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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by GalaxyBusterBuu » Sun May 16, 2021 1:32 pm

What!? What type of writing is this!? Broly, a saiyan, a race that can't even breathe in outer space without suffocating, can survive a black hole and not have his organs crushed to hell and back through the power of plot armour, yet Fused Buu can't!? What!? What is this?!? Fused Buu has a better chance of surviving this onslaught than Broly does when you compare abilities yet Broly is the one who comes out on top!? Eh!?

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by FoolsGil » Sun May 16, 2021 3:28 pm

Gonna be honest, figured they'd add one more page, lay it on extra thick...It's finally over.

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Post by Fionordequester » Sun May 16, 2021 8:58 pm

Skar wrote:
Sat May 15, 2021 8:12 pm
I can agree with that and thought it was beyond what a character in DBM could do. I don't know the science of it or how fictional characters that enter a blackhole survive when they don't have regeneration or a healing factor though tbh. If Salagir didn't think Broly could survive this but changed his mind then it might've only been after seeing more impressive feats in the official continuation. As in maybe it's okay for a fan comic to do this as long as they remain below what the official series has done. I could be wrong but I assumed Beerus could survive the destruction of the universe against SSJG Goku and when him and Champa fought and it threatened both universes. Like they were meant to show that he was so powerful that entire universes could've been collateral damage and he wasn't too worried about being caught in the blast.
Always a possibility—though I do dislike it whenever Salagir pulls the "OG series didn't always make sense either!" card (like when he mentioned Cooler surviving the sun into Movie 5). It seems like he uses that to justify shortcuts in his writing, sometimes...
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Kanassa » Mon May 17, 2021 10:40 am

I'm more in the camp of "I wasn't really questioning it until the story started actually trying to give a semi-scientific explanation."
When Super apparently shoves Goku down our throats:


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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Skar » Tue May 18, 2021 11:55 am

Fionordequester wrote:
Sun May 16, 2021 8:58 pm
Always a possibility—though I do dislike it whenever Salagir pulls the "OG series didn't always make sense either!" card (like when he mentioned Cooler surviving the sun into Movie 5). It seems like he uses that to justify shortcuts in his writing, sometimes...
Yeah I'm not a fan of this logic in any kind of work. If something was bad or didn't make sense in the original, I think it's best to try to avoid or work around it in a sequel. I do think some common fanfic tropes were avoided in DBM but I hope more thought is out into the story moving forward to avoid the low points we've had.

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Hypersayian » Tue May 18, 2021 1:21 pm

That last Broly special was horrible. I find it very dissapointing that we are getting two specials regulary now. Out of the last 7 chapters - 5 were specials. And while some are good - most are not. Unfortunately DB Multiverse started to lose it about 3 years ago with Babidi trying to take over.

The Broly wanking is bad
The Son Bra wanking was a fiasco
Ghast Carchol effortlessly subduing a SSJ3 Vegito is bs
Zen Buu somehow supposedly having surpassed SSJ3 Vegito is bs as well

The main story is treated as a sideshow and the whole Babidi trying to take over the tournament thing cost us an unnecessary 3 years. Pity.

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by theherodjl » Tue May 18, 2021 2:51 pm

Was Bra ever really that interesting of a character to justify turning her into the strongest female character in a major fanfic??? She was basically just a younger clone of Bulma when she appeared in GT and her half-Saiyan qualities were almost non-existent. Bra overall wasn't a drag on the story but she wasn't all that captivating either, she simply was there to show that not all Saiyan-human hybrids desire to train and get stronger. I personally like that premise more than making her a super strong Jekyll & Hyde-type fighter with a skewed sense of priorities.
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Post by goku the krump dancer » Tue May 18, 2021 9:44 pm

So who's actually left as competitors in this tournament?

1.Goku
2.Vegeta
3.Oob
4. Regular Pan (I think)
5.Bra
6.Zen Boo
7.Wizard Guy that beat Vegetto
8. Dr. Raichi
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Dbzfan94 » Tue May 18, 2021 10:32 pm

goku the krump dancer wrote:
Tue May 18, 2021 9:44 pm
So who's actually left as competitors in this tournament?

1.Goku
2.Vegeta
3.Oob
4. Regular Pan (I think)
5.Bra
6.Zen Boo
7.Wizard Guy that beat Vegetto
8. Dr. Raichi
Who else am I missing?
Gast, and I forget who else.

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Saiga » Wed May 19, 2021 5:50 am

goku the krump dancer wrote:
Tue May 18, 2021 9:44 pm
So who's actually left as competitors in this tournament?

1.Goku
2.Vegeta
3.Oob
4. Regular Pan (I think)
5.Bra
6.Zen Boo
7.Wizard Guy that beat Vegetto
8. Dr. Raichi
Who else am I missing?
Gast defeated Raichi.

If this is the quarter finals it should only be these 8 left.
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Jackalope89 » Wed May 19, 2021 12:16 pm

theherodjl wrote:
Tue May 18, 2021 2:51 pm
Was Bra ever really that interesting of a character to justify turning her into the strongest female character in a major fanfic??? She was basically just a younger clone of Bulma when she appeared in GT and her half-Saiyan qualities were almost non-existent. Bra overall wasn't a drag on the story but she wasn't all that captivating either, she simply was there to show that not all Saiyan-human hybrids desire to train and get stronger. I personally like that premise more than making her a super strong Jekyll & Hyde-type fighter with a skewed sense of priorities.
Well, that was the main universe one. But Salagir got it into his head, "hmmm, Vegito would still make Bra, so Bra would be super duper saiyan, instead of a regular saiyan!"

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Trouser » Wed May 19, 2021 12:49 pm

theherodjl wrote:
Tue May 18, 2021 2:51 pm
Was Bra ever really that interesting of a character to justify turning her into the strongest female character in a major fanfic???
No. She's actually very boring and flat character. Maybe it's on purpose, but I don't want to believe that Salagir wanted us to hate Bra. Something went bad along the way and it's now too late to change the course, especially when we know that everyone will forgive her crimes, which has zero sense behind it. Yes, Vegeta was forgiven too, but it took years to happen. It literally took five minutes for Bra.
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by TobyS » Wed May 19, 2021 1:20 pm

goku the krump dancer wrote:
Tue May 18, 2021 9:44 pm
So who's actually left as competitors in this tournament?

1.Goku
2.Vegeta
3.Oob
4. Regular Pan (I think)
5.Bra
6.Zen Boo
7.Wizard Guy that beat Vegetto
8. Dr. Raichi
Who else am I missing?
Ghast beat Raichi and he's perma dead.



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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Jack Bz » Wed May 19, 2021 2:34 pm

The contenders left/next fights are:

Goku vs Oob
Vegeta vs Cell
XXI vs Boo
Bra vs Gast

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by HeroR » Wed May 19, 2021 4:58 pm

At this point, I’m sure Salagir is basically writing a troll fic.
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by It_Is_Ayna_You_Flips » Wed May 19, 2021 7:34 pm

HeroR wrote:
Wed May 19, 2021 4:58 pm
At this point, I’m sure Salagir is basically writing a troll fic.
As all fanfiction should be.
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by theherodjl » Wed May 19, 2021 9:04 pm

Jackalope89 wrote:
Wed May 19, 2021 12:16 pm
Well, that was the main universe one. But Salagir got it into his head, "hmmm, Vegito would still make Bra, so Bra would be super duper saiyan, instead of a regular saiyan!"
Which is weird because 1/3rd of Bra's DNA comes from Goku yet she still looks exactly the same as the product of Bulma & Vegeta. They couldn't have drawn her with a few spikes of hair or a darker hair color to signify that she was slightly different from her main universe counterpart? IIRC, the Trunks from U9 has a tweaked appearance as a result of not being Vegeta's child so what's up with Bra?
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Jack Bz » Wed May 19, 2021 9:35 pm

theherodjl wrote:
Wed May 19, 2021 9:04 pm
Jackalope89 wrote:
Wed May 19, 2021 12:16 pm
Well, that was the main universe one. But Salagir got it into his head, "hmmm, Vegito would still make Bra, so Bra would be super duper saiyan, instead of a regular saiyan!"
Which is weird because 1/3rd of Bra's DNA comes from Goku yet she still looks exactly the same as the product of Bulma & Vegeta. They couldn't have drawn her with a few spikes of hair or a darker hair color to signify that she was slightly different from her main universe counterpart? IIRC, the Trunks from U9 has a tweaked appearance as a result of not being Vegeta's child so what's up with Bra?
It is strange that the two Bras look identical, but I think the logic is that Bra looks nothing at all like Vegeta anyway. She just looks like a different take on Bulma.

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by theherodjl » Thu May 20, 2021 4:34 pm

Jack Bz wrote:
Wed May 19, 2021 9:35 pm
It is strange that the two Bras look identical, but I think the logic is that Bra looks nothing at all like Vegeta anyway. She just looks like a different take on Bulma.
I guess Bulma's got the dominant genes in both relationships since either pair of Trunks & Bra resemble Bulma a lot more than they do Vegeta & Vegetto.
I wouldn't even be surprised if Bra's power comes from Bulma's temperamental attitude and anger and that Vegetto just happens to be the father. :D
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