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The anime only expands stuff so they don't catch up with the manga and it's questionable if they care about that. That is usual for anime like One Piece, but everyone knows Dragon Ball Super was a special case where neither anime or manga is the source material, but Toriyama's notes are. The point ...

I don't see why since this arc had a lot of padding that can easily be cut. I can probably cut this entire arc by at least six chapters. While I don't disagree with that, Dragon Ball (Super) is a continuous anime so they'll rather extend the scenes instead of cutting them. It's still uncertain if t...

It was a good climax to the final battle with Moro, but it should have been six chapters instead of eight. It makes sense Vegeta couldn't separate Moro from the planet with the power difference, but his actions allowed Goku to win. The Moro arc will most likely end next chapter, making this 25 chapt...

Here is the final chapter batch of Dragon Ball HM. I came up with the three artificial dimensions later on to give Hakuma and Mato a unique location to fight Potata in. I originally had the fusion split up in the middle of the second half of the fight, but that would be too similar like the previous...

We finally start the big war in this chapter batch of Dragon Ball HM. It has a standard set up with a battlefield that has four towers that Hakuma and Mato's allies need to destroy. I gave Cory and Endi the biggest challenge since they are the rivals and I wanted the old characters to have a comebac...

This chapter batch shows Hakuma and Mato reaching their final transformations. I wanted to show them going to Goku and Vegeta's time in the first saga for training, but I decided to feature it here. It was difficult to bring Whis' into the story with made up hax powers since he is interacting with m...

We have finally reached the big turning point of Dragon Ball HM with this chapter batch. There are the two parent and child showdowns and both are defining moments. The duo ending up in these locations was one of the first plots I planned since I began with this story. Chapter 289-291: https://www.d...

It's time for my own favorite event in Dragon Ball HM in this chapter batch. The confrontation between the two duos is the climax of the tests and it will shift towards stopping Potata. I could have extended Cory and Endi's flashback, but I decided to keep it compact. Chapter 271-273: https://www.de...

I'll have reached the first half of Dragon Ball HM with this batch of chapters. The tests are almost over and they have been the most difficult for me to write. I can finally go back to the regular pace and style of Dragon Ball where things are heating up even more. Chapter 253-255: https://www.devi...

I'm here once more with the next batch of chapters for Dragon Ball HM. I once thought about giving Hakuma and Mato all the tests, but I wanted to develop Cory and Endi too. I tried to give them the tests that would suit them the best and they would learn the most from. Chapter 235-237: https://www.d...

I have another batch of chapters ready for Dragon Ball HM. I could have made some tests longer, but I wanted to keep it 12 chapters for them all. That way both duos will have equal screen time, but some of them will be paced quickly. Chapter 217-219: https://www.deviantart.com/majinhopo/art/Dragon-B...

The story shifts to the tests for the dragon balls and those are based on other anime/manga series. I picked the most popular ones for several genres to make it more interesting and the names of the characters are parodies on who they reference. Here is the second batch of chapters for Dragon Ball H...

It is time to start the second saga in Dragon Ball HM which gives Hakuma and Mato new rivals and enemies. As promised, I will summarize the chapters I have uploaded on Deviantart this week right here. I'll do this every Sunday after I have uploaded three chapters a day the same week. Chapter 181-183...

I'm now finished with rereading the second saga of Dragon Ball HM and I'll take a short break from it this weak. I'll upload new chapters on Deviantart starting next Monday every day and I'll post an update in this topic every Sunday. I was hoping to get some feedback about the first saga last month...

I've been reading through these forums for years, so I'm excited to finally discuss the current DB material. Merus had a nice sendoff in this chapter, but he could have been a valuable ally later on if he survived. It looks like Goku will achieve MUI through rage, but I hope other emotions such as r...

Hello, people of the Kanzenshuu forums, My name is Majin Hopo and I used to read through the episode discussions of Dragon Ball Kai and Super and other topics for years. I started to write my own Dragon Ball story last year that was always at the back of my mind. I had a structure ready with some ke...