. I forgot about the whole Bandwidth Problem. I really need to get used it to >.> The host we use has no Bandwidth limit, so I've been used to that for a while heh. Thanks for the reminder. Also, who doesn't like levitating trees?

And Cartman Blues, if you mean the Youtube episodes I did. Then I'm not sure, we might. But I'll have to talk to Scott to see if he could do more of the soundtrack. I don't want to ask him to do a lot as I know he has a lot of other stuff to do. (We are trying not to use any copyrighted material.)

About the story and things. I did not write the story, I didn't make the story board, nor did I draw the Manga. I work on video promos, posters, uploading the manga and videos, the website and the forum.

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Post by VegettoEX » Sun Feb 08, 2009 12:10 pm

Forgotten Hero wrote:That's really neat, but shouldn't all the pages be linked rather then showing them on the forums? I'm pretty sure that eats bandwidth and it would be a pain for shut down again.
That has nothing to do with the bandwidth of the server this forum is on. If the images are linked to a separate sever (which they are), our own forum is simply displaying the images using bandwidth from that sever.

That being said, clicky-link are nice :).
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Post by VeggieXD » Sun Feb 08, 2009 1:09 pm

Oh okay, well I linked them anyway so it won't stretch the page for people with a crap res.

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Post by Kingdom Heartless » Sun Feb 08, 2009 1:35 pm

Interesting. So how far off is chapter 2?

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Post by VeggieXD » Sat May 16, 2009 6:33 pm

Chapter 2 is up!

Updated the first page.
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