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I liked it. Great job. Keep it up!


Thank you! What'd you think of Gohan's progression so far?


He’s more heroic In the end. Sort of like canon gohan. I liked that you used the side characters more. Like tien, and others. And I liked that bojack was the villain.


Hey! Hope you are well ...

Hey everyone! It's definitely been a while since the prequel to this post, but I wanted to conclude this in order to fulfill my vision.


Here are the previous posts for context:

Where I explain it all: https://www.kanzenshuu.com/forum/viewtopic.php?p=1752409#p1752409

First saga (Bojack) post ...

Berserker1921 wrote: Sat Oct 01, 2022 5:46 am I liked it. Great job. Keep it up!

Thank you! What'd you think of Gohan's progression so far?

This post is in connection to my previous one: https://www.kanzenshuu.com/forum/viewtopic.php?f=6&t=47615&p=1752967#p1752967

You can read that for background information.

So here is the first of the two mini-sagas, The Bojack Saga (Influence will be taken from Far from Home ...

Berserker1921 wrote: Mon Sep 26, 2022 6:42 am This can be a fun idea. Hope to read about it fully when it’s done.

Thank you! I posted the first story just now. Check it out and let me know what you think!

Link: viewtopic.php?f=6&t=47646

Let me explain:

At the end of Infinity War and the Cell Saga, Peter and Gohan are found to be in heavily similar positions.

They’ve just overcome a dramatic battle to settle the fate of the world. Both held a great part in stopping it, one a bit more than the other.In the end, their worlds are ...

There are many things that can be said about this arc. A big criticism was how Gohan was written: Saiyaman, slacking off in his training, the random unlocking ritual, and all the build-up over nothing. Sure, Mystic Gohan had his hidden powers unlocked, but it was cheap. There was no struggle for it ...