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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by ParkerAL » Mon Sep 19, 2016 5:12 pm

Yeah, saying he hopes Vegetto doesn't do anything "rash" or "risky" would have been a better fit for Gohan's polite personality. Little details like this can go a long way towards making a character feel like him or herself in a fan work.
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Post by Regarder » Mon Sep 19, 2016 5:39 pm

They are translating from French though, remember.

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Post by FoolsGil » Mon Sep 19, 2016 6:28 pm

And personally, I don't think syntax can warrant OOC. OOC is actions, not speech.

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Post by Kamiccolo9 » Mon Sep 19, 2016 7:27 pm

FoolsGil wrote:And personally, I don't think syntax can warrant OOC. OOC is actions, not speech.
First, that's not what syntax means. Syntax refers to the placement of the words, not what words are used.

Second, what kind of nonsense is this? Of course speech can be out of character. If Goku were to beat up Freeza, and then proceed to go off on a tangent about how he's made the universe safe for free enterprise and expansion, that would obviously be out of character.
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by FoolsGil » Mon Sep 19, 2016 7:50 pm

Kamiccolo9 wrote:
FoolsGil wrote:And personally, I don't think syntax can warrant OOC. OOC is actions, not speech.
First, that's not what syntax means. Syntax refers to the placement of the words, not what words are used.

Second, what kind of nonsense is this? Of course speech can be out of character. If Goku were to beat up Freeza, and then proceed to go off on a tangent about how he's made the universe safe for free enterprise and expansion, that would obviously be out of character.
Yeah, well Gohan speaking plainly doesn't mean OOC speech.

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Post by HeroR » Mon Sep 19, 2016 9:46 pm

I don't see why Bra is having such a hard time with Super Saiyan. Gohan got anger once and got it. Trunks became a Super Saiyan off-screen in the manga and even in the special he trained himself to control Super Saiyan after Gohan died, and Goten and Trunks didn't even have to try and got Super Saiyan. Being a hybrid and the daughter of Vegetto, she should sneeze and turn Super Saiyan.
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Post by Fionordequester » Tue Sep 20, 2016 1:47 am

HeroR wrote:I don't see why Bra is having such a hard time with Super Saiyan. Gohan got anger once and got it. Trunks became a Super Saiyan off-screen in the manga and even in the special he trained himself to control Super Saiyan after Gohan died, and Goten and Trunks didn't even have to try and got Super Saiyan. Being a hybrid and the daughter of Vegetto, she should sneeze and turn Super Saiyan.
I don't think that's the issue. The issue is exercising self-restraint in her Super Saiyan; the same thing that she struggles with even now.
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Post by HeroR » Tue Sep 20, 2016 4:42 am

Fionordequester wrote:
HeroR wrote:I don't see why Bra is having such a hard time with Super Saiyan. Gohan got anger once and got it. Trunks became a Super Saiyan off-screen in the manga and even in the special he trained himself to control Super Saiyan after Gohan died, and Goten and Trunks didn't even have to try and got Super Saiyan. Being a hybrid and the daughter of Vegetto, she should sneeze and turn Super Saiyan.
I don't think that's the issue. The issue is exercising self-restraint in her Super Saiyan; the same thing that she struggles with even now.
She said in this chapter that she can't transform at will. She has to be angry.
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HeroR wrote:
Fionordequester wrote:
HeroR wrote:I don't see why Bra is having such a hard time with Super Saiyan. Gohan got anger once and got it. Trunks became a Super Saiyan off-screen in the manga and even in the special he trained himself to control Super Saiyan after Gohan died, and Goten and Trunks didn't even have to try and got Super Saiyan. Being a hybrid and the daughter of Vegetto, she should sneeze and turn Super Saiyan.
I don't think that's the issue. The issue is exercising self-restraint in her Super Saiyan; the same thing that she struggles with even now.
She said in this chapter that she can't transform at will. She has to be angry.
No one knows how the offspring of a fusion like Vegetto would exactly work. Gohan and Goten have the same exact parents and even they are noticeably different when it comes to reaching SSJ, accessing power reserves and so on.

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Post by FoolsGil » Wed Sep 21, 2016 2:14 pm

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...What a fool I was to sympathize for Bra. Bra wasn't locked up with Vegetto, he was locked up with her.

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Post by Anime Kitten » Wed Sep 21, 2016 2:27 pm

Nice to see Vegetto get owned for once. :D
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Post by nite_jay » Wed Sep 21, 2016 5:30 pm

Bra is one of those Angelica type characters it seems. Always written to be annoying, but never meant to receive their comeuppance. :cry:

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Post by ekrolo2 » Wed Sep 21, 2016 5:33 pm

nite_jay wrote:Bra is one of those Angelica type characters it seems. Always written to be annoying, but never meant to receive their comeuppance. :cry:
Yes, it's a pity there wasn't a fight up until now where her arrogance should have bitten her in the ass. No.... fight.... at.... all.....
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Post by Bansho64 » Wed Sep 21, 2016 5:42 pm

Wait, did Vegetto just give up? :lol:

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Post by coola » Wed Sep 21, 2016 6:11 pm

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Post by HeroR » Wed Sep 21, 2016 9:28 pm

FoolsGil wrote:Image

:wtf:

...What a fool I was to sympathize for Bra. Bra wasn't locked up with Vegetto, he was locked up with her.
Lol, Vegetto just rage quit. Don't blame him. If it was me, I would said 'screw up' after the first hour.
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Post by ParkerAL » Thu Sep 22, 2016 4:52 am

You know, even I'm starting to think Bra's impertinence is getting a little silly.
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Post by Scarz » Thu Sep 22, 2016 10:47 am

Surprisingly, I have bigger issues with with Vegetto's character than I have with Bra. There's more Vegeta in him than Goku. There's no balance or nice hints of Goku that's shown often. Maybe in a few gag panels here and there, but that's about it.

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Post by HeroR » Thu Sep 22, 2016 11:11 am

Scarz wrote:Surprisingly, I have bigger issues with with Vegetto's character than I have with Bra. There's more Vegeta in him than Goku. There's no balance or nice hints of Goku that's shown often. Maybe in a few gag panels here and there, but that's about it.
He did show more of Goku's personally when he fought Broly. But I do agree that Vegeta seems to be the dominant personality.
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Post by rereboy » Thu Sep 22, 2016 11:13 am

Scarz wrote:Surprisingly, I have bigger issues with with Vegetto's character than I have with Bra. There's more Vegeta in him than Goku. There's no balance or nice hints of Goku that's shown often. Maybe in a few gag panels here and there, but that's about it.
Well, Goku and Vegeta are opposite in certain things. For example, if Vegeta is impatient regarding something and Goku is patient, Vegetto, being a kind of middle ground, would still be impatient, only not as impatient as Vegeta would be, but the fact that he is still being impatient makes him seem more like Vegeta than Goku, despite being a middle ground.

In other words, Vegeta would have stormed off after less than a hour and Goku wouldn't storm off. Vegetto storms off after 2.5 days.

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