Kanzenshuu

Well it's a great premise. Biggest questions you should answer, Why aren't the older, stronger Z Fighters getting involved? Imho, you need to get the kids off Earth. If they're on Earth there is no reason that anyone who can sense energy can't tell the kids are in trouble. Especially Goku and ...

I'm sorry if this thread has been done a million times but I'm currently trying to write a dragon ball story and I'd like to here general opinions on what I can do to make it unique or interesting.

The story is called Dragon Ball Tsu and it takes place 8 years after the end of Z. The main ...