DragonBall S fan-manga preview
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DragonBall S fan-manga preview
Here is the first couple of pages of my fan-manga: DragonBall S (Doragonbôru S )
http://photobucket.com/albums/c162/JetW ... 1cover.jpg
http://photobucket.com/albums/c162/JetW ... -Page1.jpg
http://photobucket.com/albums/c162/JetW ... -Page2.jpg
http://photobucket.com/albums/c162/JetW ... -Page3.jpg
http://photobucket.com/albums/c162/JetW ... -Page4.jpg
As you can see, my drawings aren't as good as they've become in later chapters. Too bad I don't have a newer picture to compare to these. And please tell me what you think.
http://photobucket.com/albums/c162/JetW ... 1cover.jpg
http://photobucket.com/albums/c162/JetW ... -Page1.jpg
http://photobucket.com/albums/c162/JetW ... -Page2.jpg
http://photobucket.com/albums/c162/JetW ... -Page3.jpg
http://photobucket.com/albums/c162/JetW ... -Page4.jpg
As you can see, my drawings aren't as good as they've become in later chapters. Too bad I don't have a newer picture to compare to these. And please tell me what you think.
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A lot of people. One of the Cell Jr's was only cut in half at the torso. It could have easily regenerated and ran away.Socar15 wrote:Interesting. I could have sworn I remembered someone else on this board mentioning they had written a fic that involved a Cell Jr. coming back, but I could be mistaken. Anyway, I'll have to see more in the future to have a valid opinion.
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Yea keep it coming, I wan't to see where this is going. It's coming along nicely.
And I too have seen a fan manga with a surving Cell Jr too, on DBArena I think...maybe you done that also?
And I too have seen a fan manga with a surving Cell Jr too, on DBArena I think...maybe you done that also?
My DB Fan manga:
viewtopic.php?f=6&t=19169 [The new version]
viewtopic.php?f=7&t=1942]Chapter 1
viewtopic.php?f=7&t=2685]Chapter 2
Photo's I've taken of the nearby neighbourhoods where I live in South London: http://www.flickr.com/photos/8306850@N08/
viewtopic.php?f=6&t=19169 [The new version]
viewtopic.php?f=7&t=1942]Chapter 1
viewtopic.php?f=7&t=2685]Chapter 2
Photo's I've taken of the nearby neighbourhoods where I live in South London: http://www.flickr.com/photos/8306850@N08/
Who cares. "Abusing" them goes against the very nature of the DBs, so what's the big deal about contradicting a contradiction?Mr. Robot wrote:Looks good, but wasn't the entire point of GT's ending that they had abused the power of the Dragon Balls? Wouldn't it be completely besides the point to create new dragonballs?
Captain Christopher Pike wrote:The away team will consist of myself, Cadet Kirk, Mr. Sulu, and Ensign Olsen.
The Geeky Gentleman: For all your comics, movies, TV and other geeky needs.Freeza Heika wrote: for the land of the cool, and the home of the Appule
Here are the next few pages (they are known as the flashback scene)
http://photobucket.com/albums/c162/JetW ... -Page5.jpg
http://photobucket.com/albums/c162/JetW ... -Page6.jpg
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http://photobucket.com/albums/c162/JetW ... -Page8.jpg
http://photobucket.com/albums/c162/JetW ... -Page9.jpg
http://photobucket.com/albums/c162/JetW ... Page10.jpg
And I just noticed, on that last page: Cell Jr.'s eyes look weird.
http://photobucket.com/albums/c162/JetW ... -Page5.jpg
http://photobucket.com/albums/c162/JetW ... -Page6.jpg
http://photobucket.com/albums/c162/JetW ... resize.jpg
http://photobucket.com/albums/c162/JetW ... -Page8.jpg
http://photobucket.com/albums/c162/JetW ... -Page9.jpg
http://photobucket.com/albums/c162/JetW ... Page10.jpg
And I just noticed, on that last page: Cell Jr.'s eyes look weird.
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Oh, darn. I thought this was going to be a fic about me
But it looks nice. Interesting plot, and totally better than I can draw (DBZ characters, anyway). Reminds me of the unused "What-If?" plotline used for the Saibaman (that fights on Namek and later becomes "The Great Saibaman")
But it looks nice. Interesting plot, and totally better than I can draw (DBZ characters, anyway). Reminds me of the unused "What-If?" plotline used for the Saibaman (that fights on Namek and later becomes "The Great Saibaman")
Battle High 2, starring Kyle Hebert as well as myself, has been released on Xbox 360, OUYA, PC, Linux, Mac, and Xbox One!
Have him get killed by Buu, since everybody Buu killed got revived. As for Baby, he could have hidden his PL when everyone was assimilated. The moon doesn't work as it's been perma-gone since Piccolo blew it up in the Saiyan saga.The Mole wrote:yes, throughout the time of Buu, Baby (bebi or however you want to spell it), Super Hell fighter 17 (that's what I call him), and the Shadow Dragons; he was busy training. When the Earth was destroyed both times, he simply trained on the moon (since it probably wasn't touched).
Another possibility is just have him leave the solar system altogether. He can survive in space because of Freeza's genes. What I did for my fanfic was have him fly to Freeza's homeworld, absorbing all aliens along the way in the same fashion that Imperfect Cell absorbed humans. After the huge boost and return home, the battle against the Z crew took place post-Buu but pre-28th budoukai.
Captain Christopher Pike wrote:The away team will consist of myself, Cadet Kirk, Mr. Sulu, and Ensign Olsen.
The Geeky Gentleman: For all your comics, movies, TV and other geeky needs.Freeza Heika wrote: for the land of the cool, and the home of the Appule
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In the flashback, you even got the eyes bugging out of #16's head. Now that is attention to detail. I like it too, and that part were the bird was flipping out about Cell Jr. being in the air was funny. Not to be critical, but I thought it was sort of amusing that Gohan looked high in this one. No offense I hope.
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You know, I thought that exact same thing when I first saw that.t-bone135 wrote:Not to be critical, but I thought it was sort of amusing that Gohan looked high in this one. No offense I hope.
Anyway, I thought the flashback scene was pretty good. Keep it coming.