Kanzenshuu

Heyo! This is my second foray into DBZ fanfiction after a long layoff. Since I was young, I loved what-ifs and fantasy forms and other wild things that couldn’t happen in the main Dragonball universe (for example, I used to be champion of Prillin/Puririn!) Dragonball Heroes certainly scratched this ...

Well, this story is back. I apologize for such a long delay. I started college and got a job, so I haven’t found much time to write. Luckily I’ve found time to write, so I can finally put my vision of this future Dragonball world into words and out for people to read. I hope you guys enjoy, and ...

DRAGONBALL NEXT: CHAPTER FIVE: The Two Incredible Warriors!! The Ending Is Near

[spoiler]Though the brightness had faded, and it had shrunk, Beat's white aura still swirled rapidly around his bulked up body. His skin seemed more tan, and the irises of his blue eyes seemed almost brighter, more ...

Anyone else have ideas that stretch the accepted "cannon" of Dragonball pretty far? I'm going back and forth on the possibility of Cell attaining a sort of bastardized Oozaru form As long as you can justify it cleanly, you can do basically anything.

...and I'd hope Cell's Oozaru would be more like ...

Anyone else have ideas that stretch the accepted "cannon" of Dragonball pretty far? I'm going back and forth on the possibility of Cell attaining a sort of bastardized Oozaru form
I thought the point of fanfiction was break it like Spoonavich broke Videl :D

As long as the explanation is ...

Anyone else have ideas that stretch the accepted "cannon" of Dragonball pretty far? I'm going back and forth on the possibility of Cell attaining a sort of bastardized Oozaru form

Selfishly, i'd like it to go on indefinitely, just because its new material in the Dragonball universe. I know that's ridiculous, but it is my selfish hope haha. But honestly, I see them either continuing until they reach the End of Z point, or possibly even going past that- and if they do, I haven ...

Would anyone be interested in a History of Goten one-shot? I've had the idea a while ago but didn't get to write anything, though I have some general ideas. It would be set in an alternate timeline where instead of 17 and 18, it's a rogue 16 devastating the world in search of Goku, unknown to him ...

I agree with FoolsGil on idea 2. It's more intriguing to focus on the children that are born from that.

Your fourth idea is interesting, in that it could be something similar to a technological version of the Old Kai's unlock ability.

Beat radiates Vegeta from ever pore of his body. And I really, truly do not see Gokan winning this battle. Beat's just to strong, to fast and also out paces him in skill. Also nice chapter as usual, not much to comment on this chapter. Except for how did Tien learn about the Instant Transmission ...

DRAGONBALL NEXT: CHAPTER FOUR: The Tenkaichi Budokai Final Bout Begins!! What Beat Has Hidden

[spoiler]Gokan tried not to concentrate on the sounds he heard, but that poor scrawny kid out there was for sure screaming in pain. He doubted it was anything too sadistic, but he felt as though Beat ...

writing combat isn't as easy as i hoped haha
It sure isn't. I'm about to have fun with three chapters of pure battle, myself.

Oh my. I'm not sure I'd be able to pull that off just yet, so I admire you haha. I'll need to get a lot more practice in before I feel comfortable doing a Goku-Frieza ...

DRAGONBALL NEXT: CHAPTER 3 : The Namekian Warrior Vs. Gokan! A Crushing Defeat?

[spoiler]Gokan elected not to watch the Namekian's fight; the young warrior hadn't honed his skills at reading another being's energy quite yet, but he could feel power radiating from the Namekian warrior. From his ...

writing combat isn't as easy as i hoped haha. Hopefully my third chapter will be posted tonight, then I'll take awroying break and I'll start reading everybody's fics and giving feedback now that I won't be constantly outlining stuff

I've gotten satisfactorily far into my outline for Dragonball Next. I'm just having trouble moving to my next arc to outline, and I've been thinking of doing a bit of a time skip similar to the Cell Games-Buu Arc time skip, but the arc previously doesn't end with the sort of finality Cell does ...

I've gotten satisfactorily far into my outline for Dragonball Next. I'm just having trouble moving to my next arc to outline, and I've been thinking of doing a bit of a time skip similar to the Cell Games-Buu Arc time skip, but the arc previously doesn't end with the sort of finality Cell does. Does ...

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I think these are two very sick men

I just have a stupidly retarded idea of having Sorbet's ring being incredibly important in my narrative. What do you think?

Well, it is an amazingly magical and strong device that defies all previously known logic, so may as well make something of it

Well I have an idea for it...

What did you ...

Gog wrote:I just have a stupidly retarded idea of having Sorbet's ring being incredibly important in my narrative. What do you think?

Well, it is an amazingly magical and strong device that defies all previously known logic, so may as well make something of it

I think my two favorites are the one handed Kamehameha against King Piccolo, and father-son Kamehameha against Cell. I remember being a kid obsessively watching VHS tales, and there was a flashback to Goku killing King Piccolo and it amazed me for some reason