Dragon Ball Universe Zero (Fan Film)

[RaphTMNT]

Hey guys here is a dragon ball alt dimension fan video I put together

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gJiVNnU3yj4

[FoolsGil]

I liked the concept of the Saiyans coming because they needed an ally for a civil war.

All I really have to say is Keep working, keep finding ways to improve, don't let this be all you have to offer.

[RaphTMNT]

I liked the concept of the Saiyans coming because they needed an ally for a civil war.

All I really have to say is Keep working, keep finding ways to improve, don't let this be all you have to offer.

Thanks a lot, I'm always looking to improve:) Whether that be visuals, audio, camera angles, or just the overall quality. From your perspective what did you think was lacking or that could be improved with future parts. I'm always open to constructive criticism What I picked up on personally is the action sequences could be vastly improved, which includes the combat choreography and some of the special effects. Audio wasn't exactly perfect on every clip either. Any pointers or constructive criticism is welcomed, I'm still new to this all so anything helps. By the way I was also Ryukei in this

[FoolsGil]

I liked the concept of the Saiyans coming because they needed an ally for a civil war.

All I really have to say is Keep working, keep finding ways to improve, don't let this be all you have to offer.

Thanks a lot, I'm always looking to improve:) Whether that be visuals, audio, camera angles, or just the overall quality. From your perspective what did you think was lacking or that could be improved with future parts. I'm always open to constructive criticism What I picked up on personally is the action sequences could be vastly improved, which includes the combat choreography and some of the special effects. Audio wasn't exactly perfect on every clip either. Any pointers or constructive criticism is welcomed, I'm still new to this all so anything helps. By the way I was also Ryukei in this

When it comes to audio, redub over yourselves. Say the lines as you were outside, but later resay the lines inside as you use some good mics. Blue Snowflakes mics are really good.

When it comes to visuals, I'd suggest watch other live action movie makers and emulate them. Beatdown Boogie is one to pay attention to.

[RaphTMNT]

I liked the concept of the Saiyans coming because they needed an ally for a civil war.

All I really have to say is Keep working, keep finding ways to improve, don't let this be all you have to offer.

Thanks a lot, I'm always looking to improve:) Whether that be visuals, audio, camera angles, or just the overall quality. From your perspective what did you think was lacking or that could be improved with future parts. I'm always open to constructive criticism What I picked up on personally is the action sequences could be vastly improved, which includes the combat choreography and some of the special effects. Audio wasn't exactly perfect on every clip either. Any pointers or constructive criticism is welcomed, I'm still new to this all so anything helps. By the way I was also Ryukei in this

When it comes to audio, redub over yourselves. Say the lines as you were outside, but later resay the lines inside as you use some good mics. Blue Snowflakes mics are really good.

When it comes to visuals, I'd suggest watch other live action movie makers and emulate them. Beatdown Boogie is one to pay attention to.

Awesome, thanks a lot I'll check out those things out.