There's a distinct lack of scanlations around here D:
So in the final chapter, there's a slight text change? If so, is the previous translation done well enough?
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Re: Toyble DBAF [Sept 25, 2010] pg 175-191
Mmm... I don't think it was done good. I'll wait for Herms, I trust just and only in him!DNA wrote:There's a distinct lack of scanlations around here D:
So in the final chapter, there's a slight text change? If so, is the previous translation done well enough?
Re: Toyble DBAF [Sept 25, 2010] pg 175-191
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Re: Toyble DBAF [Sept 25, 2010] pg 175-191
Sorry for the long wait. I'm just going to re-post my translations of everything up to page 23 (with some random changes), so translations for the whole volume will be in one place. The start of page 24 is bolded and underlined so you can easily tell where the new translations start.
Page 3
Chapter Four: The Seventh Super Warrior
Page 4
Vegeta: [r] Hmph, Broli [l] So it really is you?...
Broli: Vegeta!!!
Broli: [r] Is…is this…the living world…?
Vegeta: [r] Hmph! [l] Of course it is.
Page 5
Memory-Goku: [r] I ain’t gonna let you get away with this [l] no matter what
Broli: UOOOOOOH…!!!
Vegeta: So, your memories of when you were killed are resurfacing, huh?
Page 6
Broli: [wait for it…wait for it….] KAKAROOOOOT!!!
Vegeta: Cheh
Broli: DAAH!!!
Gotenks: [r] Wa- [l] Wait a minute!!!
Page 7
Gotenks: [r] Broli! [l] Stop, stop!!
Vegeta: [r] …! [l] Trunks
Broli: [r] Who the hell…[l] are you?!!
Vegeta: I figured you were responsible for this...
Gotenks: [r] Eh? [l] N-no…hahahahaha!
Page 8
Broli: Don’t interfere!!!
Gotenks: Wah!
Gotenks: Hoh [same thing for the next few bubbles]
Page 9
Gotenks: [t] Take this! [r] Galactic Doughnuts!!!
Broli: Guh!!!
Gotenks: [r] Hm—mph! It’s just a little too early [l] for you to oppose me!
Page 10
No.17: Cheh
No.17: [r] Damn it…What did I do? [l] There’s hardly any animals around.
No.8: [r] The Earth’s been kinda funny for a little while now [l] Something bad has happened.
Page 11
No.8: Probably another battle has started…
No.17: Man, this planet just keeps getting into one pinch after another…
No.8: Aren’t these guys who are fighting your friends?
No.17: We’re just acquaintances. It doesn’t really matter…
No.8: But isn’t No.18 there too?
No.8: Aren’t you going to go help her?
No.17: I’m not gonna. It’s not like she’s looking for me or anything…
No.8: [r] That’s not true. You’re strong. [l] She’ll definitely need your help.
No.17: [r] You’ve got to be kidding, No.8. For her, I’m just the man who murdered her husband. [l] Obviously she’s going to hate me!
Page 12
No.8: That wasn’t your fault. No.18 must understand that.
No.17: Hmph! At any rate, she doesn’t know I was brought back to life.
No.17: If you want to go, you can just go on your own, No.8
Page 13
Bra: [r] … [l] Here’s some food!
Broli: Cheh
Bra: [r] You’re a Saiyan too, so you must be a real pig. [l] So be a good boy and eat!
Page 14
Bra: Kyaah!!!
Bra: Guh!
Broli: I’ll kill you!!!
Bra: [r] I’ll tell you right now!! [l] The era when you were strongest is long over!!!
Page 15
Bra: Nowadays anyone who’s Saiyan can became a Super Saiyan!
Bra: You’ve got no choice but to listen to what we say!
Broli: Guwah!!!
Bra: Kyah!
Bra: [r] Hmph [l] You see?
Page 16
Yi Xing Long: It looks like a Super Saiyan from the past has been resurrected through Polunga’s power…
Goku: A Super Saiyan from the past? Why’d they do that?...
YXL: Those on Earth are trying out the one method of reviving the dragonballs.
Goku: [r] Damn it [l] So either way, we can’t do nothin’ but wait for those dragonballs to revive?...
YXL: [r] That holds for we 7 dragons… [l] And you, Goku
Page 17
YXL: However…
YXL: [r] There’s one person here…[l] Who isn’t a resident of the Kaioshin Realm. [I think Toyble meant to write “Ryu’oshin Realm”, but I’m not sure]
Goku: [r] …? [l] Someone who doesn’t reside here?
Goku: Oh…
Paikuhan: [r] M--…Me?
YXL: *smirk*
Page 18
Paragus: [r] Alright Broli [l] You had better listen to me.
Paragus: [t] You must despise the royal family, who sent us into exile…As well as all other Saiyans besides you and me.
Page 19
Broli: UOOOOOH…!!!
Broli: GUAA----AH!!!
Broli: Haah haah
Broli: [r] Haah [l] Kakarot… [ ] haah
Bulma: Wait a—
Page 20
Broli: KAKAROOOOOOT!!!
Bulma: Kyah!!
Broli: Vegeta!
Vegeta: [r] Broli [l] You want to kill me, right?
Vegeta: [t] Well then, get stronger! [r] The way you are now, you couldn’t kill me, or even Trunks.
Page 21
Broli: Guguguh!
Vegeta: Come on!
Broli: Cheh!
Page 22
Bulma: [t] Now hang on [r] Hang on a minute here! Don’t you just go and break our house!
Broli: [r] Vegeta! [l] I’ll kill you, no matter what!
Vegeta: [r] Hmph [l] Just try it
Page 23
Bulma: [r] Wait a minute Vegeta! [l] Is it alright to let him go?
Trunks: Dad!
Trunks: Don’t tell me that Broli got away!?
Bulma: [t] No! [r] Vegeta let him go!
Trunks: [r] …Huh? [l] We need Broli to revive Goku-san!!
Vegeta: [r] How many times do I have to tell you? [l] We don’t need Kakarot. I’ll take care of that bastard Xicor.
Trunks: [r] Dad! [l] This is no time to say that…!
Vegeta: [r] It’s alright, just come Trunks [l] Let’s go to the gravity room.
Page 24
Trunks: [r] …It’s hopeless. [l] Forget Broli, not even dad will help us.
Waitress: [r] Thanks for waiting! [l] Here’s your Miracle Cream Chocolate Parfait!
Goten: [r] Palace-chan, I’m sorry! [l] A lot came up that day!
Palace: I hate people who forget their promises!
Goten: [r] But, I didn’t forget…[l] How to say this?...
Goten: [r] This bad guy came from outer space… [l] So…to protect Earth I fought him, and…Well, I got knocked out. That’s all!
Pan: Cheh
Goten: [r] Hah…Hahahaha [l] You’re really worked up…
Page 25
Palace: And then?
Goten: [r] Oh…Right. Well…How do I put this?...[l] The Earth’s still in danger, so…I don’t want to, but… To protect Earth…Vegeta-san’s forcing me to…Train for a while, so…
Pan: Just spit it out, Uncle Goten!
Goten: I…I know!
Goten: Hang on a second!
Goten: [r] Palace-chan! [l] The thing is, I…
Page 26
Goten: [r] I have to go fight that alien…[l] So I won’t be able to see you for a while!
Palace: Liar!
Goten: Huh?
Palace: That “alien” was just a cute little monkey!
Goten: [r] Huh? [l] Whah?
Palace: I didn’t look like it was doing anything bad!
Goten: [t] Oh, you mean that captured alien everyone went to see…? No no, this is totally different…
Palace: [r] I hate liars [l] More than anything!
Goten: [r] Huuh [l] But~
Page 28
Kid: Papa! Buy me that!
Dad: Oh, alright.
Kid: [r] Wahoo! [l] I love you, papa!!!
Dad: Hahah
Broli: Cheh!
Paragus: Quiet down, Broli.
Broli: Guaaaaaaaaaah!!!
Page 29
Paragus: [r] Don’t think. [l] Abandon all thought, Broli.
Broli: Stop…Please stop, dad!
Various small balloons: Ha’ah
Broli: [r] Trash! [l] Be gone!!
Paikuhan: So, you’re Broli huh?...
Page 30
Paikuhan: [r] Hmph [l] You’re looking pretty bloodshot…
Broli: What?! Who the hell are you?!!
Paikuhan: Well, it’s a long story…
Broli: [r] Don’t give me that crap! [l] Why are you here?!!!
Paikuhan: [r] Simply put…[l] I’m here to…Persuade you.
Broli: What?
Paikuhan: [r] We’re sorry to bring you back from the dead like this, but [l] You’ve got to help us revive Son Goku.
Page 31
Broli: [r] Son Goku? [l] You mean Kakarot?
Paikuhan: Yep.
Broli: Kakarot’s no longer in this world!?
Paikuhan: That’s right…
Broli: [r] Kukuku [l] Fuffuffuh
Broli: Fuhahahahah [l] So Kakarot’s dead, is he?!!!
Broli: [r] That means I just have to kill Vegeta [l] Then I’ll be the #1 Saiyan!!!
Page 32
Paikuhan: [t] No, the thing is…[l] Something terrible has happened…
Paikuhan: [r] So you’ve got to cooperate with us. [l] We need you to revive Son Goku.
Broli: “Revive Kakarot”?
Broli: [r] Hahhahhah! [l] Did you really think I’d help you do that?
Paikuhan: Well, we didn’t think you’d be that easy to convince.
Broli: I don’t understand how I’ve been brought back, but I’m doing things my way!
Broli: [r] *smirk* [l] First I’ll kill these annoying Earthlings!!
Paikuhan: [r] …Alright then. [l] Kill as much as you want…after you defeat me.
Page 33
Broli: [t] …Hmph. [l] Confident, aren’t you?
Paikuhan: *smirk*
Page 34
Paikuhan: Let’s change locations.
Broli: Why you--
Page 35
Paikuhan: Daah!
Page 36
Broli: Guh!!!
Page 37
Paikuhan: Why so frustrated?
Broli: Guh!
Paikuhan: [r] Is it hatred for Goku? [l] Or jealousy of Vegeta?
Broli: Shut up!!!
Paikuhan: Why do you hate your fellow Saiyans?
Broli: Guoooooooo!!!
Paikuhan: [r] Try asking yourself!! [l] What’s the source of your frustration!!?
Page 38
Broli: [t] Shut up!! Shut up!!!
Paragus: [r] Broli’s nothing but a pawn. [l] I’ll use him to become the new Saiyan king.
Paragus: Kukkukku
Broli (sound effect): Zukih
Broli: [r] Guh [l] Gahah!!!
Paikuhan: You know, don’t you?
Broli: [t] Kahah Kahah
Page 39
Broli: Shut up!!!
Paikuhan: Open up, Broli.
Broli: Daah!!!
Broli: [t] Shut up!!! [r] Shut up!!! [l] Shut up!!!
Page 40
Broli: Shu---ut up!!! [Various small balloons: Ha’ah]
Broli: Hey…Where…is Kakarot right now?
Paikuhan: Training in the Heavenly Realm.
Page 41
Broli: [r] … [l] Is…he stronger than you? [Two small balloons: Ha’ah, ha’ah]
Paikuhan: [r] Yeah [l] Vastly stronger.
Broli: …I see.
Broli: I’m only interested in fighting… [Balloons again: Ha’ah, ha’ah]
Paikuhan: Yeah.
Broli: [r] I’ll surpass Kakarot and Vegeta. [l] Ha’ah
Broli: [r] And then…[l] I’ll kill them with my own hand…
Paikuhan: …Is that so?
Broli: [r] My goal…[l] won’t change!
Page 43
Kame-sennin: [r] …and so, thanks to Paikuhan’s persuading…[l] Broli began opening himself up bit by bit…
Goku Jr: And? And?
Vegeta Jr: Then what happened?
Kame-sennin: Well well, the sun’s setting. Better leave off here for today…
Goku Jr: Huh!?
Vegeta Jr: Wa-Wait a minute!!!
Page 44
Goku Jr: I wanna know the rest!!!
Vegeta Jr: Grampa Goku hasn’t even appeared yet!!!
Kame-sennin: Sorry…Telling that story really wore me out. Go easy on me, I’m old.
Pan: Hey! Grampa Kame’s tired. That’s it for today. Time to go home!
Vegeta Jr: Cheh…Let’s go, Goku.
Goku Jr: …OK.
Vegeta Jr: But he said the story’d go on for “just a bit more”, and that was forever ago…
Goku Jr: Yeah, and then after he said “the main character’s Gohan now”, it ended up being Grampa Goku instead.
Vegeta Jr: Grampa Kame’s a real goof, that’s why…He’s probably gone senile…
Page 45
Pan: [r] They’re such brats. [l] Thanks for always putting up with them.
Kame-sennin: Well, I’m the last one left. It’s the only duty I have now.
Pan: Everyone’s gone over to the next world…
Kame-sennin: [r] I never did drink any “Elixir of Long Life”…[l] Pretty ironic that an old coot like me would be the last survivor…
Pan: [r]…[l] …Huh?
Page 46
Goku/Vegeta Jr: Wha-What the!!?
Bebidi: Hya---ahhahhah
Page 47
Bebidi: [r] My name’s Bebidi! Son of Babidi!!! [l] My father was killed here 100 years ago, and I’ve come for revenge!!!
Kame-sennin: Wha…What?
Bebidi: Alright Majin Pooh!!! Tear this planet apart!!!
Pooh: Po---oh!!
Page 48
Goku/Vegeta Jr: Haah!!!
Pan: Those kids…
Pan: Looks like we’ve got nothing to worry about!
Sunglasses sound effect: Chah
Page 49
Kame-sennin: Fuffuh…Goku…[l] This new generation’s coming along fine…
Kame-sennin: Maybe my job’s done?...
Pan: [r] Well done, you two. [l] You’ve gotten so strong.
Pan: Right, Grampa Kame…
Pan: Gramps!!?
Page 50
Kame-sennin: [r] Whe…[l] Where I am?...
Kame-sennin: Hah!!!
Page 51
KS: [r] It…It can’t be… [l] I…thought this place was long gone…
Kuririn: Muten Roshi-sama!!!
KS: Ku-Kuririn, is that you?!
Kuririn: Heheh
Kuririn: [r] Muten Roshi-sama [l]Thank you for working so hard for so long.
Yamcha: Muten Roshi-sama
Page 52
Yamcha: Thanks for all the hard work.
Puar: Ahah
Oolong: Good job, gramps!
Sea Turtle: Kame-sennin-sama
Bulma: Good job.
Lunch: Hmph!
KS: You…You guys…
Page 53
Gyumao: Muten Roshi-sama!!!
Gyumao: Time ta’ rest up!
Chi-Chi: Good job
Tenshinhan: Thank you for all your hard work.
Chaozu: Hahah
Gohan: Muten Roshi-sama
Gohan: Job well done, sir.
Mutaito: You’ve had some hard duties. Well done.
Page 54
KS: [r] Goh…Gohan. [l] Mutaito-sama…
Goku: Gramps!!!
KS: [r] Gok…[l] Goku!!!
Goku: [r] Grampa Kame-sennin [l] Thanks for everythin'. Rest up!
Page 55
KS: *smirk*
KS: Hey!
Goku: Gyah!!!
Goku: Ow! What’s the idea?!!!
KS: [r] This is no time to rest! [l] Your training’s not over yet!
Goku: Bu…But…
Page 56
KS: First, put on a shell and swim to the other shore and back 50 times!
Goku: [r] Geh [l] Now!?
KS: Of course! Get going!!!
Goku: Hiih!
Kuririn: [r] Hahah [l] Serves you right, Goku!
KS: What are you doing, Kuririn? This goes for you too!
Kuririn: Huh? Me too!?
KS: Watch out for the shark~
Goku/Kuririn: Gyaaaaaa!!!
Page 57
Everyone: Wahhahhahhahhah
Kame-sennin: Fohhohhohho [etc]
Page 58
Someone: [r] …amps! [l] Gramps!!!
Goku/Vegeta Jr: [r] Gramps!!! [l] Gramps!!!
Goku/Vegeta Jr: [r] Gramps [l] …Gramps!!!
Page 59
KS: Hey…Goku.
KS: That was one strange adventure…
Page 60
Goku: Sure was…
Goku: But it ain’t our era anymore.
Page 61
KS: Yeah…I’m a little sad…
Goku: What’re you sayin'?! The next world’s full of amazin' stuff too!!!
KS: …Are there hot chicks…?
Goku: Haha…Sure are!
Page 62
KS: [r] Wha…What? Really?! [l] G…Goku, take me there quick!
Goku: You never change, gramps!
Goku: Oh gramps, hang on a minute!
KS: …Huh? What is it?
Goku: I gotta give one last greetin'!
Page 63
Goku: [r] People of Earth, thanks for everythin'! [l] Well then! Bye-bye!
THE END
---It really is over---
Page 64
~Afterwards~
I had planned on putting volume 4 on sale this summer, but ultimately wasn’t able to finish it. Out of desperation, I threw in this final chapter, which I’ve already sold a number of times before. I’m so sorry. (*Of course, this is still a work in progress. It’s not actually the final chapter*)
I may not be very good, but I’ll keep on diligently doing the best I can. From DragonBall AF and Toyble, best regards.
Vegeta: Hmph, pathetic…
Page 3
Chapter Four: The Seventh Super Warrior
Page 4
Vegeta: [r] Hmph, Broli [l] So it really is you?...
Broli: Vegeta!!!
Broli: [r] Is…is this…the living world…?
Vegeta: [r] Hmph! [l] Of course it is.
Page 5
Memory-Goku: [r] I ain’t gonna let you get away with this [l] no matter what
Broli: UOOOOOOH…!!!
Vegeta: So, your memories of when you were killed are resurfacing, huh?
Page 6
Broli: [wait for it…wait for it….] KAKAROOOOOT!!!
Vegeta: Cheh
Broli: DAAH!!!
Gotenks: [r] Wa- [l] Wait a minute!!!
Page 7
Gotenks: [r] Broli! [l] Stop, stop!!
Vegeta: [r] …! [l] Trunks
Broli: [r] Who the hell…[l] are you?!!
Vegeta: I figured you were responsible for this...
Gotenks: [r] Eh? [l] N-no…hahahahaha!
Page 8
Broli: Don’t interfere!!!
Gotenks: Wah!
Gotenks: Hoh [same thing for the next few bubbles]
Page 9
Gotenks: [t] Take this! [r] Galactic Doughnuts!!!
Broli: Guh!!!
Gotenks: [r] Hm—mph! It’s just a little too early [l] for you to oppose me!
Page 10
No.17: Cheh
No.17: [r] Damn it…What did I do? [l] There’s hardly any animals around.
No.8: [r] The Earth’s been kinda funny for a little while now [l] Something bad has happened.
Page 11
No.8: Probably another battle has started…
No.17: Man, this planet just keeps getting into one pinch after another…
No.8: Aren’t these guys who are fighting your friends?
No.17: We’re just acquaintances. It doesn’t really matter…
No.8: But isn’t No.18 there too?
No.8: Aren’t you going to go help her?
No.17: I’m not gonna. It’s not like she’s looking for me or anything…
No.8: [r] That’s not true. You’re strong. [l] She’ll definitely need your help.
No.17: [r] You’ve got to be kidding, No.8. For her, I’m just the man who murdered her husband. [l] Obviously she’s going to hate me!
Page 12
No.8: That wasn’t your fault. No.18 must understand that.
No.17: Hmph! At any rate, she doesn’t know I was brought back to life.
No.17: If you want to go, you can just go on your own, No.8
Page 13
Bra: [r] … [l] Here’s some food!
Broli: Cheh
Bra: [r] You’re a Saiyan too, so you must be a real pig. [l] So be a good boy and eat!
Page 14
Bra: Kyaah!!!
Bra: Guh!
Broli: I’ll kill you!!!
Bra: [r] I’ll tell you right now!! [l] The era when you were strongest is long over!!!
Page 15
Bra: Nowadays anyone who’s Saiyan can became a Super Saiyan!
Bra: You’ve got no choice but to listen to what we say!
Broli: Guwah!!!
Bra: Kyah!
Bra: [r] Hmph [l] You see?
Page 16
Yi Xing Long: It looks like a Super Saiyan from the past has been resurrected through Polunga’s power…
Goku: A Super Saiyan from the past? Why’d they do that?...
YXL: Those on Earth are trying out the one method of reviving the dragonballs.
Goku: [r] Damn it [l] So either way, we can’t do nothin’ but wait for those dragonballs to revive?...
YXL: [r] That holds for we 7 dragons… [l] And you, Goku
Page 17
YXL: However…
YXL: [r] There’s one person here…[l] Who isn’t a resident of the Kaioshin Realm. [I think Toyble meant to write “Ryu’oshin Realm”, but I’m not sure]
Goku: [r] …? [l] Someone who doesn’t reside here?
Goku: Oh…
Paikuhan: [r] M--…Me?
YXL: *smirk*
Page 18
Paragus: [r] Alright Broli [l] You had better listen to me.
Paragus: [t] You must despise the royal family, who sent us into exile…As well as all other Saiyans besides you and me.
Page 19
Broli: UOOOOOH…!!!
Broli: GUAA----AH!!!
Broli: Haah haah
Broli: [r] Haah [l] Kakarot… [ ] haah
Bulma: Wait a—
Page 20
Broli: KAKAROOOOOOT!!!
Bulma: Kyah!!
Broli: Vegeta!
Vegeta: [r] Broli [l] You want to kill me, right?
Vegeta: [t] Well then, get stronger! [r] The way you are now, you couldn’t kill me, or even Trunks.
Page 21
Broli: Guguguh!
Vegeta: Come on!
Broli: Cheh!
Page 22
Bulma: [t] Now hang on [r] Hang on a minute here! Don’t you just go and break our house!
Broli: [r] Vegeta! [l] I’ll kill you, no matter what!
Vegeta: [r] Hmph [l] Just try it
Page 23
Bulma: [r] Wait a minute Vegeta! [l] Is it alright to let him go?
Trunks: Dad!
Trunks: Don’t tell me that Broli got away!?
Bulma: [t] No! [r] Vegeta let him go!
Trunks: [r] …Huh? [l] We need Broli to revive Goku-san!!
Vegeta: [r] How many times do I have to tell you? [l] We don’t need Kakarot. I’ll take care of that bastard Xicor.
Trunks: [r] Dad! [l] This is no time to say that…!
Vegeta: [r] It’s alright, just come Trunks [l] Let’s go to the gravity room.
Page 24
Trunks: [r] …It’s hopeless. [l] Forget Broli, not even dad will help us.
Waitress: [r] Thanks for waiting! [l] Here’s your Miracle Cream Chocolate Parfait!
Goten: [r] Palace-chan, I’m sorry! [l] A lot came up that day!
Palace: I hate people who forget their promises!
Goten: [r] But, I didn’t forget…[l] How to say this?...
Goten: [r] This bad guy came from outer space… [l] So…to protect Earth I fought him, and…Well, I got knocked out. That’s all!
Pan: Cheh
Goten: [r] Hah…Hahahaha [l] You’re really worked up…
Page 25
Palace: And then?
Goten: [r] Oh…Right. Well…How do I put this?...[l] The Earth’s still in danger, so…I don’t want to, but… To protect Earth…Vegeta-san’s forcing me to…Train for a while, so…
Pan: Just spit it out, Uncle Goten!
Goten: I…I know!
Goten: Hang on a second!
Goten: [r] Palace-chan! [l] The thing is, I…
Page 26
Goten: [r] I have to go fight that alien…[l] So I won’t be able to see you for a while!
Palace: Liar!
Goten: Huh?
Palace: That “alien” was just a cute little monkey!
Goten: [r] Huh? [l] Whah?
Palace: I didn’t look like it was doing anything bad!
Goten: [t] Oh, you mean that captured alien everyone went to see…? No no, this is totally different…
Palace: [r] I hate liars [l] More than anything!
Goten: [r] Huuh [l] But~
Page 28
Kid: Papa! Buy me that!
Dad: Oh, alright.
Kid: [r] Wahoo! [l] I love you, papa!!!
Dad: Hahah
Broli: Cheh!
Paragus: Quiet down, Broli.
Broli: Guaaaaaaaaaah!!!
Page 29
Paragus: [r] Don’t think. [l] Abandon all thought, Broli.
Broli: Stop…Please stop, dad!
Various small balloons: Ha’ah
Broli: [r] Trash! [l] Be gone!!
Paikuhan: So, you’re Broli huh?...
Page 30
Paikuhan: [r] Hmph [l] You’re looking pretty bloodshot…
Broli: What?! Who the hell are you?!!
Paikuhan: Well, it’s a long story…
Broli: [r] Don’t give me that crap! [l] Why are you here?!!!
Paikuhan: [r] Simply put…[l] I’m here to…Persuade you.
Broli: What?
Paikuhan: [r] We’re sorry to bring you back from the dead like this, but [l] You’ve got to help us revive Son Goku.
Page 31
Broli: [r] Son Goku? [l] You mean Kakarot?
Paikuhan: Yep.
Broli: Kakarot’s no longer in this world!?
Paikuhan: That’s right…
Broli: [r] Kukuku [l] Fuffuffuh
Broli: Fuhahahahah [l] So Kakarot’s dead, is he?!!!
Broli: [r] That means I just have to kill Vegeta [l] Then I’ll be the #1 Saiyan!!!
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Paikuhan: [t] No, the thing is…[l] Something terrible has happened…
Paikuhan: [r] So you’ve got to cooperate with us. [l] We need you to revive Son Goku.
Broli: “Revive Kakarot”?
Broli: [r] Hahhahhah! [l] Did you really think I’d help you do that?
Paikuhan: Well, we didn’t think you’d be that easy to convince.
Broli: I don’t understand how I’ve been brought back, but I’m doing things my way!
Broli: [r] *smirk* [l] First I’ll kill these annoying Earthlings!!
Paikuhan: [r] …Alright then. [l] Kill as much as you want…after you defeat me.
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Broli: [t] …Hmph. [l] Confident, aren’t you?
Paikuhan: *smirk*
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Paikuhan: Let’s change locations.
Broli: Why you--
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Paikuhan: Daah!
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Broli: Guh!!!
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Paikuhan: Why so frustrated?
Broli: Guh!
Paikuhan: [r] Is it hatred for Goku? [l] Or jealousy of Vegeta?
Broli: Shut up!!!
Paikuhan: Why do you hate your fellow Saiyans?
Broli: Guoooooooo!!!
Paikuhan: [r] Try asking yourself!! [l] What’s the source of your frustration!!?
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Broli: [t] Shut up!! Shut up!!!
Paragus: [r] Broli’s nothing but a pawn. [l] I’ll use him to become the new Saiyan king.
Paragus: Kukkukku
Broli (sound effect): Zukih
Broli: [r] Guh [l] Gahah!!!
Paikuhan: You know, don’t you?
Broli: [t] Kahah Kahah
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Broli: Shut up!!!
Paikuhan: Open up, Broli.
Broli: Daah!!!
Broli: [t] Shut up!!! [r] Shut up!!! [l] Shut up!!!
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Broli: Shu---ut up!!! [Various small balloons: Ha’ah]
Broli: Hey…Where…is Kakarot right now?
Paikuhan: Training in the Heavenly Realm.
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Broli: [r] … [l] Is…he stronger than you? [Two small balloons: Ha’ah, ha’ah]
Paikuhan: [r] Yeah [l] Vastly stronger.
Broli: …I see.
Broli: I’m only interested in fighting… [Balloons again: Ha’ah, ha’ah]
Paikuhan: Yeah.
Broli: [r] I’ll surpass Kakarot and Vegeta. [l] Ha’ah
Broli: [r] And then…[l] I’ll kill them with my own hand…
Paikuhan: …Is that so?
Broli: [r] My goal…[l] won’t change!
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Kame-sennin: [r] …and so, thanks to Paikuhan’s persuading…[l] Broli began opening himself up bit by bit…
Goku Jr: And? And?
Vegeta Jr: Then what happened?
Kame-sennin: Well well, the sun’s setting. Better leave off here for today…
Goku Jr: Huh!?
Vegeta Jr: Wa-Wait a minute!!!
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Goku Jr: I wanna know the rest!!!
Vegeta Jr: Grampa Goku hasn’t even appeared yet!!!
Kame-sennin: Sorry…Telling that story really wore me out. Go easy on me, I’m old.
Pan: Hey! Grampa Kame’s tired. That’s it for today. Time to go home!
Vegeta Jr: Cheh…Let’s go, Goku.
Goku Jr: …OK.
Vegeta Jr: But he said the story’d go on for “just a bit more”, and that was forever ago…
Goku Jr: Yeah, and then after he said “the main character’s Gohan now”, it ended up being Grampa Goku instead.
Vegeta Jr: Grampa Kame’s a real goof, that’s why…He’s probably gone senile…
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Pan: [r] They’re such brats. [l] Thanks for always putting up with them.
Kame-sennin: Well, I’m the last one left. It’s the only duty I have now.
Pan: Everyone’s gone over to the next world…
Kame-sennin: [r] I never did drink any “Elixir of Long Life”…[l] Pretty ironic that an old coot like me would be the last survivor…
Pan: [r]…[l] …Huh?
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Goku/Vegeta Jr: Wha-What the!!?
Bebidi: Hya---ahhahhah
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Bebidi: [r] My name’s Bebidi! Son of Babidi!!! [l] My father was killed here 100 years ago, and I’ve come for revenge!!!
Kame-sennin: Wha…What?
Bebidi: Alright Majin Pooh!!! Tear this planet apart!!!
Pooh: Po---oh!!
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Goku/Vegeta Jr: Haah!!!
Pan: Those kids…
Pan: Looks like we’ve got nothing to worry about!
Sunglasses sound effect: Chah
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Kame-sennin: Fuffuh…Goku…[l] This new generation’s coming along fine…
Kame-sennin: Maybe my job’s done?...
Pan: [r] Well done, you two. [l] You’ve gotten so strong.
Pan: Right, Grampa Kame…
Pan: Gramps!!?
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Kame-sennin: [r] Whe…[l] Where I am?...
Kame-sennin: Hah!!!
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KS: [r] It…It can’t be… [l] I…thought this place was long gone…
Kuririn: Muten Roshi-sama!!!
KS: Ku-Kuririn, is that you?!
Kuririn: Heheh
Kuririn: [r] Muten Roshi-sama [l]Thank you for working so hard for so long.
Yamcha: Muten Roshi-sama
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Yamcha: Thanks for all the hard work.
Puar: Ahah
Oolong: Good job, gramps!
Sea Turtle: Kame-sennin-sama
Bulma: Good job.
Lunch: Hmph!
KS: You…You guys…
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Gyumao: Muten Roshi-sama!!!
Gyumao: Time ta’ rest up!
Chi-Chi: Good job
Tenshinhan: Thank you for all your hard work.
Chaozu: Hahah
Gohan: Muten Roshi-sama
Gohan: Job well done, sir.
Mutaito: You’ve had some hard duties. Well done.
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KS: [r] Goh…Gohan. [l] Mutaito-sama…
Goku: Gramps!!!
KS: [r] Gok…[l] Goku!!!
Goku: [r] Grampa Kame-sennin [l] Thanks for everythin'. Rest up!
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KS: *smirk*
KS: Hey!
Goku: Gyah!!!
Goku: Ow! What’s the idea?!!!
KS: [r] This is no time to rest! [l] Your training’s not over yet!
Goku: Bu…But…
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KS: First, put on a shell and swim to the other shore and back 50 times!
Goku: [r] Geh [l] Now!?
KS: Of course! Get going!!!
Goku: Hiih!
Kuririn: [r] Hahah [l] Serves you right, Goku!
KS: What are you doing, Kuririn? This goes for you too!
Kuririn: Huh? Me too!?
KS: Watch out for the shark~
Goku/Kuririn: Gyaaaaaa!!!
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Everyone: Wahhahhahhahhah
Kame-sennin: Fohhohhohho [etc]
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Someone: [r] …amps! [l] Gramps!!!
Goku/Vegeta Jr: [r] Gramps!!! [l] Gramps!!!
Goku/Vegeta Jr: [r] Gramps [l] …Gramps!!!
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KS: Hey…Goku.
KS: That was one strange adventure…
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Goku: Sure was…
Goku: But it ain’t our era anymore.
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KS: Yeah…I’m a little sad…
Goku: What’re you sayin'?! The next world’s full of amazin' stuff too!!!
KS: …Are there hot chicks…?
Goku: Haha…Sure are!
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KS: [r] Wha…What? Really?! [l] G…Goku, take me there quick!
Goku: You never change, gramps!
Goku: Oh gramps, hang on a minute!
KS: …Huh? What is it?
Goku: I gotta give one last greetin'!
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Goku: [r] People of Earth, thanks for everythin'! [l] Well then! Bye-bye!
THE END
---It really is over---
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~Afterwards~
I had planned on putting volume 4 on sale this summer, but ultimately wasn’t able to finish it. Out of desperation, I threw in this final chapter, which I’ve already sold a number of times before. I’m so sorry. (*Of course, this is still a work in progress. It’s not actually the final chapter*)
I may not be very good, but I’ll keep on diligently doing the best I can. From DragonBall AF and Toyble, best regards.
Vegeta: Hmph, pathetic…
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Re: Toyble DBAF [Sept 25, 2010] pg 175-191
Wow Herms, thanks a lot dude!
I love what Toyble's doing with Broly, it actually makes me pity the character, and it's basically the same interpretation I had.
*I don't really like Mutenroshi's first line, I prefer the one he had before, it sounds more like closure than this one; the last one he was finishing a story, this one he's about at half of it.*
Actually, scratch all that, I re-read the previous one and it sounds like he's talking about the first fight with Xicor.
I love what Toyble's doing with Broly, it actually makes me pity the character, and it's basically the same interpretation I had.
*I don't really like Mutenroshi's first line, I prefer the one he had before, it sounds more like closure than this one; the last one he was finishing a story, this one he's about at half of it.*
Actually, scratch all that, I re-read the previous one and it sounds like he's talking about the first fight with Xicor.
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Re: Toyble DBAF [Sept 25, 2010] pg 175-191
I have a feeling that Broly will be like Vegeta when he was back on Earth after Freeza arc, with the goal of become #1 Saiyan. Then he will eventually settle on Earth with the feeling of inner peace, just like Vegeta is right now.
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Re: Toyble DBAF [Sept 25, 2010] pg 175-191
Thank you as always, Herms.
Re: Toyble DBAF [Sept 25, 2010] pg 175-191
Thanks Herms, very good job! It takes other two weeks to get DBZero Episode1 here at home, I hope you would like to translate it, it's just four pages. 
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Re: Toyble DBAF [Sept 25, 2010] pg 175-191
Great chapter as always, it's defenately my favorite Doujinshi, thanks Herms for the translations. 
Only four pages?macho_man wrote:Thanks Herms, very good job! It takes other two weeks to get DBZero Episode1 here at home, I hope you would like to translate it, it's just four pages.
James Teal (Animerica 1996) wrote:When you think about it, there are a number of similarities between the Chinese-inspired Son Goku and that most American of superhero icons, Superman. Both are aliens sent to Earth shortly after birth to escape the destruction of their homeworlds; both possess super-strength, flight, super-speed, heightened senses and the ability to cast energy blasts. But the crucial difference between them lies not only in how they view the world, but in how the world views them.
Superman is, and always has been, a symbol for truth, justice, and upstanding moral fortitude–a role model and leader as much as a fighter. The more down-to-earth Goku has no illusions about being responsible for maintaining social order, or for setting some kind of moral example for the entire world. Goku is simply a martial artist who’s devoted his life toward perfecting his fighting skills and other abilities. Though never shy about risking his life to save either one person or the entire world, he just doesn’t believe that the balance of the world rests in any way on his shoulders, and he has no need to shape any part of it in his image. Goku is an idealist, and believes that there is some good in everyone, but he is unconcerned with the big picture of the world…unless it has to do with some kind of fight. Politics, society, law and order don’t have much bearing on his life, but he’s a man who knows right from wrong.
Re: Toyble DBAF [Sept 25, 2010] pg 175-191
Yes, it was published as extra chapter with DBZero, consider it a little episode in wich there's explained a little secret.DBZGTKOSDH wrote:Great chapter as always, it's defenately my favorite Doujinshi, thanks Herms for the translations.
Only four pages?macho_man wrote:Thanks Herms, very good job! It takes other two weeks to get DBZero Episode1 here at home, I hope you would like to translate it, it's just four pages.
Re: Toyble DBAF [Sept 25, 2010] pg 175-191
StarRot, I'm sorry to ask but, do you have Chapters 1, 2 and 3? I'm probably not the only one who would thank better quality scans of those. I think Zero is pretty much done with good quality too.
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Re: Toyble DBAF [Sept 25, 2010] pg 175-191
I don't mind you asking, no worries.
A fair amount of people have asked me the same thing. At the moment I don't have any other doujinshi by Toyble, just volume 4 (I simply haven't got around to buying them, and when I do go to buy them I see much cooler doujinshi for sale and get those instead ...)
If/when I ever do buy them, I'll scan them.
A fair amount of people have asked me the same thing. At the moment I don't have any other doujinshi by Toyble, just volume 4 (I simply haven't got around to buying them, and when I do go to buy them I see much cooler doujinshi for sale and get those instead ...)
If/when I ever do buy them, I'll scan them.
Re: Toyble DBAF [Sept 25, 2010] pg 175-191
That's fair enough my friend, couldn't ask for more!
Re: Toyble DBAF [Sept 25, 2010] pg 175-191
Herms, please go checking the first speech (just the first, with the "ending !") from Gohan in the Special Chapter. I think it remained untraslated... 
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Re: Toyble DBAF [Sept 25, 2010] pg 175-191
Whoops, missed that one, thanks for spotting that. It's another "good job"/"you've worked hard" line (these are all variations on gokurou-sama). It's actually worded the same as Tenshinhan's line, but I'll phrase the translation differently just for the hell of it.macho_man wrote:Herms, please go checking the first speech (just the first, with the "ending !") from Gohan in the Special Chapter. I think it remained untraslated...
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Re: Toyble DBAF [Sept 25, 2010] pg 175-191
Thanks, you're still helpful, as always.Herms wrote:Whoops, missed that one, thanks for spotting that. It's another "good job"/"you've worked hard" line (these are all variations on gokurou-sama). It's actually worded the same as Tenshinhan's line, but I'll phrase the translation differently just for the hell of it.macho_man wrote:Herms, please go checking the first speech (just the first, with the "ending !") from Gohan in the Special Chapter. I think it remained untraslated...
Re: Toyble DBAF [Sept 25, 2010] pg 175-191
Where's desirecampbell? D: Go knock on his door until he wakes up!
Re: Toyble DBAF [Sept 25, 2010] pg 175-191
Woohoo! DBZero Episode1 is just arrived today! I'm gonna scan it!
EDIT: Here are the scans: these are raw scans, so edit and clean them as you find it useful!
http://www.megaupload.com/?d=1B5956XO
You know, it seems just a bit... comedic!
Thumbs up to Tullece's mother!
Just waiting for translation now.
EDIT: Here are the scans: these are raw scans, so edit and clean them as you find it useful!
http://www.megaupload.com/?d=1B5956XO
You know, it seems just a bit... comedic!
Thumbs up to Tullece's mother!Just waiting for translation now.
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Re: Toyble DBAF [Sept 25, 2010] pg 175-191
Heh, nice, looks fun. Pity that Tanipu doesn't make an appearance in any of the chapters.
Re: Toyble DBAF [Sept 25, 2010] pg 175-191
She will always be a mistery, it's not even confirmed that it is the real name of Goku's mother.DNA wrote:Heh, nice, looks fun. Pity that Tanipu doesn't make an appearance in any of the chapters.